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The Phoenix Trilogy: Story of Jane Seymour #1
Nest of Ashes
October 1537 At a time of most supreme triumph, the moment of her greatest glory, security and power, a Queen of England lies dying. Through dreams of fever and fantasy, Jane Seymour, third and most beloved wife of King Henry VIII remembers her childhood, the path forged to the Tudor Court; a path forged in flame and ashes. Through the fug of memory, Jane sees herself, a quiet, overlooked girl, who to others seemed pale of face and character, who discovered a terrible secret that one day would rain destruction upon her family. Nest of Ashes is Book One in The Phoenix Story of Jane Seymour, by G. Lawrence. The author's thanks are due to Julia Gibbs, proof reader of this work of fiction, and to Larch Gallagher, the cover artist.
298 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 6, 2020
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G. Lawrence
50 books278 followersI am an independently published author, and proud to be so. Living in a little cottage in Wales in the UK, I love where I live as much as I love to write.
The age of the Tudors has been an obsession for me since I was a child, and many of my upcoming books will center on that time, but I also pen the odd dystopian fiction or historical fiction from other time periods. I will be releasing all my titles on amazon, for kindle and then hopefully for print later.
I studied Literature (with a capital L) at University and usually have twenty or more books I'm currently reading. Reading and writing are about mood for me, and I haven't found a genre I didn't enjoy something about so far...
You can often find me on Wattpad or Twitter when I'm not writing...
The age of the Tudors has been an obsession for me since I was a child, and many of my upcoming books will center on that time, but I also pen the odd dystopian fiction or historical fiction from other time periods. I will be releasing all my titles on amazon, for kindle and then hopefully for print later.
I studied Literature (with a capital L) at University and usually have twenty or more books I'm currently reading. Reading and writing are about mood for me, and I haven't found a genre I didn't enjoy something about so far...
You can often find me on Wattpad or Twitter when I'm not writing...
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August 17, 2020
Loved, loved, loved this book. Best so far this year!
I was so intrigued to see how Gemma Lawrence would portray Jane Seymour, the third wife of Henry VIII, as relatively little is known about her. Traditionally, she is the meek and mousey one, the antithesis of the charismatic, sophisticated Anne Boleyn, the biddable daughter of the proud Seymour family of Wolf Hall (Wulfhall), minimally educated (she could barely read). Ms Lawrence has brought her to life. In Nest of Ashes we see a timid girl, plain of face, a disappointment to her more socially adept mother, bullied by brother Thomas (who I have long thought seemed a nasty piece of work) - and the keeper of a dark, dark family secret.
One of the most well-known stories about the Seymours is that elder brother Edward's wife, Catherine, was cast out for having an affair with his, and Jane's, father, John. Ms Lawrence writes this as having coloured Jane's whole life.
Of course, historical fiction based on fact will always contain some aspects that are purely the author's imagination, and with those about whom little is known there is more of a necessity to create events and scenarios. Unlike her series about Anne and Elizabeth I, both of whose lives are well-documented, Nest of Ashes features much of Ms Lawrence's own creation, but it is written with such understanding of her character(s) and the era that every part of the story is completely feasible. She sees Jane as I have always thought she was - reserved, lacking in confidence and unremarkable, yes, but with a certain harsh ambition derived from the desire to rise above those who considered her unimportant - including members of her own family. More than this, you will have to discover for yourself when you read it (that is 'when', not 'if'!).
Alongside the story of Jane's life, in which I was completely engrossed, all the way through, Ms Lawrence gives so much detail about how the people of the time lived, with their customs and day-to-day routines, which I found fascinating. There is one chapter in which Jane visits the cottage of a 'cunning woman', which I loved. Never does she make the mistake, as a lesser writer might, of writing Jane's reactions as though she was a woman of our time. This book brought home to me how restricted people were by their belief in an often wrathful God who ruled all their lives.
The last part of the book describes Jane's arrival at court, and her first impressions of Katherine of Aragon and Anne Boleyn, little knowing what part she will play in the life of the latter. As the end grew nearer, I tried to read it slowly, and after I'd read the last page I actually moaned out loud because there was no more - suffice to say that I am counting the weeks until the next part is published!
Intricate historical detail, complex family drama, love, lust, loss and intrigue - it's a terrific book. One of my favourites by this author, and I can't recommend it too highly.
I was so intrigued to see how Gemma Lawrence would portray Jane Seymour, the third wife of Henry VIII, as relatively little is known about her. Traditionally, she is the meek and mousey one, the antithesis of the charismatic, sophisticated Anne Boleyn, the biddable daughter of the proud Seymour family of Wolf Hall (Wulfhall), minimally educated (she could barely read). Ms Lawrence has brought her to life. In Nest of Ashes we see a timid girl, plain of face, a disappointment to her more socially adept mother, bullied by brother Thomas (who I have long thought seemed a nasty piece of work) - and the keeper of a dark, dark family secret.
