I try not to review books that I haven't finished, but I really tried y'all. This book broke me around the 80% mark.
Our Neptunian narrator from Last and First Men returns, such to my chagrin. The novel starts with a hundred pages that covers many of the concepts that were so belabored in Last and First Men. This mostly consists of him telling the reader that Neptunian society is so far evolved and amazing that pathetic minds such as ours couldn't even begin to understand. We're too stupid and shortsighted to understand some of the concepts, so he doesn't even feel the need to bother trying to explain them.
To be honest, I skimmed and skipped over these pages, eventually resorting to reading summaries to understand what I'd missed. I usually have very good reading comprehension, but this tested even my limits, covering things that really had nothing to do with the very loose story Stapledon was trying to tell.
We're introduced to Paul, a "modern" (1930s) day man who the Neptunian is controlling by entering his mind in the past. The Neptunian is trying to effect changes in Paul to shift his thinking away from the "modern day" man and be more like the Neptunians, but honestly, it comes across as torture porn. The Neptunian fills Paul's head with horrific visions to change his personality into one of numbness.
Paul is forced to be mean to his friends, reject a girl that he likes, and be completely horrid to people. At one point, he tries to save a small Jewish boy who is being picked on by a bully and grabs a hot coal from the fireplace to make the bully back off. The downside is that he's so numb to everything from the constant torture that the pain from the hot coal barely registers.
He becomes a teacher and one day after class, he experiences a breakdown. In our modern day, one could say he's having PTSD flashbacks. Does the Neptunian offer him sympathy? Nope! It gives him increased awful visions to make him more numb and change him closer to the author's personal philosophy.
Before Paul can sign up to go off to World War I, though, the Neptunian vomits up another 80 pages (Yes, I checked) of the author's personal views disguised as the Neptunian view of Europe, the war, Earth. I started to waver and eventually skipped this section of the book.
I picked back up with Paul driving an ambulance during the War, but by this time the book had completely lost my attention.
It's never really explained what end goal the Neptunian had for Paul's personality. It felt like Paul was being driven to a psychopathic break while being completely isolated from everyone and everything he cared for. Surely, if the goal was to change something, wouldn't that be easier if Paul had a support group of really good friends?
I rated this 2 stars. This may seem weird for a book that I didn't finish, but I did like a few things.
One intriguing aspect of Neptunian society was their contrasting attitudes towards sex and eating. While public sexual relations were accepted, eating was considered taboo, requiring mouths to be covered with aprons. This juxtaposition, while interesting, felt somewhat disconnected from the main narrative, highlighting Stapledon's tendency to introduce intriguing concepts without fully exploring them.
Stapledon also implied that Paul had attraction to both male and females. At one point, he is enthralled by a priest named Archangel. This is very progressive for a book written in the early 1930s and serves to give Paul at least some background. Too bad nothing much was done with it.