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Follies and Nonsense: A Variation on Pride and Prejudice
Pressured into an arranged marriage by her parents, Elizabeth Bennet was absent from Longbourn for three years. Now a widow with a young son, she returns to Meryton to help her family where she meets Mr. Darcy and takes the young man to task for his unkind statements at the Meryton Assembly. As they meet and talk at tea, suppers and hunting parties, they discover common interests and form a friendship that grows into a warm regard. Miss Bingley causes problems immediately and then Mr. Wickham, Mr. Collins, and Lady Catherine arrive on the scene to compound complications. While Elizabeth hides her situation from Mr. Darcy, his habit of doing things his own way creates misunderstandings and trouble.
What will his reaction be when he discovers the truth about her situation?
What will his reaction be when he discovers the truth about her situation?
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Published July 15, 2020
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August 10, 2020
This is a long story much in need of an editor or even a proofreader would do. I have to agree with one other review which comments about Jane Austen's passages being thrown into the story and not really in a clever way as some other authors do.
The story begins with both Elizabeth and Jane having had engagements arranged but with one's fiancé and the other's husband dying while fighting Napoleon. Elizabeth bears a son who becomes an earl through various circumstances; death, birth order, etc. Strangely or not, Elizabeth wedding was a hushed up affair due to mourning for Jane's fiancé and gossips in Meryton wag as Elizabeth then goes away for 3 years and returns with a small child. Plus, Mr. Bennet is in Antigua straightening out an inheritance dispute for Jane SO Elizabeth doesn't want to put on a display about her wealth and her title. Complications,much?!
There are various threads in this story: one member of Elizabeth's husband's family breeds horses and Elizabeth opens up the stables at her son's estate as room is needed so E. is now in that business. Mrs. Bennet takes a much stronger hand in disciplining her daughter and we read of a much improved Lydia...who still complains and whines but is not let out into society. Bingley has a backbone in this story and Darcy finds himself (along with the Colonel) seeking other housing in Hertfordshire when B. confronts some of Darcy's behavior. Collins and Lady Catherine go even deeper with demands and assumptions while Caroline shoots herself (and her standing in society) in the foot by insulting a member of the peerage. "You did not just call an Earl a piglet?!"
The story dragged for me as much is made of daily visits, etc. We are even treated to a scene when two horses "get it on". (Not that it was really needed in the story, but it was worth a laugh.) Several people find themselves in serious financial problems while other take advantage of those over spending habits.
For me there was really no angst in this story. Events were predictable and happy endings came true. The most significant event was how Elizabeth kept secret who she really was, her wealth and her connections. Interesting when Darcy finally asks her who she really is.
I thought to myself that adding "and a bit of insanity" to the title would be appropriate.
The story begins with both Elizabeth and Jane having had engagements arranged but with one's fiancé and the other's husband dying while fighting Napoleon. Elizabeth bears a son who becomes an earl through various circumstances; death, birth order, etc. Strangely or not, Elizabeth wedding was a hushed up affair due to mourning for Jane's fiancé and gossips in Meryton wag as Elizabeth then goes away for 3 years and returns with a small child. Plus, Mr. Bennet is in Antigua straightening out an inheritance dispute for Jane SO Elizabeth doesn't want to put on a display about her wealth and her title. Complications,much?!
There are various threads in this story: one member of Elizabeth's husband's family breeds horses and Elizabeth opens up the stables at her son's estate as room is needed so E. is now in that business. Mrs. Bennet takes a much stronger hand in disciplining her daughter and we read of a much improved Lydia...who still complains and whines but is not let out into society. Bingley has a backbone in this story and Darcy finds himself (along with the Colonel) seeking other housing in Hertfordshire when B. confronts some of Darcy's behavior. Collins and Lady Catherine go even deeper with demands and assumptions while Caroline shoots herself (and her standing in society) in the foot by insulting a member of the peerage. "You did not just call an Earl a piglet?!"
The story dragged for me as much is made of daily visits, etc. We are even treated to a scene when two horses "get it on". (Not that it was really needed in the story, but it was worth a laugh.) Several people find themselves in serious financial problems while other take advantage of those over spending habits.
For me there was really no angst in this story. Events were predictable and happy endings came true. The most significant event was how Elizabeth kept secret who she really was, her wealth and her connections. Interesting when Darcy finally asks her who she really is.
I thought to myself that adding "and a bit of insanity" to the title would be appropriate.
March 31, 2021
NEW sub-genre
The story belong to a new small sub-genre. Lizzy has married an Earl who dies. Leaving her with a child who will be an Earl.
The story gallops along leaving some odd plot lines unresolved. A big deal is made of Lydia stealing from the servants and the family but we never see her steal anything and it’s never mentioned again.
The story has the feel of a mad British action comedy. Much like the movie “the Magnificent Men in their Flying Machines”. Lots of stuff happening, lots of gags and jokes, but no one is ever effected except some feelings are hurt.
I might have given it one more star if we had a scene of the infamous 200 geese being herded along through the Longbourn lands.
The horses in love scenario was a gem.
The writing...does not shine like a star but more like a candle in a slight draft.
The story belong to a new small sub-genre. Lizzy has married an Earl who dies. Leaving her with a child who will be an Earl.
The story gallops along leaving some odd plot lines unresolved. A big deal is made of Lydia stealing from the servants and the family but we never see her steal anything and it’s never mentioned again.
