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Frederick Wentworth, Captain #2
For You Alone
How could he have failed to know himself so completely? Captain Frederick Wentworth, lately returned to England from a distinguished naval career fighting Napoleon, had re-visited the scene of his romantic defeat of eight years previous at the hands of Miss Anne Elliot to find his former love a pale, worn shadow of herself. Attracted by the libely young ladies in the area who regarded him as a hero, he had ignored Anne and entangled himself with Louisa Musgrove, a headstrong young woman who seemed all that Anne was not. Now, because of his careless behviour and Louisa's heedlessness, his future appeared tied to her just at the moment when it had become painfully clear that Anne was still everything he truly wanted. In honour, he belonged to Louisa, but his heart was full of Anne. What was he to do?
227 pages, Paperback
First published October 15, 2008
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Susan Kaye
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When I was growing up in North Idaho we lived on a farm. I spent a lot of time by myself, reworking the plots of all the programs I watched on TV. I didn’t know that was my imagination at play. Consequently, when I got online and began reading Jane Austen fan fiction I felt right at home. I chose writing the characters of Persuasion because I love the story of love lost-love regained. All my stories will have some elements of the second chance woven through them. I live in an old farmhouse in the Pacific Northwest with my husband, son, daughter, and granddaughter.
When I was growing up in North Idaho we lived on a farm. I spent a lot of time by myself, reworking the plots of all the programs I watched on TV. I didn’t know that was my imagination at play. Consequently, when I got online and began reading Jane Austen fan fiction I felt right at home. I chose writing the characters of Persuasion because I love the story of love lost-love regained. All my stories will have some elements of the second chance woven through them. I live in an old farmhouse in the Pacific Northwest with my husband, son, daughter, and granddaughter.
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January 5, 2009
Minor Spoilers...
I hated to give this book so few stars but the end ruined it for me. The 1st 90% of it is lovely. It picks up right where "None But You" leaves off and presents a very believable and well-written view of "Persuasion" from Captain Wentworth's perspective. It's about time he took some of Mr Darcy's spotlight! It then falls apart right at the end. I found myself screaming internally "Anne Eliot would NEVER EVER do that!" If you want to know what "that" is, read it yourself - the rest is worth it.
Also, this book had the same poor copy-editing that the 1st one did. There were several typos right in the 1st few pages. Wytherngate Press has produced some great Austenania, but they need to pay attention to the details if they want to be taken seriously as a publishing house.
I hated to give this book so few stars but the end ruined it for me. The 1st 90% of it is lovely. It picks up right where "None But You" leaves off and presents a very believable and well-written view of "Persuasion" from Captain Wentworth's perspective. It's about time he took some of Mr Darcy's spotlight! It then falls apart right at the end. I found myself screaming internally "Anne Eliot would NEVER EVER do that!" If you want to know what "that" is, read it yourself - the rest is worth it.
Also, this book had the same poor copy-editing that the 1st one did. There were several typos right in the 1st few pages. Wytherngate Press has produced some great Austenania, but they need to pay attention to the details if they want to be taken seriously as a publishing house.
January 3, 2009
For You Alone picks up right after Louisa Musgrove's accident in Lyme and is the second (and final) installment of the "Frederick Wentworth, Captain" series, Persuasion from Captain Wentworth's perspective. I waited very patiently for this second book to finally be published. I enjoyed None But You (book #1) very, very much and I was expecting a lot from this book (book #2), which unfortunately didn't quite live up to my expectations. While I really love Captain Wentworth and enjoyed this book, I got very distracted by the frequent typos and was lost in some of the conversations between characters, almost like I had accidentally skipped pages and was confused about what they were talking about or why. The end also left a little to be desired and was a little unbelievable given the personalities of both Anne and Frederick. Overall though, it was fun to imagine what Captain Wentworth was doing and thinking when he went to visit his brother after Louisa's accident and during his time in Bath, and I would recommend this book. Make sure you read Book #1 first.
January 15, 2011
This picks up from the disastrous events at Lyme, with Wentworth finally realising that he still loves Anne, but has put himself in a compromising position through his behaviour towards Louisa.
There's obviously no surprises coming up and this book continues in the same vein as before. After finding that Louisa is on the mend, he decides to take himself off to visit his brother who is newly married in the hope that it will disprove that absence makes the heart grow fonder.
