** BELOW IS ONLY MY OPINION AS A READER OF THIS BOOK **
I was very excited when I first came across the blurb for this book on Twitter. Then, I saw the cover and I got even more fascinated about reading this story! The font styles and colours were very catchy and apt!
So, imagine my joy when the author picked me to ARC her novel!
When I received the book and got down to actually reading it... well, I can't say I was very thrilled. The story opened on a regular note - leaving hints about a past tragedy of the main character/narrator. The mystery that started building up was exciting... until she passed out and found herself in an unknown room.
The thriller aspect began right from the first chapter - something I'd never seen before. But perhaps at least one chapter should've been for normalcy. Show the character in her calm self. Ideally, I'd expect at least one chapter of normalcy, so we get to know something about the main character. But it spun right into the plot in the very first chapter and I had my doubts about the book. As a reader, I tried to comprehend this and see from different angles. It looked okay. But then, the story kept spiralling down for me from there. Slowly but surely, I kept losing my imagination, which is a dangerous thing for a reader: it means that their attention is no longer hooked to the story. Which is what happened with me.
The idea for the plot is really good. I liked how Mackenzie compared the situation to a video game, but was also mature enough to realise her life was on the line, so she should think realistically.
But the execution of this plot has gone a bit haywire and it's confusing. Add to that, sentence structure mistakes... The starting could've been better, more polished. The sense of horror was there throughout the novel and the plot was really good. But the execution of it really toned it down. This kind of narration would've done better for a non-horror contemporary new adult novel. I did not get the same vibes for it as I did when I read the blurb and saw the cover.
The villain's arc started almost in the middle of the book - he's introduced there and suddenly, we're expected to know all about him and his feelings about people touching his stuff... Well, all I can say is that the timing of introducing him wasn't right. It was either too quick or too late. Either way, the transition was not smooth and it didn't sit well with me.
I felt that Ezra kept changing the direction of his actions too drastically. Like, what kind of a person is he? He's been around since the first chapter, but even quarterway through the book, I didn't know what kind of a person he was. I mean, I kept forming something, but it kept changing. Maybe that's the kind of character he is? If he was meant to be like this - and I felt so, because at one point, Mackenzie starts suspecting him - then, this was an excellent plot-point!
However, the romance between Mackenzie and Ezra seemed forced... not natural. As though in some forced marriage fiasco that is not mentioned in the book. Again, this didn't sit well with me. Could've been a smoother transition.
A reminder that this is just my opinion.
Normally, I'd try reading up to chapter five; if my attention isn't hooked by then, I'd leave the novel and move on. I wasn't hooked, but kept going, hoping that something would improve. But all I found were sentence structure errors and incorrect usage of words which distracted me a lot. In the sense, I didn't understand what I was reading and had to read over and over. This isn't a good sign for me. But I kept trudging on.
Until at last, almost in the middle of the book, I found the villain explaining the three versions of creatures he created. That was super exciting! I loved the three levels and the villain's objective behind his creations and experimentation! I especially adored finding out the meaning of the title of this novel!
But that was probably the only exciting thing for me... The rest of the book for me was not very well edited. The danger with first-person narration is describing the things a person shouldn't ideally be able to see - for example, describing their cheeks glowing pink. They can feel warm as a result of the occurrence, but how can they see it for themselves, unless they have a mirror? And they're not always looking at the mirror, right?
In some places, there was over-narration that took away any scope of imagination. In some others, there was under-narration, so I couldn't imagine properly what the narrator was doing.
Things like this turned me off and I couldn't enjoy reading the book.
I'm sorry, but only three stars from me.