The story has the feel of a mad British action comedy. Much like the movie “the Magnificent Men in their Flying Machines”. Lots of stuff happening, lots of gags and jokes, but no one is ever effected except some feelings are hurt.
I might have given it one more star if we had a scene of the infamous 200 geese being herded along through the Longbourn lands.
The horses in love scenario was a gem.
The writing...does not shine like a star but more like a candle in a slight draft.
August 9, 2020
Wish it were better crafted
I do not understand why JAFF authors feel a need to incorporate Ms. Austen's text in their stories. It can be wonderful when it is done well and you say, "Oh! That sheds a different light on these words!" But when it is not well done, but done just for the sake of making some connection between this story and there original, it can be very jarring and the inconsistencies detract from the story. This is an interesting story that could be improved with fewer of Austen's words being added for no good reason. I don't quite see how the first two engagements were brought about, but I can accept them. And I like the confidentiality that Elizabeth maintains from us all. I like the handling of the arch enemies. I like the wrap up. But I could do without the misplaced and unneeded original texts.
I do not understand why JAFF authors feel a need to incorporate Ms. Austen's text in their stories. It can be wonderful when it is done well and you say, "Oh! That sheds a different light on these words!" But when it is not well done, but done just for the sake of making some connection between this story and there original, it can be very jarring and the inconsistencies detract from the story. This is an interesting story that could be improved with fewer of Austen's words being added for no good reason. I don't quite see how the first two engagements were brought about, but I can accept them. And I like the confidentiality that Elizabeth maintains from us all. I like the handling of the arch enemies. I like the wrap up. But I could do without the misplaced and unneeded original texts.
July 24, 2020
Fun story but in need of an editor
This story is long, a bit convoluted and very much, needs an editor, but it was fun. Elizabeth is a young widow with a child who hides her ties to nobility when she visits her family in Meryton and meets Darcy. The characters are all here, some, the same, some different, especially Mrs. Bennet, but it works. This may be an ESL author but the numerous errors make reading a challenge. The style is somewhat stilted but again, I'll give that to a language differential. Three and a half stars raised to four for effort and diligence to tie up all the loose ends.
This story is long, a bit convoluted and very much, needs an editor, but it was fun. Elizabeth is a young widow with a child who hides her ties to nobility when she visits her family in Meryton and meets Darcy. The characters are all here, some, the same, some different, especially Mrs. Bennet, but it works. This may be an ESL author but the numerous errors make reading a challenge. The style is somewhat stilted but again, I'll give that to a language differential. Three and a half stars raised to four for effort and diligence to tie up all the loose ends.
July 23, 2020
Good story, flawed by bad proofreading
I would have given this book a good 4-star rating even with a few proofreading misses, but there were just way, way too many to ignore, so I had to take a star away. That said, I really enjoyed the story. Elizabeth is a titled widow with a very young son, himself an Earl. Mrs. Bennet is more of a disciplinarian in this variation, while Mr. Bennet is in Antigua settling an inheritance for Jane. I really loved Mrs. Bennet.
The writer has a very good way of incorporating text from canon, and in some cases, giving the lines to a different character, yet still nicely melding them into the tale. He often has the main characters saying what we often wish they would say. Bingley is more assertive, for example, and his set down to Darcy was quite surprising. Good for Bingley! Elizabeth has a couple of set downs herself, but not to Darcy. Mrs. Bennet shows Collins to the door. Pretty priceless. Caroline is Caroline and eventually gets her comeuppance.
The book was different and I liked it very much. I hope the star deduction will be viewed as constructive criticism to encourage better proofreading in future. I do recommend this book and plan to read this author’s other work as well.
I would have given this book a good 4-star rating even with a few proofreading misses, but there were just way, way too many to ignore, so I had to take a star away. That said, I really enjoyed the story. Elizabeth is a titled widow with a very young son, himself an Earl. Mrs. Bennet is more of a disciplinarian in this variation, while Mr. Bennet is in Antigua settling an inheritance for Jane. I really loved Mrs. Bennet.
The writer has a very good way of incorporating text from canon, and in some cases, giving the lines to a different character, yet still nicely melding them into the tale. He often has the main characters saying what we often wish they would say. Bingley is more assertive, for example, and his set down to Darcy was quite surprising. Good for Bingley! Elizabeth has a couple of set downs herself, but not to Darcy. Mrs. Bennet shows Collins to the door. Pretty priceless. Caroline is Caroline and eventually gets her comeuppance.
The book was different and I liked it very much. I hope the star deduction will be viewed as constructive criticism to encourage better proofreading in future. I do recommend this book and plan to read this author’s other work as well.
December 3, 2023
This were many things I loved in this book. A sensible Mrs. Bennet, responsible Mr. Bennet, Elizabeth's higher status, Bingley's backbone, Darcy's decisiveness and handling of Caroline, Collins and Lady Catherine. Basically everything in the story especially the perfect pace set by a well written narrative.
October 30, 2023
Good story
Loved it, I like it when Darcy and Lizzy love each other from the start. Loved how the villains got their due. Mrs Bennett was surprising I liked her personality!!
Loved it, I like it when Darcy and Lizzy love each other from the start. Loved how the villains got their due. Mrs Bennett was surprising I liked her personality!!
