Basically, a scientist discovers a race of moth people, falls in love with a moth lady, has secret moth daughter, then scientist must run away with his moth daughter because his moth in-laws don’t approve of any of this, and then the scientist is murdered. (No idea what happens to the moth lady.) Moth daughter grows up in an orphanage, people are searching for her, and the shambles of a plot ensue.
There are crumbs of an interesting story here, but this reads like the cliff notes version of the summary of the first draft. And that’s being generous. It’s all supposed to be this mystery of who Manon is, what she is, where she came from, and then the villain reveals it all in a paragraph so there’s no intrigue here. (Also, I kept forgetting who John was. He showed up so infrequently.) All this about a secret race of moth people? We meet one, Lbn, and like everyone else in this book, he barely counts as a character. Again, the secret race of moth people is tacked on AT THE END OF THE BOOK, and it’s just like, “Sure, fine, whatever. At least something happened.”
None of the characters matter. I don’t know any of them, I don’t really care about any of them. They have all the depth of a puddle on asphalt.
There’s a scene where a detective is interviewing this guy who says that he killed the Mother Superior—oh yeah, they straight up butcher a nun—because “She” is coming back, and they needed a blood sacrifice and “She” is a goddess, she’s called Lilith and Kali and Diana, and she’s amazing and she’s coming back AND THIS SCENE GOES NO WHERE. The detective is like, “This man is nuts” and that’s it. Are there people who aware of the moth people? Do they worship the moth people? Why do they need a blood sacrifice? Did a moth lady once rogue and now the rest of them are trying to be as secretive as possible? This is probably the most interesting thing that happens and it is never brought up again. (Why was Jack the Ripper brought into this at all?)
I really don’t know what I just read. This was a complete mess. This review is a mess because this book is a mess, and there is not enough Advil in the world to make this right. Also, how the hell is this classified as middle grade? The only thing middle grade about this was the chapter length.