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347 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 30, 2020


🔸 The premise, the general bully romance trope (this is my very first one because I always thought I couldn't like them on principle, but I was okay with this particular story)
🔸 Bernie and every single one of her HAVOC boys: Aaron for being boyfriend material, Heal for always smiling through life and always being a sexy fox, Vic for both being tender for Bernie AND a jealous ass**** boss, Callum for being a devil in angel's clothes (I swear I could see those blue eyes spying on me while reading), Oscar for being a hot (and bloody) riddle until he just was a cinnamon roll (but just for Bernie and the little girls).
🔸 The sisters. I loved the tragic backstory of Bernie's big sister, the beginning of everything. But also Heather, Kara and little Ashley... they were pureness and humanity, and very much needed inside all this chaos.
🔸 The strong sense of justice/vengeance against pedophiles and rapers.
🔸 The love story and the brotherhood, in one word the FAMILY.
🔸 The (really sad) backstory of every MC.
🔸 The mothers in general, both the villains and the (almost) sane ones, plus the other women: the teacher and the police officer.
🔸 All the steamy scenes, from the sweet ones to the more hardcore. Thumbs up for me.
🔸 Very good characters and world construction
🔸 The bigger picture of the plot, in the sense that I liked the premise and the ending we finally had in this #5 book.
🔸 The messiness of the plot going from book #2 to #4: there were too many things happening at once. Too many deaths, and too many unuseful characters coming, going, dying. Why?! In my humble opinion, the author should have simplified the plot by going through different stages. She could have dealt with Bernie's list first, put an end to this and then go in with the war between gangs and making us discover that Vic's mom was involved at the end. She could have also profited by maybe making more books, but with more organic plots.
🔸 Have I already said too many deaths?! I don't mean this in the sense that I was horrified or something, it was to be expected, but with so many deaths and so many witnesses and the cops being present all the time... How is it possible for them to remain free?!?
🔸 The writing was cringe at times, some descriptions made me "ughhh whaaaat? wtf am I reading?", some made me just laugh when they were meant to be poetic.
🔸 The actual poetry: Bernie was writing poetry at school, and it was cute at first. But then she became serious about the poetry and the poetry became worse and worse.. and maybe as an Italian I don't understand poetry written in another language but it was awful in my experience.
🔸 The writing part 2: some paragraphs were repetitive, things were prolonged or said multiple times in the same way throughout the books (especially #3 and #4 if I remember correctly)... in the end, the books could have been cut off at least 1/3 pages, still maintaining all the steamy scenes (and there were plenty)
🔸 The writing part 3: did someone edit this? Because it didn't seem like it, and it went down and down with repressiveness and errors. It gave me the idea of a self made, weekly published Fanfiction. And I like my good share of Fanfiction, but from a published book I expect something more.