September 13, 2020
Avid Reader
I have fallen in love with this writer's work. This the third novel that I have read so far. I enjoyed the fact that Elizabeth and Jane were so much stronger in the face of adversity and that their tragedies changed Mrs. Bennet for the better. She became a mother who cared about the felicity of her children instead of her own comforts. She made Lydia behave, so she didn't end up eloping with Wickham, who met a just end. Darcy refused to bail Lady Catherine out of financial trouble because she refused to listen and follow his advice. Collins thought that he could take Longbourn because Mr. Bennet was in the West Indies, but his unknown arrival squashed his attempts and ended with him being sent to Australia thanks to Elizabeth and Mr. Gardenier. Caroline was banned from everything and everyone connected to Lady Elizabeth Hamilton, Countess of Bailey because she called Elizabeth 's son, the Earl of Bailey, a squinty-faced piglet! Darcy made it clear that Elizabeth was his choice. Charlotte married someone other than Collins, Mary married John Lucas.
I have fallen in love with this writer's work. This the third novel that I have read so far. I enjoyed the fact that Elizabeth and Jane were so much stronger in the face of adversity and that their tragedies changed Mrs. Bennet for the better. She became a mother who cared about the felicity of her children instead of her own comforts. She made Lydia behave, so she didn't end up eloping with Wickham, who met a just end. Darcy refused to bail Lady Catherine out of financial trouble because she refused to listen and follow his advice. Collins thought that he could take Longbourn because Mr. Bennet was in the West Indies, but his unknown arrival squashed his attempts and ended with him being sent to Australia thanks to Elizabeth and Mr. Gardenier. Caroline was banned from everything and everyone connected to Lady Elizabeth Hamilton, Countess of Bailey because she called Elizabeth 's son, the Earl of Bailey, a squinty-faced piglet! Darcy made it clear that Elizabeth was his choice. Charlotte married someone other than Collins, Mary married John Lucas.
January 30, 2026
Fun and satisfying
Elizabeth is married to an earl's second son and has a male child before her husband is killed fighting in the army. Because her dead husband inherited from a maternal uncle who was an earl with an estate in Derbyshire, Elizabeth is a countess, and her son is the new earl. She returns to Longbourn with her son for a long visit, but conceals her title and wealth to avoid unwanted attention. Darcy insults her at the assembly in Meryton, but when Elizabeth treats him with compassion, he quickly learns that she's a woman worth pleasing.
I like this author. His characters are forthright, and the villains get spectacular comeuppances. We have a swoon worthy Darcy, and a strong and smart Elizabeth. The romance is lovely. Although the villains are a bit cartoonishly bad, the outcomes are satisfying. The Bennett family is more rational than in canon, with a reasonable Mrs Bennett. I deducted a star for editing and proofreading errors. There are enough to be notable. Other than that, the book is well written. I recommend it highly.
Elizabeth is married to an earl's second son and has a male child before her husband is killed fighting in the army. Because her dead husband inherited from a maternal uncle who was an earl with an estate in Derbyshire, Elizabeth is a countess, and her son is the new earl. She returns to Longbourn with her son for a long visit, but conceals her title and wealth to avoid unwanted attention. Darcy insults her at the assembly in Meryton, but when Elizabeth treats him with compassion, he quickly learns that she's a woman worth pleasing.
I like this author. His characters are forthright, and the villains get spectacular comeuppances. We have a swoon worthy Darcy, and a strong and smart Elizabeth. The romance is lovely. Although the villains are a bit cartoonishly bad, the outcomes are satisfying. The Bennett family is more rational than in canon, with a reasonable Mrs Bennett. I deducted a star for editing and proofreading errors. There are enough to be notable. Other than that, the book is well written. I recommend it highly.
August 28, 2020
The story has many enjoyable scenes and some interesting ideas, and could be pretty good with improved editing/proof reading I think. I particularly liked Bingley’s confrontation with Darcy, and in general the improvement of the Bennet ladies. Lady C, Mr Collins, and Miss Bingley are all comically ridiculous, which is quite fun. As it stands, the number and frequency of mistakes in the text make it difficult to concentrate on the plot.
It needs to be cut down somewhat and some passages need clarification, as the meaning isn’t always obvious. Scenes from the original are slotted in verbatim throughout, which sometimes works well and sometimes is awkward or even wrong (“she is about Miss Elizabeth Bennet’s height”). There are quite a few ettiquette errors, a number of spelling mistakes, and frequent use of Americanisms/anachronistic language. Many of the naming mistakes, usually for original characters (Lady H becomes Miss H halfway, or Smyth/Smith eg), happen within the same sentence.
There is much confusion, and I think some errors, in the backstory to Lizzy’s title, which detracted from the story for me. Almost no explanation is given in the first 25% of the novel and as her husband is the second son of an Earl it’s all very confusing. When the explanations are given, they are questionable.
Firstly I don’t think she is entitled to the title (willing to be corrected). Her title derives via her husband, who was said to be heir to an earldom due to being adopted by his maternal uncle the Earl of Bailey. First Elizabeth’s husband dies, then the Earl of Bailey dies, so the title passes to Elizabeth’s baby son Matthew. Elizabeth is never referred to as a Viscountess and it’s is not until the end that we learn her husband was a Viscount, but she is referred to often as the Countess of Bailey. As her husband died before becoming Earl, she was never a Countess (wife of an Earl) - she is the mother of an Earl. I am dubious that she was a Viscountess either for a few reasons. Hereditary titles cannot be inherited by adopted children. They can be inherited via the maternal line (though rare), but a nephew would be heir presumptive not heir apparent, and thus unlikely to be given the use of the courtesy title belonging to the earldom. And who would let a Viscount, heir to an earldom go off to die in a war?!
