Rating: 1/5
Tormented is the third book in The Condemned series by Alison Aimes. I'd thoroughly enjoyed the first two instalments so was looking forward to this one, especially when I saw that Ryker would be the MMC. We first met Ryker in book 2, Taken, where he's introduced as Valdus' second in command. At first off-putting and abrasive, we eventually learn he's been deeply traumatised and tormented (hah) by a brutal, tragic past that culminated in his imprisonment on Dragath25 with his team. Given his backstory, I was very excited to follow his story, especially when I saw he was being paired with a badass ice queen assassin. Unfortunately, this book did not deliver the delicious enemies-to-lovers story I was hoping for.
I found the character work poor, mostly in respect of Jade since we already had the benefit of seeing Ryker in the previous book. Jade was taken as an orphaned child and tortured / trained into a lethal assassin, and we're meant to believe that she's been deeply indoctrinated into believing she's serving the greater good, which is her singular purpose for soldiering on despite her bleak, lonely existence. The problem is we see basically none of it apart from one or two brief mentions. All it takes is a few prisoners - people she believes are criminals of the worst order - telling her of the Council's abuse, and she switches sides immediately. It's far too easy - there is no struggle or internal conflict at having to confront a reality that is fundamentally different from what she's believed since she was a child. It makes it hard to believe that she truly believed the Council was working for the greater good, which strips any credence from the assertion that she thought her work - bloody and brutal - was for a good cause. Even the aftermath is poorly dealt with because we're told she feels guilt and torment but we barely see it apart from on one or two instances.
The speed with which she and Ryker get together also felt ridiculous. I get that this is a high heat novel, but come on! Ryker's entire life was destroyed because of the Council, his pregnant wife subjected to rape and torture before she was murdered on their orders to punish him. But somehow, he's going to sleep with one of their pet assassins pretty much hours after meeting her, even while she's still fully intending to finish the job they sent her to do? And from there, it's a hop, skip and a jump to him being fully in love with her. Within a day. One. Day.
In fact, the entire plot felt like a chaotic mish-mash of scenes where characters act illogically and contrary to what we've been told of them. It doesn't help that the prose is awkward and the dialogue is clunky. There are multiple info dumps which are clearly just that - info dumps. Jade is meant to be an acerbic, emotionless ice queen but ends up just coming across as socially awkward. Ryker's past trauma makes him emotionless and unfeeling to the point where he had no compunction being violent with Jade during their first encounter, even when he believed her to be a helpless woman, but then in the very next encounter (when he knows she's a Council assassin), he's actively protecting her and wanting to team up together? I get it, he's a hero, but if you're going to describe him as this embittered, disillusioned man, angry at the world, then at least let there be a journey we go on.
The cherry on top was the conflict in the third act. This is a HUGE spoiler so if you still intend to read this book for some reason, stop here. We learn in the third act, after Jade and Ryker have committed to entering into a relationship, that Ryker's wife and child might actually be alive and on Dragath25. Reintroducing a dead wife and child is a plot twist that needs finesse to successfully pull off, and there was absolutely none here. In fact, Ryker's best friend, Griff - who's meant to be the better one of them - says it's unfair, because Ryker had finally found happiness with Jade. I beg your finest pardon??? So you're telling me his wife and child might have been stuck on Dragath25, being tortured, raped, used as slave labour, but the main issue is that they now pose an inconvenience to Ryker and Jade being together? WILD choice. WILD. I was pretty much done at the point and fully emotionally checked out, which was a good thing because it gets worse. After spending a few pages mining this clusterf*ck of a sub-plot for cheap angst, Ryker tells Jade that they're going to be together anyway and he'll always love her. Ok. Honestly I wouldn't have been too sad if he and Griff didn't survive their mission at that point. Jade was less infuriating because she never tried to convince Ryker to stay with her, but the way this was done made it clear that this was because Aimes wanted her to come across as noble, self-sacrificing, selfless, so we'd root for her. It didn't work obviously. Especially because, guess what, his wife and child actually did die all those years ago. So not only was this an unnecessary plot line that added nothing to the story, it actually made the book worse. I didn't care what happened to anyone but the slaves they were trying to free at this point.
Terribly, terribly disappointing read. Do not recommend. Go read the Ruthless Warlords series by Aimes instead. It starts off a little shaky but steadily improves, and none of the MMCs in those books show anything near the stunning insensitivity and sheer audacity that we see in this one.