It was heartbreaking to read Beatrice journal when Giovanni left her for five years… And I get that she was angry at him when he showed up. I even felt real bad for her then boyfriend Mano… But I also feel as frustrated as Giovanni when she keeps clinging to Giovanni yet repeating the fact that he left her, ugh… At some point I was screaming for her to “get over it!” Hell, her best friend, Dez, gets it more than she does… and she just learned that vamps exists.
Giovanni’s reason for leaving Beatrice was admirable by letting her chose her path, to grow… but there was also something wrong with that logic when you show up after five years later and pursue her and not leaving till she be with him again.
Anyway, it’s obvious where the story was heading….
I also didn't get why Beatrice would be that stupid to go out and ditch her bodyguard knowing someone evil is out to get her… Nope, I didn’t get that at all… To be captured and rescued again… Was it to show that she can kick ass now since she’s been practicing? Let me borrow her words exactly, “stupid, stupid, stupid.” Right!
Then, everybody, meaning all higher up vamps, seems to want Beatrice for her father… or something about Beatrice that is a natural with the vamp politics, it feels like she is being build up to be something bigger than what she is. I have no problem about making one stronger, something more, I love that… but for me to get into it, it’s got to be supported and he/she has to be somehow different from everyone. Sadly, so far, I don’t see that here in Beatrice case besides the push of words coming from the Giovanni and his circle.
In this sequel, not much was resolved... not Lorenzo, the villain, or where her father is and what Lorenzo wants from him… But at least there were hints near the end. I do wonder, powerful and smarter as they are supposed to be than Lorenzo, yet they couldn’t get him. Hmmm…
I love the turning point of the story, when Beatrice had finally seen the light and realized what she wants. Finally!
If I were just rating this for writing alone, I’d say 5 Stars… Despite the problems I have with the story, it did engage my attention and I find their interactions quite interesting.