One of the most well-known stories about the Seymours is that elder brother Edward's wife, Catherine, was cast out for having an affair with his, and Jane's, father, John. Ms Lawrence writes this as having coloured Jane's whole life.
Of course, historical fiction based on fact will always contain some aspects that are purely the author's imagination, and with those about whom little is known there is more of a necessity to create events and scenarios. Unlike her series about Anne and Elizabeth I, both of whose lives are well-documented, Nest of Ashes features much of Ms Lawrence's own creation, but it is written with such understanding of her character(s) and the era that every part of the story is completely feasible. She sees Jane as I have always thought she was - reserved, lacking in confidence and unremarkable, yes, but with a certain harsh ambition derived from the desire to rise above those who considered her unimportant - including members of her own family. More than this, you will have to discover for yourself when you read it (that is 'when', not 'if'!).
Alongside the story of Jane's life, in which I was completely engrossed, all the way through, Ms Lawrence gives so much detail about how the people of the time lived, with their customs and day-to-day routines, which I found fascinating. There is one chapter in which Jane visits the cottage of a 'cunning woman', which I loved. Never does she make the mistake, as a lesser writer might, of writing Jane's reactions as though she was a woman of our time. This book brought home to me how restricted people were by their belief in an often wrathful God who ruled all their lives.
The last part of the book describes Jane's arrival at court, and her first impressions of Katherine of Aragon and Anne Boleyn, little knowing what part she will play in the life of the latter. As the end grew nearer, I tried to read it slowly, and after I'd read the last page I actually moaned out loud because there was no more - suffice to say that I am counting the weeks until the next part is published!
Intricate historical detail, complex family drama, love, lust, loss and intrigue - it's a terrific book. One of my favourites by this author, and I can't recommend it too highly.
November 9, 2020
I’ve always loved historical fiction and have two favourite periods that never fail to catch my attention. The first is WWII and the other is The Tudors. As author Gemma Lawrence states, there is so little told about Jane Seymour, the third wife of Henry VIII. It’s a huge understatement to say I was intrigued as to how she would portray a story based on someone about whom so little actual “history” is known. Indeed, following Anne Boleyn as Henry’s queen must surely have been a daunting time for Jane, after all was not Anne the original viper in the nest that led to the break with Rome and to Henry’s marriage with the dignified and most-popular Katherine of Aragon.
Nest of Ashes is the first in a trilogy of Jane Seymour’s life, and it is probably in book one where the author has the most scope to create Jane’s story. The author has imagined situations from Jane’s early years that are in keeping with the world she inhabits, its traditions and customs. So believable is her creation that you could be forgiven for thinking it is not historic fact, and so engaging is the story that you are instantly drawn into its fictional realm. The very best of both worlds.
When we meet Jane, she is the only daughter (so far) born to the Seymour couple. Her plain appearance marks her out as a disappointment to her mother who had longed for a daughter to grace the King’s Court as she had once done herself. As such, Jane becomes almost invisible to them, particularly when her brother Thomas is around. For Thomas can do no wrong, and despite Jane’s objections to the contrary, it is always she who is on the receiving end of any punishment. Knowing what we do about Jane’s future, it felt as though Karma was watching over her: the invisible daughter who would be queen.
Jane’s world is shaken for the first time when her beloved brother Edward takes a wife, Catherine. This beautiful and vivacious young woman is everything Jane’s mother had hoped for in a daughter, and the Seymour household is soon captivated by her charms. For Jane, that charm quickly wears off when she realises Catherine is not the sweet young woman she professes to be, but rather is intent on seducing Jane’s (and her husband, Edward’s) father. From here on, all doubt as to Catherine’s true nature is cast aside, and Jane sees her only as making a cuckold of her brother. Being invisible to everyone else in the household, Jane has no-one to tell, let alone anyone who might believe her. Confronting Catherine only makes things worse for her.
Jane can only hope her brother will find a place for her at Court, away from her family and the lies she has to ignore daily. When Edward does come through for her, and Jane is called serve Mary, the King’s sister, only then does her mother recognise how much she relied on Jane.
Jane arrives at Court, quiet and reserved and not at all confident of her position. It is her shy nature that catches the eye of Queen Katherine, who takes a liking to the young woman and appoints Jane to her own staff.
Jane’s mother is torn between fury and pride; Jane has usurped her own position at Court and without all the fuss and fancy. She begs Jane to meet with her cousin, Anne Boleyn, which she reluctantly agrees to; they are never going to be close but who would have thought they would be rivals for the King’s affections?
Jane’s future at Court is about to change her life and the history books. Forever.
As Nest of Ashes came to an end, my appetite for the next book only increased. In today’s society we are used to binge-watching complete series, so biding my time until the next instalment will be a challenge. Suffice it to say, I’m ready when you are, Gemma Lawrence! (No pressure LOL)
Nest of Ashes is the first in a trilogy of Jane Seymour’s life, and it is probably in book one where the author has the most scope to create Jane’s story. The author has imagined situations from Jane’s early years that are in keeping with the world she inhabits, its traditions and customs. So believable is her creation that you could be forgiven for thinking it is not historic fact, and so engaging is the story that you are instantly drawn into its fictional realm. The very best of both worlds.