I felt the book drifted a little here, when rather than just getting off to see Edward, Wentworth stays in Portsmouth and has a strange, rather pointless unpleasantness with an old friend and his wife. Likewise he picks up the likable George Tuppins who is then conveniently abandoned a little later in the book. Maybe this is to reflect his unease and lack of direction without Anne, but it was a little irritating.
Marriage has brought a change to Edward and the two brothers manage to rekindle some of their previous closeness. I enjoyed the change of perspective in this part but found Edward's shame of his involvement in slavery a bit "tacked on" rather than being necessary for moving the story on or deepening characterisation.
However, it all started to race along again when the protagonists are in Bath. Lady Russell finally shows some sense rather than snobbery and happily Baronet Elliot doesn't! Mr Elliot seemed very thinly drawn and was a bit of a textbook baddy (boo, hiss!) and his evil plan is very quickly sketched over. However, the letter (swoon!) is handled beautifully and that made me very happy!
So we get our happy ending and the book continues on a little further than the original and it's here that we're on uncharted land, and sadly this is where I was a bit disappointed.
Wentworth receives orders to return to London in ten days. Anne convinces him to go to Gretna Green to have a few more days as man and wife before returning to the Navy. Now, I couldn't see the point in this, with the 3-4 days it'd take to travel there, they'd only be married, at best, three days earlier and I felt it was not fitting with my image of Anne. I've always seen Anne as practical and sensible and surely if they've managed to wait for eight and half years they can manage a few extra days, no matter how Kaye tries to crank up the sexual tension.
The tatty inn they stay in on their wedding night just seemed too sordid for the fastidious and Wentworth. Maybe it was to set the scene for married life to a Naval captain, but it seemed to lack the romance that develops during their time in Bath and the tone and sentiments of the letter.
I was disappointed in how it all draws to a close and with the newly added characters that didn't seem to go anywhere or serve any real purpose.
There's obviously no surprises coming up and this book continues in the same vein as before. After finding that Louisa is on the mend, he decides to take himself off to visit his brother who is newly married in the hope that it will disprove that absence makes the heart grow fonder.
I felt the book drifted a little here, when rather than just getting off to see Edward, Wentworth stays in Portsmouth and has a strange, rather pointless unpleasantness with an old friend and his wife. Likewise he picks up the likable George Tuppins who is then conveniently abandoned a little later in the book. Maybe this is to reflect his unease and lack of direction without Anne, but it was a little irritating.
Marriage has brought a change to Edward and the two brothers manage to rekindle some of their previous closeness. I enjoyed the change of perspective in this part but found Edward's shame of his involvement in slavery a bit "tacked on" rather than being necessary for moving the story on or deepening characterisation.
However, it all started to race along again when the protagonists are in Bath. Lady Russell finally shows some sense rather than snobbery and happily Baronet Elliot doesn't! Mr Elliot seemed very thinly drawn and was a bit of a textbook baddy (boo, hiss!) and his evil plan is very quickly sketched over. However, the letter (swoon!) is handled beautifully and that made me very happy!
So we get our happy ending and the book continues on a little further than the original and it's here that we're on uncharted land, and sadly this is where I was a bit disappointed.
Wentworth receives orders to return to London in ten days. Anne convinces him to go to Gretna Green to have a few more days as man and wife before returning to the Navy. Now, I couldn't see the point in this, with the 3-4 days it'd take to travel there, they'd only be married, at best, three days earlier and I felt it was not fitting with my image of Anne. I've always seen Anne as practical and sensible and surely if they've managed to wait for eight and half years they can manage a few extra days, no matter how Kaye tries to crank up the sexual tension.
The tatty inn they stay in on their wedding night just seemed too sordid for the fastidious and Wentworth. Maybe it was to set the scene for married life to a Naval captain, but it seemed to lack the romance that develops during their time in Bath and the tone and sentiments of the letter.
I was disappointed in how it all draws to a close and with the newly added characters that didn't seem to go anywhere or serve any real purpose.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 9, 2009
In Ms. Kaye's first book, None But You, one of Jane Austen's most romantic and passionate heroes is reintroduced and the story of Persuasion is told from his eyes. This book, For You Alone, begins with Louisa Musgrove recovering from her impetuous leap from the Cobb and our hero, Captain Wentworth, experiencing the acute agony of being held accountable for his actions and the realization that his dreams of a relationship with Anne Elliot may never come to fruition.
