मियाँ बीवी और वो

by Nitin Joshi

मियाँ है, सुरेश।
बीवी है, रंजना।
सुरेश बैंक में मैनेजर है और रंजना एक कंपनी में अकाउंटेंट है। दोनो एक दूसरे के साथ ख़ुश हैं और इस वक़्त ज़िंदगी से थोड़ा वक़्त निकाल कर अपने घर से दूर एक होटल में ठहरे हुए हैं।
एक दिन शाम को वो जब मॉल में घूम रहे होते हैं उन्हें एक अजनबी मिलता है। यह अजनबी दीपू है और इस कहानी में 'वो' का किरदार निभा रहा है।
यहीं से कहानी दिलचस्प होती है।
कहानी में कौन सा पात्र किस तरह पेश आएगा और कहानी किस तरह आगे बढ़ेगी वो तो पढ़ कर ही पता चलेगा।

28 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 12, 2020

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Reviews

[DALIP · Rating 3 out of 5]

As This Happens To Be Nitin Joshi’s First Book One Doesn’t Really Know What To Expect From It But The Very Fact That He Has Already Penned Three More Books In Quick Succession Is Proof Enough That His Books Have A Definite Market And Readership Base Across Not Just UP-Bihar Alone But A Good Part Of Entire North India Too.
As The Very Title Suggests Miya Biwi Aur Woh Is A Bold Young Adult Read That Suggests When The Flesh Is Willing Then Three Is Definitely Not A Crowd. Because Two Into Three Can Be A Tight Yet Comfortable Fit.
This Breezy And Rather Bold Almost Bordering On Risqué Read Is A Desi Romantic Quickie Read That Revolves Around Ranjana And Suresh Being The Biwi & Her Miya Suresh Who Appear To Be Happily Married But The Miya Is Keen To Take His Hesitant Wife Ranjana To The Next Level Before Their End Up In A Vanilla Marriage.
An Outstation Trip To Panipat From Their Hometown In Hoshiarpur Sows The Seeds For A Secret Fantasy To Come To Life So That They Can Pump In Some Excitement In Their Marriage Before They Drift Apart. Thus When Suresh Brings Back A Local Masseur To Their Hotel Room Ranjana Is Reluctant To Go Along With His Plan As She Isn’t Sure Which Way It Could End Up Drifting.
So Far So Good But It Is Here That The Author Springs A Nasty Surprise On The Readers Leaving Them Virtually High & Dry In The Climax.
While I Have Absolutely Nothing Against Reading A Serialised Bestseller Knowing That It Will Not Wrap Up But Shall Continue Further Into The Next Episode As It Is Not A Standalone Yet, It Is Only Fair That The Author Informs The Prospective Reader To Be Prepared That It Shall Continue Further Without Wrapping Up After The Climax.
Alas Nitin Joshi Does Not Make That Clear With The Result That Many Of His Readers Could Feel Left Out In The Cold When The Anticipation Of What Is To Follow Is High During The Climax Only To Realise That This Is Not The Expected Climax But An Enforced Commercial Break.