When we meet Jane, she is the only daughter (so far) born to the Seymour couple. Her plain appearance marks her out as a disappointment to her mother who had longed for a daughter to grace the King’s Court as she had once done herself. As such, Jane becomes almost invisible to them, particularly when her brother Thomas is around. For Thomas can do no wrong, and despite Jane’s objections to the contrary, it is always she who is on the receiving end of any punishment. Knowing what we do about Jane’s future, it felt as though Karma was watching over her: the invisible daughter who would be queen.
Jane’s world is shaken for the first time when her beloved brother Edward takes a wife, Catherine. This beautiful and vivacious young woman is everything Jane’s mother had hoped for in a daughter, and the Seymour household is soon captivated by her charms. For Jane, that charm quickly wears off when she realises Catherine is not the sweet young woman she professes to be, but rather is intent on seducing Jane’s (and her husband, Edward’s) father. From here on, all doubt as to Catherine’s true nature is cast aside, and Jane sees her only as making a cuckold of her brother. Being invisible to everyone else in the household, Jane has no-one to tell, let alone anyone who might believe her. Confronting Catherine only makes things worse for her.
Jane can only hope her brother will find a place for her at Court, away from her family and the lies she has to ignore daily. When Edward does come through for her, and Jane is called serve Mary, the King’s sister, only then does her mother recognise how much she relied on Jane.
Jane arrives at Court, quiet and reserved and not at all confident of her position. It is her shy nature that catches the eye of Queen Katherine, who takes a liking to the young woman and appoints Jane to her own staff.
Jane’s mother is torn between fury and pride; Jane has usurped her own position at Court and without all the fuss and fancy. She begs Jane to meet with her cousin, Anne Boleyn, which she reluctantly agrees to; they are never going to be close but who would have thought they would be rivals for the King’s affections?
Jane’s future at Court is about to change her life and the history books. Forever.
As Nest of Ashes came to an end, my appetite for the next book only increased. In today’s society we are used to binge-watching complete series, so biding my time until the next instalment will be a challenge. Suffice it to say, I’m ready when you are, Gemma Lawrence! (No pressure LOL)
February 4, 2021
Much as I love historical fiction about (almost) any period, my real fascination bears hard upon the tales generated by the lives of women in the post medieval period. It is a widely explored timeframe I realize, but I still find the descriptions of everyday life, garb, design, naturopathic (herbs used for healing, contraception, empowerment, potency (in males, & desire in females {GENERALLY}, as well as cooking, along with environmental uses such as hiding unpleasant odors, rodents and insect control; really, all the things we use in the modern world without resorting to toxic chemicals-these are the areas I find interesting and worth reading about. Blended in with a story of relationships, power, government, and genealogy-and I am a happy reader. Usually.
But I am disappointed in this novel, for some simple reasons. I realize the author had to take great license in crafting a fine story for which there was also limited reference. The material was scant as the notes openly state, so a good imagination was helpful in making this a good story. And it was good, but it wasn't great.
There was so much fluff, I found myself skimming large passages, and even moving so far ahead of the story arc, looking for something that gave the characters some life. I think there were too many long descriptions of the scenery, gardens, decorations, and the relentless prattle from Jane's mother. All the background chatting made me lose the scope of the story because so little actually happened. The action was limited, stilted, and boring. Lots of attention to Jane's alleged mousey appearance and behavior. Repetitive rambling about how unattractive she was. And still, nothing happened. The lack of action on the part of the primary characters was what killed this story for me. I don't like to be bored or pulled down by huge amounts of trivia and it seemed to me this book was just chock full of the tiniest bits of uninteresting factoids. It's fine to mention how proficient Jane was with needlepoint and embroidery, but why not give some of that a bit of life: the designs came alive with vibrantly colored thread and rare and costly silken strands, some of which gave even the smallest, leafy frond a sense of fullness, richness of depth, texture, and the beauty of glossy, pungent fragrance(?). It wouldn't have hurt the prose, IMO. It implies life, bloom, growth, action, even from a leaf.
I also found the grammatical stress of trying to make the spoken words, as reiterated by Jane far too often, awkward and sometimes easy to misunderstand. Tense, verbs, adjectives and the effort to make the sentence structure more colloquial led to dangling participles and incomplete declarative phrases. There was too much reflective self admonishment, as when Jane " ' Nothing came of those rumours, but of ones about the succession there were many more in the years to come' ". " ' Yet as Midsuumer dawned there was small talk of much apart from pleasure' ". Many more of the same, and while I know it is a tiny thing, to reverse verb and noun placement with adjectives and adverbs, I still found it redundant and awkward.
