I will fully admit the reason I picked up this book was because the cover copy reminded me of the Thomas Rhett song, ‘Marry Me.’ If you don’t know it, go give it a listen, it’s heartbreaking and totally worth it. Sadly, I found the song far more moving than the book. I was expecting something more emotional than this book, and that is on me.
Kinda Don’t Care is the first book in Lani Lynn Vale’s Simple Man series. The series is a spinoff of her Freebirds series. I didn’t read that series before I read this book and honestly, I felt like I was missing some connections and histories between the characters. It wasn’t enough for me to feel lost, I think I would have appreciated the dynamics between all the characters better had I read the other series. Kinda Don’t Care is written in first-person perspective, narrated primarily by Janie and Rafe with a few chapters told in Janie’s father, James’ voice.
I went into this book expecting something completely different than I got. Had I known it was a spinoff from another series ahead of time – and what that series was – I probably would have had a better understanding of what I was getting into and appreciated the book more. It was a decent story on its own merits, though even at that it was missing that ‘it’ factor to make it truly memorable.
Again, I think having read the previous series would have helped me understand the pull between Rafe and Janie better; it seemed like I’d missed something that had drawn her to him and vice versa. I just didn’t feel their chemistry, Ms. Vale kept telling me about how they’d always felt the pull between them, but it didn’t translate to feeling their desire for one another on page.
The overarching storyline of Kinda Don’t Care was interesting, I felt invested in Rafe’s desire to get revenge and stop the man who’d committed a crime against him and was potentially defrauding service men and women, but some of the subplots seemed a bit bizarre to me. The story arc that ultimately ended in Rafe’s accident, for one, was completely abandoned as soon as the accident happened. I understand having a device to get your characters to where they need to be, but I don’t care for entire plotlines being abandoned before they’ve reached their conclusion. And don’t get me started on Janie’s wedding, I just did not get it.
The climax of this book had the most potential of any of the parts of the story; it was going to be intense and scary and everything I LOVE in a suspense(ish) novel. Instead of fully committing to it, though, the author pulled out a twist that didn’t seem to make any sense in the context of the rest of the novel. I wish she would have pushed the envelope and really took the book to the next level.
Lani Lynn Vale is a new author, to me, I see she has quite an extensive backlist, so she’s obviously been around for a while. I wasn’t won over by this book; it was okay, but not for me. The writing style was okay, but again, not something I connected with in a substantial way. A big part of my not liking this book has to do with my expectations before reading, and I own that. I don’t know if I’ll continue reading this series or author, it would take a great recommendation from a trusted source, I think.