This means war
River was so excited to see her monsters' human faces. Tricking Demeter, dealing with Hades' tantrums, watching a horrific pit fight, learning what was going on, all bad. Small things like choosing disgusting spectators for her monsters to snack on were nice perks, though. But seeing them like this just made her realize, Earth isn't home anymore. And Hephaestus has come through with the weapon, too. So, plans are afoot. Time to pick and choose whose work best and start merging these ideas. Persephone needs away from Mommy Dearest, the monsters need their freedom so they can fight back, her dad has shown up and is bringing Hell with him, and Cerberus is talking the sweet hellhound into switching sides. And maybe adding future pups to their to-do list. Bring on the mayhem.
Spoilers ahead.
These are a little simple in some ways but such fun to read. I like the mixed mythologies, the different sides of known characters and how history- or petty enemies- changed their stories. River finally gets her monsters in this book, plus a surprise addition. Well, you could see their attraction, but their willingness to share with 4 monsters was a question mark that got settled. The big battle occurs, and the story fractured a little bit. Not bad, just a lot happening, not a lot of details, and some skipping and bouncing around. There's a 2 week gap directly after that readers miss out on some key bonding moments. Monsters claim their mates by marks. We get to see the spider and the kraken pass their marks. Although, we learn the widow's is the red hourglass we never learn what the kraken passed on. The minotaur shares a nose ring, the phoenix passes another undescribed symbol. We also never get to see River's demon form. Banter about how bold it is, but not so much as a horn or leathery wing flap. Oh, and her other partner glows, and probably passed something along because it seemed like a binding. But like almost every moment she tries to steal with her mates, it gets interrupted. This time by an angry dad who kidnaps them and now they have to plan another rescue. I'm sensing a theme here. I would love to see those scattered and glossed over, or completely dropped, scenes get a little expansion. Sexy times are fine, sure, but those bonding moments, and even the frantic panic ones, are what help readers fall for the characters.
The editing was better this one, still not many commas for address, and a couple other oopsies, but overall much better editing in this book.
A few questions:
*The marks mentioned seem to convey some abilities. Strength, vague water something or other, possible poison resistance, and a warm feeling- although, what could a phoenix pass to someone already fire resistant? But it mentioned they only in proximity to the one who gave the mark. Is there a distance range? And do magical piercings hurt as much as the standard needle done ones?
*Where do the kraken's tentacles keep popping out from? One moment they're there, the next gone, no wardrobe issues.
*One scene seems to be encouraging Kimos' minotaur out to play, and seems like it was pulled forth, but he'd have grown taller, broader, and, if proportional, would have involved some adjustments and stretch time. Also, bull head, so those kisses would have either halted or changed drastically.