Ms. Kaye's Captain Wentworth finally realizes that his bitterness and injured pride led him to behave carelessly and that it may now be too late and the consequences of it may be irreversible. It now dawns on him that Anne has always been the woman that he has measured all women against and that being married to any other woman would be a farce. The portrayal of Wentworth's character was in depth, accurate, and fulfilling. In addition, when Wentworth visits his brother Edward, their relationship is expanded and we learn much about their childhood and family history. The reader will comprehend how observing the happy newlyweds (Edward and his new wife) will torment Wentworth and at the same time make him hold onto a hope that one day such happiness can be his.
I enjoyed experiencing one of my favorite novels from the male perspective and I appreciated that Susan Kaye wrote in a reverent and respectful way and that she did not attempt to alter the original path the story took. The reason I am giving it four stars instead of five is the last chapter and a half, in my opinion it felt abrupt and unsettled. I know that another sequel is in the works, and that is why, I assume, she left some loose ends. But what I was disappointed with was that Ms. Kaye had the freedom to write the wedding scene and ending any way she desired and I feel that the path she chose did not coincide with the characters and tone she had already established. Furthermore, I know this is supposed to be from Captain Wentworth's point of view, but I would have liked to see Anne react with a little more emotion and not so much reservation after receiving Wentworth's letter.
This poignant tale of losing love and finding hope is sure to be admired by many fans of Persuasion, Captain Wentworth, and Jane Austen sequels. I am looking forward to reading other works by Susan Kaye and I am pleased to have these two lovely novels in my collection!
Ms. Kaye's Captain Wentworth finally realizes that his bitterness and injured pride led him to behave carelessly and that it may now be too late and the consequences of it may be irreversible. It now dawns on him that Anne has always been the woman that he has measured all women against and that being married to any other woman would be a farce. The portrayal of Wentworth's character was in depth, accurate, and fulfilling. In addition, when Wentworth visits his brother Edward, their relationship is expanded and we learn much about their childhood and family history. The reader will comprehend how observing the happy newlyweds (Edward and his new wife) will torment Wentworth and at the same time make him hold onto a hope that one day such happiness can be his.
I enjoyed experiencing one of my favorite novels from the male perspective and I appreciated that Susan Kaye wrote in a reverent and respectful way and that she did not attempt to alter the original path the story took. The reason I am giving it four stars instead of five is the last chapter and a half, in my opinion it felt abrupt and unsettled. I know that another sequel is in the works, and that is why, I assume, she left some loose ends. But what I was disappointed with was that Ms. Kaye had the freedom to write the wedding scene and ending any way she desired and I feel that the path she chose did not coincide with the characters and tone she had already established. Furthermore, I know this is supposed to be from Captain Wentworth's point of view, but I would have liked to see Anne react with a little more emotion and not so much reservation after receiving Wentworth's letter.
This poignant tale of losing love and finding hope is sure to be admired by many fans of Persuasion, Captain Wentworth, and Jane Austen sequels. I am looking forward to reading other works by Susan Kaye and I am pleased to have these two lovely novels in my collection!
April 24, 2009
The first 3/4 of the book was a very satisfying read; the end, however, not so much. When did Anne Elliot become Lydia Bennet? Capt. Wentworth would never have allowed his Anne to go through what Kaye's Anne did at the end of the novel. If Kaye had remained true to Austen's original characters and story, I would have given the book 5 stars. As it is, she has tarnished one of my favorite novels, and heroes, of all time. I much preferred the 1st in this two novel series. Amanda Grange remains much truer to Austen's characters, and prior to reading the end of For You Alone, I would have said that I preferred Kaye's take on Capt. Wentworth, but not now.
October 10, 2015
The thoughts of Captain Wentworth
This is the second book of Susan Kaye's books on Frederick Wentworth. I honestly liked this one better than the first, mostly because it pertains more to the story we love. Where the first book set the tone and background of Wentworth, this one tells more directly his thoughts on his lost love.
Ms Kaye weaves a wonderful tale told from Captain Wentworth's POV, her witting is smooth and easy to understand, though in None But You there was a lot of naval terms that I am not familiar with (having a key would have been wonderful). She is captivating in her writing style. I would recommend her Wentworth story to all JAFFer.