Because so little was recorded about the real-life Jane Seymour, there isn't much to remember. But maybe I read too much fiction that doesn't rely solely on imagination. I rather much prefer stories rich with not just fanciful concepts, but fine detail gleaned from actual historical notes or records. I know sometimes that simply isn't possible, but I still look for the realism offered by reference that can be validated.
I have one last thing to say, and that is that this isn't a terrible book. It does finally reach a point of conclusion that serves as a small introduction to the rest of the stories in this collection. I am a tough reviewer, and I apologize in advance if others think I might be too critical. In my professional life I have often had the pleasure of writing for review, and not all my reviewers were generous or kind. But I think writers and readers can benefit from all reviews, not just the ones that rave with glee. I wasn't always pleased with some reviews, but I did learn from all of them. And all this is just my opinion. Souls will not be imperiled and the world will not come to an end based on my review. It's just my opinion, one of hundreds. I couldn't have written this story and I am glad someone did. That's fair.
But I am disappointed in this novel, for some simple reasons. I realize the author had to take great license in crafting a fine story for which there was also limited reference. The material was scant as the notes openly state, so a good imagination was helpful in making this a good story. And it was good, but it wasn't great.
There was so much fluff, I found myself skimming large passages, and even moving so far ahead of the story arc, looking for something that gave the characters some life. I think there were too many long descriptions of the scenery, gardens, decorations, and the relentless prattle from Jane's mother. All the background chatting made me lose the scope of the story because so little actually happened. The action was limited, stilted, and boring. Lots of attention to Jane's alleged mousey appearance and behavior. Repetitive rambling about how unattractive she was. And still, nothing happened. The lack of action on the part of the primary characters was what killed this story for me. I don't like to be bored or pulled down by huge amounts of trivia and it seemed to me this book was just chock full of the tiniest bits of uninteresting factoids. It's fine to mention how proficient Jane was with needlepoint and embroidery, but why not give some of that a bit of life: the designs came alive with vibrantly colored thread and rare and costly silken strands, some of which gave even the smallest, leafy frond a sense of fullness, richness of depth, texture, and the beauty of glossy, pungent fragrance(?). It wouldn't have hurt the prose, IMO. It implies life, bloom, growth, action, even from a leaf.
I also found the grammatical stress of trying to make the spoken words, as reiterated by Jane far too often, awkward and sometimes easy to misunderstand. Tense, verbs, adjectives and the effort to make the sentence structure more colloquial led to dangling participles and incomplete declarative phrases. There was too much reflective self admonishment, as when Jane " ' Nothing came of those rumours, but of ones about the succession there were many more in the years to come' ". " ' Yet as Midsuumer dawned there was small talk of much apart from pleasure' ". Many more of the same, and while I know it is a tiny thing, to reverse verb and noun placement with adjectives and adverbs, I still found it redundant and awkward.
Because so little was recorded about the real-life Jane Seymour, there isn't much to remember. But maybe I read too much fiction that doesn't rely solely on imagination. I rather much prefer stories rich with not just fanciful concepts, but fine detail gleaned from actual historical notes or records. I know sometimes that simply isn't possible, but I still look for the realism offered by reference that can be validated.
I have one last thing to say, and that is that this isn't a terrible book. It does finally reach a point of conclusion that serves as a small introduction to the rest of the stories in this collection. I am a tough reviewer, and I apologize in advance if others think I might be too critical. In my professional life I have often had the pleasure of writing for review, and not all my reviewers were generous or kind. But I think writers and readers can benefit from all reviews, not just the ones that rave with glee. I wasn't always pleased with some reviews, but I did learn from all of them. And all this is just my opinion. Souls will not be imperiled and the world will not come to an end based on my review. It's just my opinion, one of hundreds. I couldn't have written this story and I am glad someone did. That's fair.
September 19, 2024
Nest of Ashes by G. Lawrence
The Phoenix Trilogy: Story of Jane Seymour #1
A Book Review by AZP
September 2024
I find this historical fiction book very revealing!
It urges me as a reader to review and to delve more into the history of England during the reign of Henry VIII as well as to equip myself further with the contexts and affairs of the world during this period in history.
This book gives very detailed narratives of Jane Seymour’s childhood, her upbringing and placement within her family, kin and household, her relationship with her parents and siblings, how her parents see her as a daughter offspring, and how the surrounding servants and the people engage with her.
The author intricately puts into writing what is going on in Jane’s mind as she fortifies her awareness of her self- image and identity. It unravels Jane’s thinking about her faith in God, her dilemma about her self- image which is constantly challenged by her mother’s views about her and her brother Thomas’s bullying. The author unties Jane’s attitude about her witnessing the strange relationship of her father and her sister- in- law.
This book highlights the demons brought about by a system of absolute monarchy where men are believed to be superior to women, that is why men have the birthright to preferably rule. Furthermore, it promotes the thinking that the male monarch or patriarch must ensure to produce a male heir from his wife. Women in general become worthless when they cannot produce children, especially males. This belief reigns in the household of Jane’s.
