Clumsy Calloway

by Laurie Lochs

Calloway

When I fell and broke my leg as a little boy, my entire world changed. The boys at school who used to be my friends laughed at me and called me names. I turned to baby things for solace.

But even pacifiers and toy rattles couldn’t wipe my fears completely. The only person who’s eve been able to help is my daddy Oscar. We’ve been living together for 3 months and he’s my knight in shining armor.

But everything changes when he invites me to live with him at Neverland Hills in Montana. He claims it’s a safe space for littles and daddies, but the boys there scare me. I know it’s only a matter of time before they make fun of my leg. They’re going to call me Clumsy Calloway, just like the boys at school.

I don’t want to be here, and I sure as hell don’t want to stay.

Oscar

When I invited my sweet boy to an exclusive age play ranch in Montana, I thought I was giving him the key to paradise. But one look at his face tells me my decision is bringing him hell on earth. He’s scared to make friends or play with the other littles, and I can’t help but worry they’ll make fun of him.

I need to make it better.

But poor Calloway hasn’t been honest with me about why he’s nervous, though I know it has to do with his leg. It causes him pain but he hasn’t told me how he broke it. How can I help when he doesn’t tell the truth?

One day, two of the littles on the ranch play a trick that causes Calloway to break down. He tells me the truth and my heart breaks for him. But I have a brilliant idea to help. It will make him just like the other boys and never worry about his leg again.

The only problem? I don’t know if my sweet boy will accept my gift, or if he’ll do what he always does and push me away.

Clumsy Calloway is a 21,000-word age play novella that follows 23-year-old Calloway and his daddy Oscar as they help Calloway overcome a tough experience from his past. Includes age play, steam, and a sweet daddy who will do anything for his boy. Guaranteed HEA.

This book can be read as a standalone although it’s richer to start with the first book in the series.

Genres: M M Romance

102 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 21, 2020

Reviews

[Laurie Lochs]

Hello everyone,
There's been an issue with the PRE-ORDER copy of Clumsy Calloway. Amazon is showing me the wrong file when I attempt to preview it. I'm trying to get this fixed before launch day (tomorrow) but I don't think it's possible. If you're considering purchasing this book, consider waiting until July 23rd or 24th -- The "correct" version that's gone through beta reading, line editing, etc. should be available then. If you DID pre-order Clumsy Calloway, I believe you can re-download the "official" copy when it's available (July 23rd I'm guessing). Again, I'm so, so sorry!!! This is a nightmare :( I'm uploading the correct file at midnight tonight to hopefully get it fixed ASAP. This message will also go out to my email list.

[Amber · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good addition to the series!

Clumsy Galloway is the second book in the Neverland Hills series. It was a good book. It wasn't as good as the first book, in my opinion. I like a little more separation between being in little space and then having sex. And it's just wrong when a little has a thought about having his daddy breed him. He's a little at this point he shouldn't be having those kinds of thoughts. The book also needed someone to proofread it. There were three instances where instead of daddy Joe or daddy Oscar it was Debbie Joe and Debbie Oscar and two instances where Callaway was talking with Nathan but he referred to him as Dennis when Dennis isn't there. I read this book using the Kindle Unlimited program.

[Sue Brown · Rating 4 out of 5]

Thank you for the followup to Nosy Nathan. This is another sweet story of new inhabitants, Calloway and his Daddy Oscar. I like the continuing theme of the series in that the daddies help their littles with issues that have negatively impacted their lives. I also like that there is the occasional tension between the inhabitants of Neverland Hills. I would have liked a longer story, but that just shows I was enjoying it.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Margaret · Rating 5 out of 5]

Calloway, with his Daddy Oscar, is the fourth boy to join Neverland Hills. This is a very cute, sweet story about a boy who is very clumsy and worries about being made fun of. I really liked how his Daddy helps him be more confident. I voluntarily reviewed an advance copy of this book.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Christine Stutzke · Rating 2 out of 5]

This book was all over the place. Time jumps that had you confused on where they were or what was going on. Most of the time was sweet and fluffy and then randomly they'd watch someone get a blow job in public. Or the boys were playing with each other's cocks in a bouncy house. Like, wth. Not finishing anymore of these.

[meep · Rating 3 out of 5]

I liked most of the characters and the story subject wasn’t super fond of the story line however. It was a good book

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[BookLover1990 · Rating 4 out of 5]

You cannot help but love this story. It is well written, has memorable characters and a plot that's engaging and draws you in. I wholeheartedly recommend this book.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Kathryn · Rating 4 out of 5]

Super sweet story that is extremely cute. This is a great sequel/ standalone addition to the Neverland Hills. This has likable characters and a great storyline.

[Dominic · Rating 2 out of 5]

🌽🌽 out of 5 🌽

This one was so much rougher than the first. Aren’t serial books supposed to get better? Eesh. It wasn’t bad but it was not good.

[Oley · Rating 5 out of 5]

Highly enjoyed this series! Wish more of his writing was on Kindle unlimited.