Secondly, no one knew her husband as a Viscount. So even if Lizzy was entitled to the title of Lady H, there is is confusion over her address because it is all supposed to be a secret. At the start Lady Mary needs to have the inheritance explained to her, and it is definitely unknown to the Bennets as later there is a “big reveal” scene with Jane. So if they all think Lizzy was married to a Mr, why would they call her Lady?! And how do they explain the Hamilton surname (her husbands maternal surname) if no one knows he is adopted/the Earl’s heir?
The titled backstory could, IMO, be easily and simply explained by the fact that Lizzy’s son inherited after his grand-uncle’s death. Lizzy is well connected as the mother of an Earl and the daughter in law of an Earl, but is still Mrs Hamilton herself. They would only need to keep her son’s inheritance secret, and could use the same justification about Mr Bennet’s absence. If her husbands family were not much discussed or known about in Meryton, especially as he died so soon after the wedding, it would be quite possible that Darcy and the Bingleys wouldn’t know of her connections - and it even allow Mrs F’s mean gossip to seem plausible. Which obvs is the point of tying the storyline up in knots in the first place. None of the important plot points are lost, but we cut out a significant amount of filler/confusion.
It needs to be cut down somewhat and some passages need clarification, as the meaning isn’t always obvious. Scenes from the original are slotted in verbatim throughout, which sometimes works well and sometimes is awkward or even wrong (“she is about Miss Elizabeth Bennet’s height”). There are quite a few ettiquette errors, a number of spelling mistakes, and frequent use of Americanisms/anachronistic language. Many of the naming mistakes, usually for original characters (Lady H becomes Miss H halfway, or Smyth/Smith eg), happen within the same sentence.
There is much confusion, and I think some errors, in the backstory to Lizzy’s title, which detracted from the story for me. Almost no explanation is given in the first 25% of the novel and as her husband is the second son of an Earl it’s all very confusing. When the explanations are given, they are questionable.
Firstly I don’t think she is entitled to the title (willing to be corrected). Her title derives via her husband, who was said to be heir to an earldom due to being adopted by his maternal uncle the Earl of Bailey. First Elizabeth’s husband dies, then the Earl of Bailey dies, so the title passes to Elizabeth’s baby son Matthew. Elizabeth is never referred to as a Viscountess and it’s is not until the end that we learn her husband was a Viscount, but she is referred to often as the Countess of Bailey. As her husband died before becoming Earl, she was never a Countess (wife of an Earl) - she is the mother of an Earl. I am dubious that she was a Viscountess either for a few reasons. Hereditary titles cannot be inherited by adopted children. They can be inherited via the maternal line (though rare), but a nephew would be heir presumptive not heir apparent, and thus unlikely to be given the use of the courtesy title belonging to the earldom. And who would let a Viscount, heir to an earldom go off to die in a war?!
Secondly, no one knew her husband as a Viscount. So even if Lizzy was entitled to the title of Lady H, there is is confusion over her address because it is all supposed to be a secret. At the start Lady Mary needs to have the inheritance explained to her, and it is definitely unknown to the Bennets as later there is a “big reveal” scene with Jane. So if they all think Lizzy was married to a Mr, why would they call her Lady?! And how do they explain the Hamilton surname (her husbands maternal surname) if no one knows he is adopted/the Earl’s heir?
The titled backstory could, IMO, be easily and simply explained by the fact that Lizzy’s son inherited after his grand-uncle’s death. Lizzy is well connected as the mother of an Earl and the daughter in law of an Earl, but is still Mrs Hamilton herself. They would only need to keep her son’s inheritance secret, and could use the same justification about Mr Bennet’s absence. If her husbands family were not much discussed or known about in Meryton, especially as he died so soon after the wedding, it would be quite possible that Darcy and the Bingleys wouldn’t know of her connections - and it even allow Mrs F’s mean gossip to seem plausible. Which obvs is the point of tying the storyline up in knots in the first place. None of the important plot points are lost, but we cut out a significant amount of filler/confusion.
September 29, 2021
A whole family affair
This has to be one of favorite Bennet family books. It paints a picture of the family prior to the meeting of Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley so well it has ch aged Mrs. Bennet (and as she is not my favorite character, I almost like her). Jane was engaged and lost her fiancé in the war prior to her wedding. Elizabeth married during this period and then loses her husband in the war. Seeing her daughters so unhappy changes Mrs. Bennet’s attitude about marriage. Mr. Bennet is away settling Jane’s marriage contract and the story begins.
Yes Collins is there and as bumbling as can be. Caroline’s superior attitude gets her trouble when rumors abound from a jealous neighbor. I enjoyed this story so much I reread it prior to giving my review. There is no unbelievable scenarios in this book, which makes it all that much better.
This has to be one of favorite Bennet family books. It paints a picture of the family prior to the meeting of Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley so well it has ch aged Mrs. Bennet (and as she is not my favorite character, I almost like her). Jane was engaged and lost her fiancé in the war prior to her wedding. Elizabeth married during this period and then loses her husband in the war. Seeing her daughters so unhappy changes Mrs. Bennet’s attitude about marriage. Mr. Bennet is away settling Jane’s marriage contract and the story begins.
Yes Collins is there and as bumbling as can be. Caroline’s superior attitude gets her trouble when rumors abound from a jealous neighbor. I enjoyed this story so much I reread it prior to giving my review. There is no unbelievable scenarios in this book, which makes it all that much better.
