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Mecklenburg #1

The Missing

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The town of Mecklenburg has soured. People are missing, and evil is running amuck in this page-turning nightmare.

While investigating an incident 7000 feet deep inside the Duke Mining copper mine, Tom Porter stumbles across a doorway that transports him into a parallel world of hell. He wakes up hairless, bruised, and naked in a wasteland controlled by an insidious faction of people, led by Chief Sanders, Trashman, and The Preacher.

Tom journeys through this hell while searching for a way home as insidious men fight to stop him.

Follow Walter Pauls, Tom Porter, Charlotte Kane—her dog, Bran—and others as they discover supernatural forces eating the soul of this town. Follow Detective McKinney as he attempts to solve the mystery of the dead, the murders, and "The Missing."

This is a haunting tale of spilled blood in a town that God has forsaken. Why are people missing, and why do so many bad things happen in Mecklenburg?

First came Under the Dome, then came Desperation. Now there's The Missing by Olin Lester, to make you think twice about visiting small towns!

272 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 17, 2020

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17 reviews3 followers
August 24, 2020
Has potential

I liked the premise and found it interesting.

My issue is that the writing is very amateurish and the story flow a bit awkward and some points not thought out. Having said that, I think there is potential here. Some things could be polished up and elaborated on to make the story more complete.

I also think Mr Lester should consider taking a couple of English/writing classes to hone and improve his skills. A good editor would make a great difference as well.
Author 1 book2 followers
September 22, 2021
I tried. I honestly tried. If I have ever seen a book that needed an editor, at least a Grammer checker, this is it. It was a good premise, honestly. But by mid-point, it felt like 4 different premises, 18 main characters, and no connection between any of it. I understand mixing genres and storyline, but there is usually something coherent in those stories. I never found it in this one.
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215 reviews1 follower
March 11, 2022
This was another one I didn't know how to feel about. I don't necessarily mind gory and this book was...there was also urine and poop descriptions which while accurate (I'd pee my pants too if I was scared) just got old quick. Also played way too many games with my heart concerning the dog. This is a part of a series so now I gotta figure out if I want to continue it or not. 🤔
12 reviews1 follower
August 5, 2020
Definitely not my normal genre but I could not put the book down!
555 reviews8 followers
August 9, 2020
Great story! The storyline is so different. Now I'm looking for the next book, "After Death".
3 reviews
September 8, 2020
Great read.

Keeps you on the edge of your seat the whole time!! Leaves you wanting more of the story! Add to your reading list!
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31 reviews26 followers
January 30, 2021
Great book

Not the usual type of book I read but I could not put it down. Looking forward to the next one,
40 reviews1 follower
May 8, 2021
What I liked

The story has possibilities, but this kind of horror/fantasy/sci-fi just isn't my cup of tea. It needs some serious editing, too.
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390 reviews63 followers
October 13, 2021
I think I’ve found a new horror author! I was pleasantly surprised by this story An alternate reality in a Colorado mining town
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8 reviews
March 15, 2022
Great edge of your seat book. Do not see anything coming!
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820 reviews6 followers
September 21, 2024
hope there is more

The reason I didn't give this book the full 5 stars is because the author never fully explained everything. I hope more is explained in the other books.
1 review
July 18, 2020
Great book with an excellent story line and many well developed characters! Once I opened the book up I couldn’t put it down! I received an advanced readers copy.
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September 28, 2022
Action packed and vivid imagery

I loved how this booked grabbed my attention and would not let go until it was finished! Nice job Olin!
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