Plot holes & unbelievable situations. Hanging threads in denouement. Spoilers.
I finished the book yesterday, slept on it, and brooded about the review. I gave myself 24 hours, so here is it. I almost DNFed many times, but I’m trying to finish every book I read.
Overall, this is a fast read, if you ignore illogic and unbelievable situations. I did growl at the wimpy protagonist to “cowgirl up!” Zoe’s angst-ridden internal monologues reinforce her insecurity, obsessions, and whinging. The memory-loss folderol is annoying, but vital to the storyline. This book is padded with an unnecessary subplot about Zoe’s ex-best friend, who’s not even a red herring. The denouement is great, because it includes all the parents (in-laws included).
For readers who care: Of thirty-five chapters, twelve (I think) are flashback chapters—labeled in caps: NOW, THEN, EIGHTEEN YEARS AGO, and THE DAY OF THE WEDDING. Prologue & epilogue are not time-demarcated.
SPOILERS BELOW
No matter how strong and manipulative the murderer’s co-conspirators, a suitable bookend-epilogue is the murderer’s POV—to mirror the prologue. I do understand the urge to use the co-conspirator’s POV.
Five eye rolling emojis: How did Celia—Zoe’s cunningly intelligent, nurse MIL—miss online “tutorials” about Suxamethonium (Sux) doses? Sux is given IV, so did MIL not expect Zoe to develop a blood clot/hematoma, alerting any competent coroner? Here’s the kicker: Sux IV paralyzes muscles in seconds, so Zoe would’ve stopped breathing, suffering asphyxiation. The plot needs her to live.
Questions: If you held a heavy vase of roses, and a man reaches for your throat, what would you do? If you clutch the vase to your chest, does he reach through the roses? Hmmmm, my long-stemmed white roses had thorns. How and who got Zoe (in wedding dress) from the murder room to her dressing room? The vase shattered, but no glass shards in Zoe’s lacey dress? In/on her shoes? No water soaking her shoes, hem or skirt? Only wet patches on the murderer’s lapels? No damage to face, neck or hands of murderer—from glass shards, thorns or from victim’s finger nails and fists? When Zoe sees her dead sister, did she hallucinate or were the appearances paranormal?
I still wonder about all the 5 stars, because I seem to have read a different book. That said, I am amongst a minority of reviewers, so please read this with a shaker of salt. I apologize for the lengthy review, but for me, a lower rated book takes more time and space.