This is the second book of Susan Kaye's books on Frederick Wentworth. I honestly liked this one better than the first, mostly because it pertains more to the story we love. Where the first book set the tone and background of Wentworth, this one tells more directly his thoughts on his lost love.
Ms Kaye weaves a wonderful tale told from Captain Wentworth's POV, her witting is smooth and easy to understand, though in None But You there was a lot of naval terms that I am not familiar with (having a key would have been wonderful). She is captivating in her writing style. I would recommend her Wentworth story to all JAFFer.
November 25, 2015
The end of the story was a little drug out because I am used to the movie but by the end I wanted it to just keep going:} I love this story and am so glad I got to read it from The captains perspective. The end of this book was freaking amazing and I loved it more then any ending in any book I have ever read. I loved that everyone got put in their place and happy endings were all around. I loved the end scene it made me sigh and smile. These books were great!
April 30, 2024
Seconda parte delle vicende di Persuasione narrate dal punto di vista del Capitano Wentworth. Francamente, non ho apprezzato le lungaggini e anche il fatto che, dopo la lettera e l'accettazione della proposta, Kaye si sposti anche dal punto di vista di Anne, che Jane Austen ha solo fatto intuire. Ho trovato quest'ultima parte del libro superflua, e non vedevo l'ora di lasciare soli Anne e Frederick. Interessante la parte iniziale, invece, in cui Frederick vede uscire Mr. Elliot dai Westgate Buildings a Bath e si chiede cosa abbia a che fare con qualcuno degli inquilini poveri di quei quartieri. Non credo che Frederick fosse più illuminato di Anne riguardo a Mr. Elliot, ma comunque in questo romanzo si dà da fare per indagare circa il suo rivale, non sapendo che il cuore di Anne è solo suo.
Forse sono un po' delusa da questa serie, ma è stato comunque un modo per stare ancora un po' insieme con i personaggi del mio romanzo preferito.
Forse sono un po' delusa da questa serie, ma è stato comunque un modo per stare ancora un po' insieme con i personaggi del mio romanzo preferito.
March 8, 2009
I really enjoyed the first book, None But You, and really wanted to like this one as much..... just looking down at some of the other reviews, it seems I'm not alone in not caring much for the ending.
In fact, the whole wrapping up of the story seems to drag on for longer than needs be, in my opinion, and the ending didn't seem to me realistic. Considering [i:]Persuasion[/i:] is Austen's most romantic novel, the chosen ending was decidely unromantic in many ways!
There are also a few things that don't seem to be satisfactorily concluded; I expected to hear more of the future planned for George Tuggins for one. Also I expected to hear of Mr Elliot running off with Mrs Clay and the Wentworths having something to say about that! I wasn't clear about Mr Elliot being seen earlier visiting Westgate Buildings, as in [i:]Persuasion[/i:] Mrs Smith indicates she hasn't seen him in sometime.
Overall, I liked it better than a lost of Austen sequels out there, but it could have been concluded more satisfactorily to my mind.
In fact, the whole wrapping up of the story seems to drag on for longer than needs be, in my opinion, and the ending didn't seem to me realistic. Considering [i:]Persuasion[/i:] is Austen's most romantic novel, the chosen ending was decidely unromantic in many ways!
There are also a few things that don't seem to be satisfactorily concluded; I expected to hear more of the future planned for George Tuggins for one. Also I expected to hear of Mr Elliot running off with Mrs Clay and the Wentworths having something to say about that! I wasn't clear about Mr Elliot being seen earlier visiting Westgate Buildings, as in [i:]Persuasion[/i:] Mrs Smith indicates she hasn't seen him in sometime.
Overall, I liked it better than a lost of Austen sequels out there, but it could have been concluded more satisfactorily to my mind.
May 3, 2011
Persuasion is one of my favorite Jane Austen novels. Anne Elliot is my favorite heroine and I adore Captain Wentworth. The idea of knowing Captain Wentworth's thoughts was very appealing. That the book cover contained an endorsement from Pamela Aiden persuaded me to pick these up. I loved Pamela Aidan's take on Mr. Darcy, but these books completely miss the mark.
