Nope! Nope! Nope! Nope! This is not what I expected and yearned for reading!
I don’t know how quickly I clicked the request button when I saw Victoria Helen Stone’s name and found the titles section on NetGalley! And as you may imagine, I gloated and gathered my friends to celebrate with an early happy hour at 9:30 a.m. in the morning.
I couldn’t wait to jump into her new thriller even though its blurb was a little evasive.
I read 100 pages, but nothing intriguing happened, so I thought this was a slow-burn thriller, so I decided to give it more chance.
I was introduced to Lauren, the heroine who moves to her 90-year-old grandma’s estate because her grandma had a stroke and could not live in this grandiose house by herself. She was adamant about leaving this place to her granddaughter with a reasonable mortgage payment deal.
Lauren was raised by her mother, Donna, who thought her grandma and father were dangerous people. She even testified against her father about killing a young waitress and put him behind bars. Later, her father was exonerated, got remarried, and started from scratch as soon as he left prison. Of course, Lauren formed a healthy family relationship with him and her grandma despite the worries of her mother.
The story is told by going back and forth between Lauren and Donna’s narrations: present time to read Lauren’s renovation plans, YouTube videos, and Instagram stalking of her ex, Bastian, which made me yawn and get bored to death.
We’re also moving back to 1985 to see the life of Donna, who just moved to Sacramento after getting pregnant, and Michael, who is the father, trying to divorce his wife, who is not mentally stable. Donna wants to trust the man, but we can hear the alarm bells from the beginning that he is not telling the truth about his marriage. This part is a little more intriguing, but it is still repetitive. Donna questions Michael’s motives, and Michael acts like a liar douchebag. Then she forgives him, and he does something unacceptable again. Oh! Too much unnecessary angst and more yawning!
Only the last %2 of the book gets a little faster and as soon as tension starts building, the book ends. Yes, it’s not even slow burn because nothing is burning or flaming about this story. It’s a women’s fiction. This is not a thriller. Mystery parts are already foreseeable from the first chapters.
I gave three stars for my respect of the author’s previous works. Don’t get me wrong. This is not a bad book. The flawed, unreliable characters, dysfunctional family dynamics, abuse, estranged mother- daughter relationship are well-told and developed but I was expecting something more exciting, riveting,action-packed after reading Jane Doe series!
So this is too light, action-less, flat, slow for my taste. I’m still looking forward to read more works of the author but unfortunately this is not my favorite work of hers.
Special thanks to NetGalley and Lake Union Publishing for providing me this digital arc in exchange my honest opinions.