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Up until about the last 50 pages, I was going to round this up to a 3-star book. Slow, but with a few interesting bits that would make it worth while for a YA audience. Then I got to the end of the book and I was completely and utterly over it. At first I was disappointed in it but then I got angry at all the wasted potential of the story. Below are my major issues with it, there will be plenty of spoilers ahead.
1. Liza is irritating and not very interesting as a protagonist. For the longest time, I thought she was just a petulant 16 year old. NOPE! She's in her mid-20's and acts like she's 14! Almost every scene with her involved her getting into a childish little snit over absolutely nothing and either storming off or mouthing off. Even as her friendships and romantic relationships evolved, she didn't for the most part.
2. Her powers have almost no use in the story. Oh, she can talk to animals? Sweet! So she'll have like an animal army or can call on them to protect her in her hour of need or maybe just an animal companion that she works with the solve issues? What do you mean, no?! So she mostly just kills animals with her thoughts until almost halfway through the book when she throws together an animal show with two animals who play no further part in the story and drop off the story entirely just after she cobbles said show together? Her monkey companion just sort of hangs out in her pocket being cute and doesn't do much else...mmmmkayyy.
3. Until they do! So, in the last 40 odd pages, she can suddenly call on spirit guides who let her shapeshift, use healing magic, fight, and can then become POSSESSED BY THE SPIRIT OF THE GODDESS OYA! Where was all this earlier in the story when it would have been both useful and interesting. She could have been doing more than killing opossums with her mind this entire time and you cram it all in at the end because...uh...spiritual reasons. Yeah, that's it, she's...ummmmm...passed her spiritual tests now...
4. Why are they here? This book is just littered with absolutely useless and superfluous side characters. Autumn? Other than being her roommate and occasional sounding board, she did nothing and her chapter was just filler. Stephanie St. Clair? We could have had gangsters in this book but nope, she's just there to summon a demon and then visit her nephew working at the carnival. There were just so many side characters whose stories and actions came to nothing.
5. More demon, please! Ahiku was, without a doubt, the most interesting character in the entire book and there just isn't enough of her and her scheming. Honestly, if she had been in this more, the rating would be higher. After her lunch with the demons, I was way more interested in what they were doing that what was happening at the carnival.
6. Not enough murder. What got me hooked early on were the murders, disappearances, and general supernatural mayhem that was being offered up. I needed more of it to both create some suspense or peril for the other characters.