Diseases are deadly in this period. They are uncontrollable they can wipe out a family or a village and this happened to Jane’s household of Jane’s and her mother relied most on the knowledge of a cunning lady, Edith Grey, who served as a guide to women during childbirth and tending the sick, and by whom a Physician of the family later collaborated with Edith and vouched her actions for treatment to be correct.
This book as having the theme of King Henry VIII time period of reign broaches ‘a boiling point’, where it naturally exposes its own ‘evils’, be it in anyone’s family, household or castle; marriage and relationship; the dealings of the church as an institution and to its flock; how everyone managed deadly diseases; and on the squabbles of the Councilmen of the King wanting to hold power to protect their economic status and favor.
These and all occurrences in this period inspired to change the world and the world of Jane Seymour, somehow.
Jane Seymour in itself is an ‘image’ of change and ‘defiance’ compared to Catherine Fillol, the wife of her brother who exemplifies an ‘altered or odd’ representation of emancipation.
Though the tale and struggle of Jane Seymour happened many centuries ago, her story and life lessons are still valid and relevant in modern times.
‘Nest of the Ashes’ is the first part of the series. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of the book instalments.
The Phoenix Trilogy: Story of Jane Seymour #1
A Book Review by AZP
September 2024
I find this historical fiction book very revealing!
It urges me as a reader to review and to delve more into the history of England during the reign of Henry VIII as well as to equip myself further with the contexts and affairs of the world during this period in history.
This book gives very detailed narratives of Jane Seymour’s childhood, her upbringing and placement within her family, kin and household, her relationship with her parents and siblings, how her parents see her as a daughter offspring, and how the surrounding servants and the people engage with her.
The author intricately puts into writing what is going on in Jane’s mind as she fortifies her awareness of her self- image and identity. It unravels Jane’s thinking about her faith in God, her dilemma about her self- image which is constantly challenged by her mother’s views about her and her brother Thomas’s bullying. The author unties Jane’s attitude about her witnessing the strange relationship of her father and her sister- in- law.
This book highlights the demons brought about by a system of absolute monarchy where men are believed to be superior to women, that is why men have the birthright to preferably rule. Furthermore, it promotes the thinking that the male monarch or patriarch must ensure to produce a male heir from his wife. Women in general become worthless when they cannot produce children, especially males. This belief reigns in the household of Jane’s.
Diseases are deadly in this period. They are uncontrollable they can wipe out a family or a village and this happened to Jane’s household of Jane’s and her mother relied most on the knowledge of a cunning lady, Edith Grey, who served as a guide to women during childbirth and tending the sick, and by whom a Physician of the family later collaborated with Edith and vouched her actions for treatment to be correct.
This book as having the theme of King Henry VIII time period of reign broaches ‘a boiling point’, where it naturally exposes its own ‘evils’, be it in anyone’s family, household or castle; marriage and relationship; the dealings of the church as an institution and to its flock; how everyone managed deadly diseases; and on the squabbles of the Councilmen of the King wanting to hold power to protect their economic status and favor.
These and all occurrences in this period inspired to change the world and the world of Jane Seymour, somehow.
Jane Seymour in itself is an ‘image’ of change and ‘defiance’ compared to Catherine Fillol, the wife of her brother who exemplifies an ‘altered or odd’ representation of emancipation.
Though the tale and struggle of Jane Seymour happened many centuries ago, her story and life lessons are still valid and relevant in modern times.
‘Nest of the Ashes’ is the first part of the series. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of the book instalments.
August 28, 2023
‘Nest of Ashes’ is the first book in a three part series charting the life of Jane Seymour by Welsh-based novelist, Gemma Lawrence. We first meet Jane when she had just given England a male heir and her past plays out in her mind as her life ebbs away.
From her own perspective, we witness Jane’s unhappy early life at home in Wiltshire with indifferent parents and cruel brother, Thomas. Whilst she wasn’t considered a classic beauty, nor a scholar or musician, Jane did excel at needlework. She had spent her formative years trying to melt into the shadows and so was delighted when her much-loved eldest brother, Edward, found her a place at court, serving in the household of Henry VIII’s sister, Mary. Then catching the eye of Queen Catherine, Jane was elevated to become a junior member of the royal inner circle. We leave this instalment as the tumultuous events surrounding Henry’s ‘Great Matter’ start to gather pace.
I very much enjoyed the atmosphere of the time created by the author and appreciated her extensive knowledge of Tudor history. Whilst we can’t be certain of Jane’s thoughts and feelings towards Catherine of Aragon and Anne Boleyn or if the revulsion aimed at her father and Edward’s first wife was accurate or totally justified, it certainly added depth and intrigue to the tale. Jane suffers feelings of isolation, inadequacy, insecurity, fear, conflict, jealousy and hate and I think this plethora of negative emotion is reflected in the choice of cover design.