January 30, 2026
Engaging
Even though the book was riddled with errors, and some were quite distracting, the story was so good I did not even care.
Even though the book was riddled with errors, and some were quite distracting, the story was so good I did not even care.
January 6, 2024
RE-READ 01/2024
I think my honest review would be 3* although I previously gave this more. The plot is interesting but the errors are many. There are too many examples of original text being used which is not uncommon but the use is incorrect for the plot as written, for example Elizabeth is suddenly referred to as Bennet in order to match an Austen quote. Another example is the dialogue between Elizabeth and Darcy at the Netherfield ball. This has been recast to a much later ball but makes no sense at the later event.
There are too many errors to give this more than 3*. A good plot but editing urgently needed.
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First reading in 2021...
An enjoyable 3.5* read.
This is another interesting read from this author. Unfortunately there are too many typos as well as a couple of unnecessary plot distractions. Nonetheless it is an enjoyable read.
I think my honest review would be 3* although I previously gave this more. The plot is interesting but the errors are many. There are too many examples of original text being used which is not uncommon but the use is incorrect for the plot as written, for example Elizabeth is suddenly referred to as Bennet in order to match an Austen quote. Another example is the dialogue between Elizabeth and Darcy at the Netherfield ball. This has been recast to a much later ball but makes no sense at the later event.
There are too many errors to give this more than 3*. A good plot but editing urgently needed.
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First reading in 2021...
An enjoyable 3.5* read.
This is another interesting read from this author. Unfortunately there are too many typos as well as a couple of unnecessary plot distractions. Nonetheless it is an enjoyable read.
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March 24, 2023DNF. Not my style. Like another book by this author the story and dialogues contains too many unnecessary details.
July 23, 2022
I enjoyed reading this story - in the same way I enjoy eating a whole bag of oversalted chips sometimes.
Objectively, this story is not really worth the four stars I gave it. But subjectively it was. See the chips analogy. It's a lightweight story with practically zero angst and some amusing and some interesting parts.
The plot is simple: By the time the Netherfield party comes to Meryton, Elizabeth is the widow of a military man who inherited a title, with a toddler son; and Jane has had a fiancé die on her before they could wed, being also a military man.
So it's your average connected and wealthy Bennets who hide their wealth and connections trope.
Except the initial dislike part is deftly hindered, and the Darcy/Lizzy romance is as smooth-sailing as possible for them, with the added benefit of Lizzy's toddler taking a shine to Darcy.
The regrettable thing about this story is the fact that it needed a beta reader but never got one. It's a skeleton for a truly great story that didn't get filled out as it should.
The Americanisms and the spelling and grammar mistakes didn't bother me much, but the completely superfluous and/or inappropriate to the situation shoehorning of quotes from the original novel on the other hand, bothered me a helluva lot. Not to mention the impression one gets that the author got his knowledge on Regency customs and speech from other JAFF, and not even particularly good ones. That's annoying too. (For example, I really could have done without the author's poor attempt at changing modern colloquialisms into Regency parlance.)
There was the obligatory caricature characterisations of Caroline, Collins and Lady C, but it was amusing enough to not bother me much.
What I enjoyed most is the fact that it was Bingley who gave Darcy the "selfish disdain" speech here. In fact, both Bingley and Jane have grown a spine in this story that is just lovely.
What was annoying were the several separate strands of plot threads that were left to languish either unresolved or not used to their full potential. For example: Why make Lydia's wildness and kleptomania out to be a big thing when it gets dropped as soon as it's mentioned? What was the point in Wickham kidnapping Colonel Foster's mother-in-law-to-be if he and the poor woman was to be killed in a carriage accident almost immediately? Why the hell would he even abduct her just when he was under the impression that Darcy was about to promote his military career and hand him over Georgiana?
I also did not enjoy the West Indies/Antigua inheritance plot thread, not least because of the unfortunate implications that suggests.
It was lovely to read an improved Mrs Bennet's effects on the whole family though. And to see the relationship between Mr & Mrs Bennet to be true love match.
Not to mention Georgiana getting along with and fitting in with the rest of the Bennet girls.
And let's not forget the way Lady C and Collins are dealt with here that's rather fun.
I don't think that the story dragged on, I liked reading it well enough and don't regret the time spent. But I don't think I'm going to re-read it anytime soon.
I love junk food, especially chips. But not when it's oversalted that much.
Objectively, this story is not really worth the four stars I gave it. But subjectively it was. See the chips analogy. It's a lightweight story with practically zero angst and some amusing and some interesting parts.
The plot is simple: By the time the Netherfield party comes to Meryton, Elizabeth is the widow of a military man who inherited a title, with a toddler son; and Jane has had a fiancé die on her before they could wed, being also a military man.
So it's your average connected and wealthy Bennets who hide their wealth and connections trope.
Except the initial dislike part is deftly hindered, and the Darcy/Lizzy romance is as smooth-sailing as possible for them, with the added benefit of Lizzy's toddler taking a shine to Darcy.
The regrettable thing about this story is the fact that it needed a beta reader but never got one. It's a skeleton for a truly great story that didn't get filled out as it should.
The Americanisms and the spelling and grammar mistakes didn't bother me much, but the completely superfluous and/or inappropriate to the situation shoehorning of quotes from the original novel on the other hand, bothered me a helluva lot. Not to mention the impression one gets that the author got his knowledge on Regency customs and speech from other JAFF, and not even particularly good ones. That's annoying too. (For example, I really could have done without the author's poor attempt at changing modern colloquialisms into Regency parlance.)