I can't picture this Captain Wentworth. While None But You captures his voice better than For You Alone, this man is not Jane Austen's captain. This man references that while he visited prostitutes, he thought about Anne. And, when Anne finally accepts him, this Captain Wentworth has no problems running away with her and getting married in some inn and spending his honeymoon night with her in the sordid room left vacant by the inn's working girl. This is wrong on so many levels.
If you want to read about Captain Wentworth, read the original Persuasion and draw your own conclusions as to his actions and frame of mind. Don't bother with this drivel.
I can't picture this Captain Wentworth. While None But You captures his voice better than For You Alone, this man is not Jane Austen's captain. This man references that while he visited prostitutes, he thought about Anne. And, when Anne finally accepts him, this Captain Wentworth has no problems running away with her and getting married in some inn and spending his honeymoon night with her in the sordid room left vacant by the inn's working girl. This is wrong on so many levels.
If you want to read about Captain Wentworth, read the original Persuasion and draw your own conclusions as to his actions and frame of mind. Don't bother with this drivel.
June 25, 2017
I laughed, I cried, I fumed at injustice, I felt the extreme joy of true love triumphant over all obstacles! In a lot of these alternate Austen versions, they overwrite and add modern thoughts and conflicts that just don't fit the story. There was none of that in this book, or in the first volume. While much longer than the original 'Persuasion,' the abundance of detail does not detract from the story. Perhaps the only caveat I might have would be a couple of instances where the viewpoint goes randomly from Capt. Wentworth to Anne. These instances are short and awkward--she should have stuck all the way through with Frederick's point of view. Otherwise, I enjoyed it thoroughly and hated that it had to end.
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October 10, 2015The thoughts of Captain Wentworth!!
This is the second book of Susan Kaye's books on Frederick Wentworth. I honestly liked this one better than the first, mostly because it pertains more to the story we love. Where the first book set the tone and background of Wentworth, this one tells more directly his thoughts on his lost love.
Ms Kaye weaves a wonderful tale told from Captain Wentworth's POV, her witting is smooth and easy to understand, though in None But You there was a lot of naval terms that I am not familiar with (having a key would have been wonderful). She is captivating in her writing style. I would recommend her Wentworth story to all JAFFer.
This is the second book of Susan Kaye's books on Frederick Wentworth. I honestly liked this one better than the first, mostly because it pertains more to the story we love. Where the first book set the tone and background of Wentworth, this one tells more directly his thoughts on his lost love.
Ms Kaye weaves a wonderful tale told from Captain Wentworth's POV, her witting is smooth and easy to understand, though in None But You there was a lot of naval terms that I am not familiar with (having a key would have been wonderful). She is captivating in her writing style. I would recommend her Wentworth story to all JAFFer.
November 24, 2008
The sequel story told from Capt. Wentworth's point of view. It was fun, but she certainly wasn't the quality of author as the "Fitzilliam Darcy" series. I felt she made a convincing story, but wrote it in too contemporary words and means. I would have enjoyed it more if she could have written it better in Austen's style (which meant leaving more things up to the imagination-ie. the last chapter...)
December 12, 2008
Words cannot describe how much I love this book. Just ask my boss. I was reading it while at work and I kept laughing like a school girl when it came to the letter part of the book...my favorite part.
This book was exactly how I imagined Wentworth's "voice". I tried reading another book by a different author that was supposedly from his "voice" but I had to put it down. It was nothing like my Wentworth. This book captured my Wentworth.
This book was exactly how I imagined Wentworth's "voice". I tried reading another book by a different author that was supposedly from his "voice" but I had to put it down. It was nothing like my Wentworth. This book captured my Wentworth.
January 5, 2009
All in all I thought Pamela Aidan's Fitzwilliam Darcy series much better. I did really like the first one in this duo (Only for You), but I was disappointed by this one. I was particularly unhappy with the ending. I'm sorry, but Anne Elliot simply would not have behaved in such a way.
April 9, 2010
I wrote it. If I had no life, I'd rewrite it.
January 21, 2021
"None but You" et "For You Alone"
3,5 / 5
Ces deux romans, qui ne se lisent pas véritablement indépendamment l'un de l'autre, raison pour laquelle je vous propose un commentaire commun, sont une réécriture de Persuasion du point de vue du Capitaine Wentworth. Déjà, j'adore cette idée parce que c'est mon roman favori de Jane Austen et que cela change un peu des austeneries autour d'Orgueil et Préjugés.