This is without doubt an engaging read. Whilst some of the descriptive passages were slightly repetitive in places, I nonetheless enjoyed this fictitious glimpse into the life of Henry VIII’s third wife and mother of the future Edward VI.
I came across this book as a suggestion when scrolling through Amazon Prime options and will now be adding the second and third books in the Phoenix Trilogy to my TBR list. I award ‘Nest of Ashes’ 5 stars.
From her own perspective, we witness Jane’s unhappy early life at home in Wiltshire with indifferent parents and cruel brother, Thomas. Whilst she wasn’t considered a classic beauty, nor a scholar or musician, Jane did excel at needlework. She had spent her formative years trying to melt into the shadows and so was delighted when her much-loved eldest brother, Edward, found her a place at court, serving in the household of Henry VIII’s sister, Mary. Then catching the eye of Queen Catherine, Jane was elevated to become a junior member of the royal inner circle. We leave this instalment as the tumultuous events surrounding Henry’s ‘Great Matter’ start to gather pace.
I very much enjoyed the atmosphere of the time created by the author and appreciated her extensive knowledge of Tudor history. Whilst we can’t be certain of Jane’s thoughts and feelings towards Catherine of Aragon and Anne Boleyn or if the revulsion aimed at her father and Edward’s first wife was accurate or totally justified, it certainly added depth and intrigue to the tale. Jane suffers feelings of isolation, inadequacy, insecurity, fear, conflict, jealousy and hate and I think this plethora of negative emotion is reflected in the choice of cover design.
This is without doubt an engaging read. Whilst some of the descriptive passages were slightly repetitive in places, I nonetheless enjoyed this fictitious glimpse into the life of Henry VIII’s third wife and mother of the future Edward VI.
I came across this book as a suggestion when scrolling through Amazon Prime options and will now be adding the second and third books in the Phoenix Trilogy to my TBR list. I award ‘Nest of Ashes’ 5 stars.
June 30, 2021
This first book of G Lawrence's Jane Seymour trilogy rather daunted me at first, as it takes the story of Jane's life very slowly - by the end, she is still getting used to life at Court, in the service of Queen Katherine - but once I became accustomed to the slow pace, it really drew me in.
In many ways it's reminiscent of Susannah Dunn's 'The May Bride', which also concentrates on Jane's relationship with her (ultimately disgraced and exiled) sister-in-law Catherine Fillol - but Lawrence paints a very different picture of that relationship, seeing it as one of several childhood experiences that shape Jane's character.
Bullied by her brother Thomas, belittled and unappreciated by her mother, blackmailed by her sister-in-law and betrayed by her father, Lawrence's Jane is docile and self-effacing on the outside but steely, vengeful and determined on the inside. It's a very believable interpretation, and as the book ends with Jane having just met, and taken an instant dislike to, her cousin Anne Boleyn, also in the Queen's service but rumoured to be the mistress of the King, it's left me eager to read the rest of the trilogy.
This is a self-published book that really raises the bar and definitely deserves to be taken up by a mainstream publisher.
In many ways it's reminiscent of Susannah Dunn's 'The May Bride', which also concentrates on Jane's relationship with her (ultimately disgraced and exiled) sister-in-law Catherine Fillol - but Lawrence paints a very different picture of that relationship, seeing it as one of several childhood experiences that shape Jane's character.
Bullied by her brother Thomas, belittled and unappreciated by her mother, blackmailed by her sister-in-law and betrayed by her father, Lawrence's Jane is docile and self-effacing on the outside but steely, vengeful and determined on the inside. It's a very believable interpretation, and as the book ends with Jane having just met, and taken an instant dislike to, her cousin Anne Boleyn, also in the Queen's service but rumoured to be the mistress of the King, it's left me eager to read the rest of the trilogy.
This is a self-published book that really raises the bar and definitely deserves to be taken up by a mainstream publisher.
December 18, 2020
One of those I Tried to Read It But Gave Up. Don't get me wrong, G. Lawrence is very good at what she does, if you like long, dragged out, very descriptive descriptions. She is very good at describing, but she goes a little too long and I found myself skimming over many pages. One particular instance - when she was telling about Jane's relationship with the house cat that went on, and on, and on. I'm not sure how many pages in print (I was reading it on Kindle), but if I had to guess - 2 to 2 1/2 pages? And then again a little later on with the cat! I did read her Anne Boleyn series and really enjoyed it, but something happened after that. I've tried reading other books by her and just can't seem to get them off my Read But Never Finished shelf! To me, it seems like the books are basically descriptions rather than centering on conversations between the characters (which there is very little of).