There was the obligatory caricature characterisations of Caroline, Collins and Lady C, but it was amusing enough to not bother me much.
What I enjoyed most is the fact that it was Bingley who gave Darcy the "selfish disdain" speech here. In fact, both Bingley and Jane have grown a spine in this story that is just lovely.
What was annoying were the several separate strands of plot threads that were left to languish either unresolved or not used to their full potential. For example: Why make Lydia's wildness and kleptomania out to be a big thing when it gets dropped as soon as it's mentioned? What was the point in Wickham kidnapping Colonel Foster's mother-in-law-to-be if he and the poor woman was to be killed in a carriage accident almost immediately? Why the hell would he even abduct her just when he was under the impression that Darcy was about to promote his military career and hand him over Georgiana?
I also did not enjoy the West Indies/Antigua inheritance plot thread, not least because of the unfortunate implications that suggests.
It was lovely to read an improved Mrs Bennet's effects on the whole family though. And to see the relationship between Mr & Mrs Bennet to be true love match.
Not to mention Georgiana getting along with and fitting in with the rest of the Bennet girls.
And let's not forget the way Lady C and Collins are dealt with here that's rather fun.
I don't think that the story dragged on, I liked reading it well enough and don't regret the time spent. But I don't think I'm going to re-read it anytime soon.
I love junk food, especially chips. But not when it's oversalted that much.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 6, 2021
I really wanted to like this book. I have enjoyed this particular scheme of the secretly rich and titled Elizabeth in a few other variations. This plot is well laid out with a widowed Elizabeth returned to Longbourn. The assembly, the insult, the infatuation all occur. Collins is a rude pompous idiot, Caroline a petty whiny schemer. Wickham is a smooth cad who is not quite believed. Lady Catherine more of an ineffectual nuisance.
The problem is that there is too much narrator telling and not enough showing through dialogues. I like the use of letters to lay out some of the story.
The author can’t make up his mind whether the new steward is named Mr Smyth or Mr Smith. (That’s annoying) there a a few typos- the kind were autocorrect guessed the wrong word for the sentence. (Also distracting)
I think I like the plot because I love the fact that Darcy and Caroline both have their prejudices thrown back in their face by the discovery that this person that they think is not worthy actually has all the things that they think make a person worthy and yet they don’t recognize it when they see it. Making the very strong argument that character “counts” more than the superficial trappings of wealth and connection. After all it’s not. P&P if Darcy doesn’t realize that Elizabeth is worthy because she is Elizabeth.
So 4 stars for the plan of the plot, 2 for execution, averaged to 3.
The problem is that there is too much narrator telling and not enough showing through dialogues. I like the use of letters to lay out some of the story.
The author can’t make up his mind whether the new steward is named Mr Smyth or Mr Smith. (That’s annoying) there a a few typos- the kind were autocorrect guessed the wrong word for the sentence. (Also distracting)
I think I like the plot because I love the fact that Darcy and Caroline both have their prejudices thrown back in their face by the discovery that this person that they think is not worthy actually has all the things that they think make a person worthy and yet they don’t recognize it when they see it. Making the very strong argument that character “counts” more than the superficial trappings of wealth and connection. After all it’s not. P&P if Darcy doesn’t realize that Elizabeth is worthy because she is Elizabeth.
So 4 stars for the plan of the plot, 2 for execution, averaged to 3.
February 17, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation.
Pressured into an arranged marriage by her parents, Elizabeth Bennet was absent from Longbourn for three years. Now a widow with a young son, she returns to Meryton to help her family where she meets Mr. Darcy and takes the young man to task for his unkind statements at the Meryton Assembly. As they meet and talk at tea, suppers and hunting parties, they discover common interests and form a friendship that grows into a warm regard.
Miss Bingley causes problems immediately and then Mr. Wickham, Mr. Collins, and Lady Catherine arrive on the scene to compound complications. While Elizabeth hides her situation from Mr. Darcy, his habit of doing things his own way creates misunderstandings and trouble. What will his reaction be when he discovers the truth about her situation? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation.
Pressured into an arranged marriage by her parents, Elizabeth Bennet was absent from Longbourn for three years. Now a widow with a young son, she returns to Meryton to help her family where she meets Mr. Darcy and takes the young man to task for his unkind statements at the Meryton Assembly. As they meet and talk at tea, suppers and hunting parties, they discover common interests and form a friendship that grows into a warm regard.
Miss Bingley causes problems immediately and then Mr. Wickham, Mr. Collins, and Lady Catherine arrive on the scene to compound complications. While Elizabeth hides her situation from Mr. Darcy, his habit of doing things his own way creates misunderstandings and trouble. What will his reaction be when he discovers the truth about her situation? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
April 2, 2024
A Treat 4.5 Stars
I found this book pretty enjoyable. Initially, I assumed it would be a farce based on the title, so I had passed on it a few times. However, I am glad I eventually decided to give it a chance.
What I liked:
- The characters. Many of them are an improved version of themselves.
- While I wouldn't classify this book as a romantic, lovey-dovey story, I still found the telling satisfying.
- The storytelling was well done. I was pleasantly surprised that I didn't need everything described in great detail (dresses, hairstyles, decorations, scenery...) for my imagination to take flight. Instead, I found that facts casually mentioned about how or why things were done were enough to transport to that period.
