Okay, first, the first 30 percent of this book was redundant. No need to recap that much of the first book. Yes it was overlay with what happened to Doc and Bree in Ghost, but really unnecessary. The story was good, but the errors in this book were glaringly obvious. Proofreading sucked. I waited to write this after I started number 3, yep, recap, again. Not needed, albeit not as bad in Whiskey as this one. No flow from one character to another in some places, wrong names used, confusing at times. Again, proofreading would have fixed a lot of what is wrong. Story was good and the only reason I kept going.