December 3, 2020
Jane
A woman who never stood out. The authors empathy for her subject is apparent in this first of the trilogy of Jane Seymour. I always blamed Jane as one of the reasons for Anne boleyn being beheaded. How could you marry a man who murdered both of his previous wives and numerous aristocrat and courtiers, although I think that maybe she didn't have a lot of choice she is complicit. For the first time I saw things from her point of view and it has rounded out her character making her a person and not just a name. I thank the author for allowing Jane to come to life and look forward to the next in the series
A woman who never stood out. The authors empathy for her subject is apparent in this first of the trilogy of Jane Seymour. I always blamed Jane as one of the reasons for Anne boleyn being beheaded. How could you marry a man who murdered both of his previous wives and numerous aristocrat and courtiers, although I think that maybe she didn't have a lot of choice she is complicit. For the first time I saw things from her point of view and it has rounded out her character making her a person and not just a name. I thank the author for allowing Jane to come to life and look forward to the next in the series
May 22, 2021
Too wordy
I liked the overall tale, but my goodness this book is wordy. The prologue itself rambled for pages and pages. Many times the extra wordiness detracted from the story. The author would start a section by mentioning something that you really wanted to know, only to quickly veer into paragraphs and paragraphs about the view of the landscape from the window. Get on with it, dammit, I want to hear about the brother’s new wife, not the trees in the distance appearing as a bruise against the sky. Seriously, I think this story could fit into one book instead of a trilogy if some of the verbosity were removed. Still, I liked it enough to start the second book.
I liked the overall tale, but my goodness this book is wordy. The prologue itself rambled for pages and pages. Many times the extra wordiness detracted from the story. The author would start a section by mentioning something that you really wanted to know, only to quickly veer into paragraphs and paragraphs about the view of the landscape from the window. Get on with it, dammit, I want to hear about the brother’s new wife, not the trees in the distance appearing as a bruise against the sky. Seriously, I think this story could fit into one book instead of a trilogy if some of the verbosity were removed. Still, I liked it enough to start the second book.
November 16, 2020
There is a lot of info-dumping throughout as Lawrence attempts to cram in absolutely everything about the people, every day life, and political events of the Tudor era. It doesn't quite work since Jane is the narrator and she seems too well informed as well as seems to know what a modern audience would need explained to them.
However, the overall themes of birds and fire, drawing from the real life symbols of the time, worked excellently, and I do look forward to more exploration of that in the next book in the series.
December 21, 2020
A great read with beautiful descriptions of Wiltshire countryside and life in Tudor times. The author gives an interesting, captivating and vivid portraying of Jane Seymour's personality based on the little known about her childhood up to her time at Katherine of Aragon's court. Mostly fiction since so few facts are known, the author's version of Jane however might explain her later behaviour and role in Ann Boleyn's demise. This is why I am going to start reading now the second book of the trilogy!
November 27, 2024
Alright-a lot of waffle
I enjoy Lawrences books but this by far has to have been the one that was hardest to finish for me.
There is so much unnecessary descriptions that go on and one for 2/3 pages between each segment of story development, I have to be honest and say I just found this a slog with not much else other than a lot of pretty descriptions of Wiltshires natural wildlife and landscape. I love a good description for scene setting, helps me to imagine the scenario but it was too much.
Not one of her better books.
I enjoy Lawrences books but this by far has to have been the one that was hardest to finish for me.
There is so much unnecessary descriptions that go on and one for 2/3 pages between each segment of story development, I have to be honest and say I just found this a slog with not much else other than a lot of pretty descriptions of Wiltshires natural wildlife and landscape. I love a good description for scene setting, helps me to imagine the scenario but it was too much.
Not one of her better books.
October 7, 2020
Jean38no
I really enjoyed the author’s Jane Seymour character. She made Jane more real then any other author I have read about Jane. You can maybe understand how she could have become Henry’s Queen. The author made it appear there is much more to Jane then just a passive woman of her times that was used by her family. This Jane May have actively participated in tumbling Ann Boleyn’s reign. A good read.
I really enjoyed the author’s Jane Seymour character. She made Jane more real then any other author I have read about Jane. You can maybe understand how she could have become Henry’s Queen. The author made it appear there is much more to Jane then just a passive woman of her times that was used by her family. This Jane May have actively participated in tumbling Ann Boleyn’s reign. A good read.
November 16, 2020
Not quite my cup of tea
This is a story about Jane Seymour prior to her becoming Queen and married to Henry the VIII. It tells of her childhood and up to her becoming a lady in waiting to Queen Katherine. I did find myself skipping through because there was just too much narrative for me. I prefer dialogue or at least a balance. It was just okay for me and I am not sure I will read the second book when it's released.
This is a story about Jane Seymour prior to her becoming Queen and married to Henry the VIII. It tells of her childhood and up to her becoming a lady in waiting to Queen Katherine. I did find myself skipping through because there was just too much narrative for me. I prefer dialogue or at least a balance. It was just okay for me and I am not sure I will read the second book when it's released.
February 22, 2021
Nest of Ashes by G. Lawrence
I truly enjoyed this book. Several books have been written about Henry's first two queens and we know what molded their personalities and decisions. Jane has always been a quiet mystery. She was queen for such a short time and I never really considered what made her tick. G Lawrence helps full in the blanks with all kinds of possibilities. I am looking forward to reading the next in the series.