- I'm not comparing the two, but I have never been more interested in horses since reading Dick Francis' book 'Straight.' I was fascinated by the different types of horses needed and the upkeep involved in maintaining them. I don't know if I am a minority here, but I loved those details.
* The last scene with Collins did justice to the title. I believe anything involving Collins and Lady Catherine will do that.
I found this book pretty enjoyable. Initially, I assumed it would be a farce based on the title, so I had passed on it a few times. However, I am glad I eventually decided to give it a chance.
What I liked:
- The characters. Many of them are an improved version of themselves.
- While I wouldn't classify this book as a romantic, lovey-dovey story, I still found the telling satisfying.
- The storytelling was well done. I was pleasantly surprised that I didn't need everything described in great detail (dresses, hairstyles, decorations, scenery...) for my imagination to take flight. Instead, I found that facts casually mentioned about how or why things were done were enough to transport to that period.
- I'm not comparing the two, but I have never been more interested in horses since reading Dick Francis' book 'Straight.' I was fascinated by the different types of horses needed and the upkeep involved in maintaining them. I don't know if I am a minority here, but I loved those details.
* The last scene with Collins did justice to the title. I believe anything involving Collins and Lady Catherine will do that.
April 1, 2022
A wonderful fun read
One of the author's best.
Competently written with canon/fanon consistent character personalities - for the most part (and where not, well explained), this variation is particularly entertaining. The dry humor and wry twists were wonderfully engaging. Stayed up all night to read in one sitting. All The key characters are present and dealt with in some very interesting way. Additional characters round out the story well.
Cannot give the ebook 5 stars, though, because whomever is responsible for publishing this author's works does so without proofreading and copy editing. The misspellings, wrong words (or names) or word order, extra words inserted that throw off sentence structure and meaning, etc., heavily detract from the experience. In this case, the content is worth the patience of ignoring that part which is unprofessional. Might have felt differently had this book been purchased instead of borrowed.
One of the author's best.
Competently written with canon/fanon consistent character personalities - for the most part (and where not, well explained), this variation is particularly entertaining. The dry humor and wry twists were wonderfully engaging. Stayed up all night to read in one sitting. All The key characters are present and dealt with in some very interesting way. Additional characters round out the story well.
Cannot give the ebook 5 stars, though, because whomever is responsible for publishing this author's works does so without proofreading and copy editing. The misspellings, wrong words (or names) or word order, extra words inserted that throw off sentence structure and meaning, etc., heavily detract from the experience. In this case, the content is worth the patience of ignoring that part which is unprofessional. Might have felt differently had this book been purchased instead of borrowed.
December 11, 2020
Loved every word!
It started off with Lizzy having lost husband in the war with France and raising their child that he never knew. She returns home to Longbourn after a 3 year absence and only reveals her title to her beloved sister Jane. Lady Elizabeth, Countess of Bailey and mother the next Earl of Bailey , comes home for an extended visit and finds things much changed. Her father has been absent from Longbourn for almost a year and Jane and Mary have been managing the estate. When the 2 eldest sisters meet the gentlemen of Netherfield, they do so as more mature young women each with a pasted. They suffer the scorn of Caroline Bingley, the rumor and scandal of a gossip I’m Merton and as always, the ridiculousness of their cousin Collins.
As I said, I loved every word and highly recommend it.
It started off with Lizzy having lost husband in the war with France and raising their child that he never knew. She returns home to Longbourn after a 3 year absence and only reveals her title to her beloved sister Jane. Lady Elizabeth, Countess of Bailey and mother the next Earl of Bailey , comes home for an extended visit and finds things much changed. Her father has been absent from Longbourn for almost a year and Jane and Mary have been managing the estate. When the 2 eldest sisters meet the gentlemen of Netherfield, they do so as more mature young women each with a pasted. They suffer the scorn of Caroline Bingley, the rumor and scandal of a gossip I’m Merton and as always, the ridiculousness of their cousin Collins.
As I said, I loved every word and highly recommend it.
June 5, 2021
Ok, just!
This was better than 'Lost Souls' but only just. This author seems to have an obsession with ladies sewing! They're either sewing shirts for the poor and needy, making dresses and mending dresses or generally mending stuff.
I thought the mention of Darcy's stallion sniffing a mare in heat, twice, was twice too many and then followed by Lydia and Kitty watching them 'at it' in the field was extraneous and of no value to the story.
Other reviewers have mentioned the oddity of Wickham running off, so I won't go into that and Caroline was so OTT that she was unbelievable!
Having said all that I thought this book was better written than 'Lost Souls ' and a better storyline. I bought the two books at the same time and regretted it after reading the first one but I did enjoy this one better than I expected in spite of the above niggles.
This was better than 'Lost Souls' but only just. This author seems to have an obsession with ladies sewing! They're either sewing shirts for the poor and needy, making dresses and mending dresses or generally mending stuff.
I thought the mention of Darcy's stallion sniffing a mare in heat, twice, was twice too many and then followed by Lydia and Kitty watching them 'at it' in the field was extraneous and of no value to the story.
Other reviewers have mentioned the oddity of Wickham running off, so I won't go into that and Caroline was so OTT that she was unbelievable!
Having said all that I thought this book was better written than 'Lost Souls ' and a better storyline. I bought the two books at the same time and regretted it after reading the first one but I did enjoy this one better than I expected in spite of the above niggles.
