I am… very conflicted about this book.
Did I love the ending? Probably not. But it’s so beautifully written and the world building is stunning, among others. It was hard, at times, to get through some of the plot, but I did overall have a good time reading it, despite it taking me forever to read.
I am a Jack simp, though 😩 that man deserves everything, my favorite character hands down.
Firstly, keep in mind that my memory is very spotty because I read the first book around August of 2020. I have read something like nearly 100 books since then 😃 so at my discretion i probably should have reread the first book to get a fresher on… well, everything.
(for reference i remembered nearly nothing about the first book before reading this, and i sort of want to reread the entire duology to get a better idea of how i like it).
When Night Breaks follows Kallia and Demarco again as we follow their story. Demarco is now a disgraced magician, who pretty much everyone hates now (because they think he’s responsible for the events of the ballroom). On the other hand, Demarco’s just trying to save Kallia from the same fate his sister endured by looking for her day and night, to no avail.
Kallia doesn’t know where she is. Armed with one of her greatest enemies, possible ally, Jack, she has to traverse a new world without being murdered and/or ruining her own world. It’s looking pretty grim for her and Demarco, and if they want to save themselves and the world, they must find their way back to each other, before it’s too late.
characters
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Kallia- I LOVE Kallia. I love how bold and confident she is, but kind and caring. She plays her part very well, both in the book and as a main character: i may not have agreed with her decisions at times but i find her an excellently-written protagonist.
Demarco>/b>- it’s not that I don’t like Demarco, it’s just that i found him a little annoying at times. I did understand where he came from in his reasoning, but his character (something i somewhat remember) was reduced to all about Kallia. I wanted more of his own personality, more of the intriguing character we saw in Where Dreams Descend.
Jack- 🙌🙌 I LOVE JACK SO MUCH. I love all three main characters very much, but there’s something about this man. He deserved so much better. I was disappointed with how there was so much buildup for his character, especially with Kallia, just for that ending. I saw it coming but that’s one of the reasons i wished the ending was different.
Vain- Can I be honest? I hated Vain a lot. I liked her as Vain but her revelation felt not that great.
(SPOILER: I think the author should have left Eva missing, and not bring her back. Her scenes with Demarco were cute, yes, but leaving Eva missing would have left some mystery and interest, especially with Demarco’s background)
plot-
This is where my biggest problem probably was.
See, I can’t remember much about the first book’s plot 🥴 but I remember it being interesting and not boring. I found the first half of this book to be so boring.
The first half was really what made me take the most time in reading. It was hard to get through because everything felt repetitive. It wasn’t interesting and could have been way shorter, in my opinion.
But in the second half, I found the plot to be quite amazing, frankly. From Demarco and Kallia reuniting to the climax, I was entertained. Truly, in the first half, the only part I had a real problem with was Demarco’s POV because I found Kallia’s POV to be really exciting to read. Demarco’s POV felt really bland in comparison, mostly because it was made all about finding Kallia and not really anything else, but once his setting changed in the second half, I found it just as nice to read about.
I found the ending to be a little rushed, though, in its finale, and I wish it would have been a little better. I didn’t like how it ended for a couple characters and how it ended for the world, but it wasn’t too horrible that i boycott the entire book for it. I just wished for something grander, I suppose, after all the grandeur of the duology.
Overall, I think the second half made up for the first half, which is why I’m giving it such a high rating. The plot twists were predictable, but also unpredictable, in a way? The author put a nice spin on the story that was actually pretty different from the first book.
writing-
The writing in this book and duology is stunning. Beautiful to read, some of my favorite writing out there. It makes the story and world so much more magical than it already is. Angeles really has a way with words; while the book in the beginning was more lengthy than i think it should have been, the writing was so pretty to read.
Overall, the descriptions were one of the things that made this book even better and one of the defining features. I am so very impressed with this author for the duology, especially since it’s her first series! Angeles needs much more hype everywhere, in my opinion, and deserves it ten hold for the stories she has written here.
world-building-
Another one of my favorites! The world-building is wonderfully done! This world is if you mixed Caraval and Kingdom of the Wicked; the dark beauty of Kingdom of the Wicked with the carnival-like magic of Caraval. But this series has something of its own, in the world-building department.
It’s so magical to read about. Yes, I will admit that most of the world building I had forgotten, and it did take some time for me to figure out the logistics of how it works, but the world is just as beautiful in this book as it was in the first book. The writing makes it even better.
I actually think I preferred this book’s world building more than the first book’s because the underworld and the alternate world thing was very cool, like with Alastor’s club-type setting and like with Jack.
The world, magic, and setting are one of highlights of this book and series, for me, and is one of the more compelling elements in this book.
overall-
(one more thing: i think the chemistry between kallia and jack was way better than with kallia and demarco in this one. it was the opposite in the first book, but i like the parallels and i’m always in for a good love triangle 😌 the romance is amazing in this book, in my opinion. it’s everything i want from a romance)
There were definitely things I didn’t love about this book, but I think the good trumps the bad by quite a lot. The positives outweigh the negatives, in any case.
Again, super impressed with most of this book besides a few minor things, and I think everyone should give this series and author a try. It’s very well written, especially with the characters and world-building, among others, and is a very underrated series. If you enjoy YA fantasy, then you should read this book!
I’m overall very happy with this sequel. I cannot say if i liked this book more or if i liked the first book more, but rest assured: this duology has become one of my all time favorites! READ THIS SERIES.
5 stars!