Sanctuary Mind : The Veil

by Cyn Bermudez

Kindle Edition

Published April 30, 2020

About the author

Cyn Bermudez is an author, poet, and artist living in California. She practices yoga, bakes her own grain-free bread, and is an avid player of tabletop board games. She loves spending time with her family and friends.

Reviews

[Michael Beyer · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book has a good setup and an intriguing concept. But it is too short by half. It needs a lot more exposition about the telepathic order that the book is basically about. More needs to be explained about what reapers are and what they do. And the hierarchy is set up as the good guys in the beginning, so that tension needs to be slowly built as Sage is going about doing her job as a reaper. The villain seems unreasonably cruel and malevolent, but we are given no insight into the character and his motivations. Why has he done some of the evil we see him doing? Even if it only comes through commentary of a supporting character like Wendi whose previous experiences are mentioned but never clearly delved into. I thought that was the purpose of the character, but ended up disappointed. I was engaged in this story, but disappointed when it ended far too fast. Please make the book longer. Not just by sequel, but by adding support structure to your already engaging tale.