The town of Mecklenburg has soured. People are missing, and evil is running amuck in this page-turning nightmare.
While investigating an incident 7000 feet deep inside the Duke Mining copper mine, Tom Porter stumbles across a doorway that transports him into a parallel world of hell. He wakes up hairless, bruised, and naked in a wasteland controlled by an insidious faction of people, led by Chief Sanders, Trashman, and The Preacher.
Tom journeys through this hell while searching for a way home as insidious men fight to stop him.
Follow Walter Pauls, Tom Porter, Charlotte Kane—her dog, Bran—and others as they discover supernatural forces eating the soul of this town. Follow Detective McKinney as he attempts to solve the mystery of the dead, the murders, and "The Missing."
This is a haunting tale of spilled blood in a town that God has forsaken. Why are people missing, and why do so many bad things happen in Mecklenburg?
First came Under the Dome, then came Desperation. Now there's The Missing by Olin Lester, to make you think twice about visiting small towns!
My issue is that the writing is very amateurish and the story flow a bit awkward and some points not thought out. Having said that, I think there is potential here. Some things could be polished up and elaborated on to make the story more complete.
I also think Mr Lester should consider taking a couple of English/writing classes to hone and improve his skills. A good editor would make a great difference as well.
I tried. I honestly tried. If I have ever seen a book that needed an editor, at least a Grammer checker, this is it. It was a good premise, honestly. But by mid-point, it felt like 4 different premises, 18 main characters, and no connection between any of it. I understand mixing genres and storyline, but there is usually something coherent in those stories. I never found it in this one.
This was another one I didn't know how to feel about. I don't necessarily mind gory and this book was...there was also urine and poop descriptions which while accurate (I'd pee my pants too if I was scared) just got old quick. Also played way too many games with my heart concerning the dog. This is a part of a series so now I gotta figure out if I want to continue it or not. 🤔
The reason I didn't give this book the full 5 stars is because the author never fully explained everything. I hope more is explained in the other books.
Great book with an excellent story line and many well developed characters! Once I opened the book up I couldn’t put it down! I received an advanced readers copy.