E.B. Roshan has written a relatable story in a place of her own creation. In Wrong Place, Right Time, she explores the emotional conflict raging within the hearts of several different characters during the trying time of war. Wrong Place is not my typical preference of story. Yes, it is very much a romance, but set within a fictional country in the modern-day time period. It is set in the middle of a dystopian-esque, war-torn nation and rife with emotional highs and lows--all of which guarantee a moving story. While her short novel (only 162 pages in print and about 18 chapters) has a great amount of potential, I feel several areas were lacking and others were not, making for an imbalanced story.
(And, yes, I'm dispensing of the stream-of-consciousness nonsense and attempting to makes sense with numbered lists...again. We'll see how that turns out. 😉)
Pros:
#1 Roshan doesn't shy away from anything on the interpersonal/romantic level. Our hero Boris is not your average alpha male. For one, his name is Boris. Not exactly screaming sexy Regency buck, right? He's a little soft in the waistline, smells like onions, and is almost always drenched in grease. He's got his internal issues, too. He's broken (aren't we all?). And so, yeah, my "I love macho alpha males with six-packs" side was a little disappointed...but I really do appreciate the fact that Roshan didn't conform to the idea of what a strong, loveable hero should look (or read) like. She didn't make a romance novel hero--she made a character. And there is a lot of difference between the two, believe me.
#2 She also takes the time to bring out a powerful message in her story. War isn't easy for anyone--and that shows quite well. People deal with anxiety, hatred, murder, brokenness, loss, rejection--and not just during war but in our everyday lives as well do we wrestle with these issues. I like that she didn't gloss these subjects over and that she used God's Word as a tool to bring them to rectification.
#3 Roshan's prose was interesting--and I'm getting to that--but I do appreciate the balance she had between description and...not description. I was able to picture places, people, and things without being overloaded by detail. Which brings us to our next section:
Cons:
#1 At times, her prose was stilted. Things happened in simple, choppy sentences; and while this easily conveys the action or point being made, it does not do so smoothly. I often missed the emotion in the short, concise sentences, especially in moments of trial or immense joy.
#2 Roshan invents a country all her own to nestle between countries in our real-life world. It was easy to tell that her story was set in a modern period Slavic country (presumably not too far from Russia), I gathered nothing else. There was no backstory about Sevia and Tur, which made the conflict seem less...frightening, when I had no idea why the Sevians hated the Turs or what was going on with the government or how the country was laid out, etc. I would have liked to have some backstory evenly dispersed throughout the story, as well as some indication of what their language sounded like. Did they speak a Cyrillic/Slavic language or one completely separate? It would have also been nice to have actually read some of their words and had a little more description of what their culture was like (or maybe it's a reflection of some Slavic culture and I just need to get my head out of Europe and do some research...).
#3 There were a couple cuss words. For the story to be going along smoothly in the middle, there was some language at the beginning and the end. Had I not promised a review, I would have put the book down simply because of that. When the book is labeled "Christian fiction," I expect clean, wholesome fiction. Not profanity--no matter how large or small an amount is present. Also, it would've been nice to have had a heads-up in the age department. While the rest of the story is fine for a young teenager to read, the language rates it PG-13 and makes it less accessible for a younger audience (like my fifteen-year-old self).
Long story short (or, well, short story short), I think most of my issues with this story stemmed from it being so short. Had it been the length of a full novel (i.e., over 80k and maybe closer to 30 chapters), there would have been more background present, a deeper, more believable romance story, and (possibly) more action. Since the story was set during wartime, I would've liked more action/adventure directly relating to the characters. While I do appreciate the attention Roshan paid to the internal forces of her story (like anxiety, bitterness, unforgiveness, and romance), I would have liked the same attention paid to the external forces. Throw in a few more chapters, stretch things out a little bit, maybe give Anna and Boris more personality in their perspectives, and I think it would have been fine. The message was presented well, and that is the important part.
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