I truly enjoyed this book. Several books have been written about Henry's first two queens and we know what molded their personalities and decisions. Jane has always been a quiet mystery. She was queen for such a short time and I never really considered what made her tick. G Lawrence helps full in the blanks with all kinds of possibilities. I am looking forward to reading the next in the series.
February 7, 2022
Not quite great
Fairly good concept, a little too much detail with not enough action. I found myself skipping over pages and pages of details that didn't do anything for the story only to bet to where something happens and events are just vaguely brushed over. I'll continue the series because I can't stand to leave things unfinished, but I'm sure hoping that the author finds a better stride in the future books
Fairly good concept, a little too much detail with not enough action. I found myself skipping over pages and pages of details that didn't do anything for the story only to bet to where something happens and events are just vaguely brushed over. I'll continue the series because I can't stand to leave things unfinished, but I'm sure hoping that the author finds a better stride in the future books
November 18, 2025
Having watched the musical Six, I am fascinated by the lives of those surrounding King Henry VIII. So, when I found this book, I was immediately intrigued, and after listening to the audiobook, I was not disappointed. Seeing a glimpse into what Jane Seymour's life may have been like was completely engrossing, and I hung on every word.
If you are a fan of British monarchy and its history, I highly recommend this book!
If you are a fan of British monarchy and its history, I highly recommend this book!
November 10, 2021
Terrific historical fiction.
Lots of history. Lots of fiction.
Lots of description. Lots of interesting social details.
Not much action.
Will definitely read the others.
If Henry VIII's wives were biscuits, Jane Seymour would be the digestive. Plain and unassuming at first glance but completely underrated.
Lots of history. Lots of fiction.
Lots of description. Lots of interesting social details.
Not much action.
Will definitely read the others.
If Henry VIII's wives were biscuits, Jane Seymour would be the digestive. Plain and unassuming at first glance but completely underrated.
August 14, 2020
A very good book as always!!
I really enjoy Gemma's books about the Tudors. Her books are well written. Jane Seymour is my least favourite and usually I don't really like books about her but this one was very good.
I really enjoy Gemma's books about the Tudors. Her books are well written. Jane Seymour is my least favourite and usually I don't really like books about her but this one was very good.
September 11, 2020
Interesting Perspective on Jane Seymour
Most novels about her don't delve into her childhood so deeply. This was really fascinating because it showed how she became so quiet and meek.
Most novels about her don't delve into her childhood so deeply. This was really fascinating because it showed how she became so quiet and meek.
September 14, 2020
Love G. Lawrence!
I really enjoyed this perspective on Jane Seymour. I also think there was more to her than being a meek, mild and obedient woman. I think so many of the female characters were spot on, at least to me. Can’t wait to read the rest! Please keep writing!
I really enjoyed this perspective on Jane Seymour. I also think there was more to her than being a meek, mild and obedient woman. I think so many of the female characters were spot on, at least to me. Can’t wait to read the rest! Please keep writing!
January 14, 2021
Excellent read
A Very interesting read even if mostly fiction. The portrayal of Jane Seymour's early days fascinated me and showed the author has an imagination which might or might not be nearer the truth. Who knows.
A Very interesting read even if mostly fiction. The portrayal of Jane Seymour's early days fascinated me and showed the author has an imagination which might or might not be nearer the truth. Who knows.
January 17, 2021
A book about the Tudor Queens I had no yet read...
I was delighted to find that this book is part of a series! Jane Seymour was the least interesting of Henry VIII’s wives to me. This book has shed some new light on her & made me want to learn more. Even if it is just fiction
I was delighted to find that this book is part of a series! Jane Seymour was the least interesting of Henry VIII’s wives to me. This book has shed some new light on her & made me want to learn more. Even if it is just fiction
March 9, 2021
Great book about Jane
There haven't been many books written about Jane and the ones that have seem to contradict themselves. I lived the Anne series and was so excited to see that Ms. Lawrence decided to start a series on Jane Seymour. Cannot wait to read the next one!
There haven't been many books written about Jane and the ones that have seem to contradict themselves. I lived the Anne series and was so excited to see that Ms. Lawrence decided to start a series on Jane Seymour. Cannot wait to read the next one!
October 31, 2021
A very good take on Jane Seymour and her early life. I really liked the style of storytelling, the details and descriptons that Lawrence provides - and the insights in Jane's life and personal traits.
Look forward to the second book.
Look forward to the second book.
August 10, 2020
Brilliant. Can’t wait for Book Two!
December 2, 2020
Excellent book!
December 8, 2020
Cannot wait for the next one!
January 23, 2021
Excellent! Great story, Jane is a very likeable character, can't wait to see what happens in the next book!
February 12, 2021
Excellent read.
Loved the historic detail and in depth view of a noble woman's lot in Tudor times. Highly recommended. A good read
Loved the historic detail and in depth view of a noble woman's lot in Tudor times. Highly recommended. A good read
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