September 18, 2020
New story; interesting plot
This story really is quite entertaining, but needs editing throughout. “Pen” money vs. “pin” money is an error throughout the four books I’ve just completed by this author. There are many other errors, somewhat annoying, however, the four stories are fresh, different and entertaining. I love that Caroline in this story well and truly does herself most soundly horrid; quite amusing. I would have given this a 4.5, but Amazon doesn’t allow it! Cheers :-)
This story really is quite entertaining, but needs editing throughout. “Pen” money vs. “pin” money is an error throughout the four books I’ve just completed by this author. There are many other errors, somewhat annoying, however, the four stories are fresh, different and entertaining. I love that Caroline in this story well and truly does herself most soundly horrid; quite amusing. I would have given this a 4.5, but Amazon doesn’t allow it! Cheers :-)
September 20, 2020
Interesting impressive and funny
I found many different emotions running through this story from beginning to end. Darcy and Elizabeth and up together in the end, but the how is completely and awesomely come together. Lady Elizabeth and Master Matthew help bring a new Darcy to life. Mr Bingley actually has a backbone and is impressive. Wickham is not around too long, but still causes trouble. Caroline is worse, but loses face hilariously. Great read and highly recommended to all to read.
I found many different emotions running through this story from beginning to end. Darcy and Elizabeth and up together in the end, but the how is completely and awesomely come together. Lady Elizabeth and Master Matthew help bring a new Darcy to life. Mr Bingley actually has a backbone and is impressive. Wickham is not around too long, but still causes trouble. Caroline is worse, but loses face hilariously. Great read and highly recommended to all to read.
August 19, 2020
Very Good Story!
Very good story! This one begins with Elizabeth as a widow with a 2 year old son. She is a Countess and her son is an Earl. She returns to Longbourn to help her sisters and mother, as Mr Bennet is away. She hides her title, going by Mrs Hamilton to just be a daughter returning home. Mr Bingley leases Netherfield and Mr Darcy is his guest. Elizabeth is a strong, impressive woman and Mr Darcy can’t help growing to love her.
Very good story! This one begins with Elizabeth as a widow with a 2 year old son. She is a Countess and her son is an Earl. She returns to Longbourn to help her sisters and mother, as Mr Bennet is away. She hides her title, going by Mrs Hamilton to just be a daughter returning home. Mr Bingley leases Netherfield and Mr Darcy is his guest. Elizabeth is a strong, impressive woman and Mr Darcy can’t help growing to love her.
December 5, 2021
I enjoyed the book, though I don’t understand why this type of books must replicate some J. Austin’s dialogue. I like the better fate of some characters. The comedy is nice and I understand the need to develop some side characters, but I don’t like the elevation in status for Elisabeth, it takes something from her love story. Engaging enough but the witty style of Austin writing could not be replicated and sometimes clashes.
August 15, 2025
This is a Beautiful reimagining of P&P
The Bennet family went through many changes with in a year. The story begins after the changes. Elizabeth is living with her in-laws and son. I laughed out loud at times. There were sad moments but not crying.
Mr Bennett is not in the story til the very end. All the other villains are involved and dealt with in a pleasingly satisfying manner.
I highly recommend this love story.
The Bennet family went through many changes with in a year. The story begins after the changes. Elizabeth is living with her in-laws and son. I laughed out loud at times. There were sad moments but not crying.
Mr Bennett is not in the story til the very end. All the other villains are involved and dealt with in a pleasingly satisfying manner.
I highly recommend this love story.
July 26, 2020
Loved it
**A bit of a spoiler**
I enjoy P&P variations where Elizabeth outranks Darcy, and this one did not disappoint. I enjoyed the comedic element and watching the usual suspects get their comeuppance. 4.5 stars rounded to 5; some grammar issues/typos, but they’re bearable. Couldn’t sleep until I finished it. Will definitely look for more from this author.
**A bit of a spoiler**
I enjoy P&P variations where Elizabeth outranks Darcy, and this one did not disappoint. I enjoyed the comedic element and watching the usual suspects get their comeuppance. 4.5 stars rounded to 5; some grammar issues/typos, but they’re bearable. Couldn’t sleep until I finished it. Will definitely look for more from this author.
August 21, 2020
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and couldn't put it down. I loved that some of the story line from P&P was woven in but different characters used to tell the story or say certain things. A really good read and because it's longer than some of the other P&P variations there is time to build a good story. This is the first time I've written a review and I've read dozens of these styles of book.s
August 23, 2020
Autumn in Great Britain and Mrs Bennett is not a man!
I really enjoy these stories by this new author except for a couple of things, we never refer to Autumn as "Fall" in Great Britain, and when mentioning Mrs Bennett, Francis is the male spelling, for a woman it's Frances.
Apart from these two things - excellent!
I really enjoy these stories by this new author except for a couple of things, we never refer to Autumn as "Fall" in Great Britain, and when mentioning Mrs Bennett, Francis is the male spelling, for a woman it's Frances.
Apart from these two things - excellent!
November 8, 2020
If I hear the word, 'fall,' again I will scream!
A delightful story that I enjoyed reading and would have give five stars had it not been littered with errors. It is badly in need of an editor. The inclusion of American versions of the English language quite annoyed me. I'm sure the only 'fall' Mr Darcy experienced was when he 'fell' in love with Elizabeth.
A delightful story that I enjoyed reading and would have give five stars had it not been littered with errors. It is badly in need of an editor. The inclusion of American versions of the English language quite annoyed me. I'm sure the only 'fall' Mr Darcy experienced was when he 'fell' in love with Elizabeth.
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