This one is a bit hard to rate. On one hand it was entertaining and it's something different, but on another there was just something really odd about the characters and some of the details that made it less enjoyable for me.
First would be the characters. I was hoping this book would be something where the heroine was more experienced due to her occupation and her being a dominant in the bedroom, and while I did like her at first, her character just took a nose dive the rest of the book. She became whiny, wishy washy, selfish, and constantly took the hero for granted. She started off sounding cool and smart but her character just became embarrassing, especially the whole "dominant" side of her. It actually ruined a couple of the sex scenes because she would literally freak out and get mad if he didn't listen to her one time, how immature is that?
Then there is the hero who for the first half of the book sounded and acted like a creepy college frat boy that won't take no for an answer, and I'm not sure why she saw him attractive at all. He was demeaning and maybe a bit gross. Luckily, his character did improve throughout the book and I actually started liking him more, and he's definitely a Saint to want to put up with the heroine. There was actually one part at the very end that upped his character by a lot when he talked about their future together because it super sweet😍.
The story development was also just weird. Their relationship started off pretty toxic actually, and definitely a little too forward for people who have just met. They were constantly fighting over the dumbest things and I'm confused how they ever fell in love with each other tbh. The side characters all gave off a bit of a creepy vibe too, and I hated how it insinuated that the heroine's "sugar daddy" and the hero's assistant might get together, it was just way too convenient.
There was also some loose ends that I felt like we never got closure on such as the heroine's family and Gavin, and then the hero's cheating ex or his sister's cheating bf. They only popped up to try to give the characters more depth, but it all seemed very shallow, and again, just odd to put in this book. Especially because the characters hardly even know anything about each other or their pasts and yet they're all of a sudden in love. Then the epilogue comes after the whole book is just them fighting or having sex or fighting while having sex, but we hardly got any time of them actually being happy together. The story and the romance hardly seemed finished but it just cuts off and goes straight to the epilogue.
Overall, while the writing is good and some parts enjoyable, I think I was just expecting something a bit different from this book. Maybe a little more sexy (although a couple of the sex scenes were 🔥), mature, or just a bit light hearted, but it wasn't like that at all, though that's not necessarily bad. This is my first read from this author, and even though this story wasn't really a hit for me, I would definitely try her books again.
Safety: Pretty Safe
Heroine goes on dates with several men and one kisses her and wants more
Hero kisses OW once to make heroine jealous, and a different wannabe OW kisses him put he stops it as soon as she does
Previous manho H/semi-experienced heroine
Both are with no one else after meeting
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