Dans l'original, nous souffrons avec Anne à chaque étape du livre et donc forcément, découvrir ce côté de l'histoire et les blessures du Capitaine, ça fonctionne très bien. C'est, de plus, un roman bien écrit et qui respecte l'esprit de l'original. Puisqu'il s'agit de la même histoire, il est sûrement plus facile que dans une suite de dépeindre chaque protagoniste comme il se doit mais je dois dire qu'après avoir lu plusieurs massacres en règle, ça fait du bien.
Malgré tout, ce n'est pas encore la perfection selon mes critères exigeants. D'abord, les deux tomes ne se justifient pas et les longueurs sont nombreuses, notamment dans les deux passages bien trop détaillés sans Anne : avant le retour du Capitaine et lorsqu'il rend visite à son frère, qui correspondent en plus au début de chaque tome. Il y a évidemment des scènes très interessantes au coeur de ces mêmes passages mais l'auteur, comme dans le reste du roman, en fait trop. Chez Jane Austen, quelques phrases, quelques actions seulement, nous permettent de cerner parfaitement ses personnages. Ici, nous avons profusions de détails sur leurs pensées, leur passé et toutes sortes d'éléments qui n'ont franchement pas grand intérêt. Mais après tout, il suffit de sauter quelques lignes de temps à autre pour rendre le tout plus léger.
Plus gênant en revanche, l'évolution des sentiments du Capitaine ne correspond pas pour moi à ce que décrit Jane Austen. En fait, il n'y a pas véritablement d'évolution, ou seulement dans sa prise de conscience alors que dans l'original, on sent parfaitement la colère d'abord, le ressentiment, l'envie de vengeance même. Je me suis, à plusieurs reprises, fait la réflexion que ça ne collait pas. D'ailleurs, quand les mots de Jane Austen réapparaissent, c'est assez flagrant il me semble. Dans la lettre, par exemple, on sent le désespoir du Capitaine mais pas dans ce roman ou encore, le soir du concert, sa remarque à Anne est particulièrement méchante ("there is nothing worth my staying for") et une fois encore, on ne ressent rien de tout cela dans le roman de Susan Kaye. Ça manque de vigueur, de force, de profondeur et c'est particulièrement dommage pour un roman tel que Persuasion.
Enfin, dernier point noir, et si les deux précédents sont pour moi assez secondaires et n'ont pas gâchés mon plaisir de lecture, celui-là est inexcusable. Cette fin, ce mariage pour Anne et Frederick, c'est à la fois incompréhensible et tellement loin de tout ce qui fait l'essence même de ce couple, de ces personnages et de ce roman...
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3,5 / 5
Ces deux romans, qui ne se lisent pas véritablement indépendamment l'un de l'autre, raison pour laquelle je vous propose un commentaire commun, sont une réécriture de Persuasion du point de vue du Capitaine Wentworth. Déjà, j'adore cette idée parce que c'est mon roman favori de Jane Austen et que cela change un peu des austeneries autour d'Orgueil et Préjugés.
Dans l'original, nous souffrons avec Anne à chaque étape du livre et donc forcément, découvrir ce côté de l'histoire et les blessures du Capitaine, ça fonctionne très bien. C'est, de plus, un roman bien écrit et qui respecte l'esprit de l'original. Puisqu'il s'agit de la même histoire, il est sûrement plus facile que dans une suite de dépeindre chaque protagoniste comme il se doit mais je dois dire qu'après avoir lu plusieurs massacres en règle, ça fait du bien.
Malgré tout, ce n'est pas encore la perfection selon mes critères exigeants. D'abord, les deux tomes ne se justifient pas et les longueurs sont nombreuses, notamment dans les deux passages bien trop détaillés sans Anne : avant le retour du Capitaine et lorsqu'il rend visite à son frère, qui correspondent en plus au début de chaque tome. Il y a évidemment des scènes très interessantes au coeur de ces mêmes passages mais l'auteur, comme dans le reste du roman, en fait trop. Chez Jane Austen, quelques phrases, quelques actions seulement, nous permettent de cerner parfaitement ses personnages. Ici, nous avons profusions de détails sur leurs pensées, leur passé et toutes sortes d'éléments qui n'ont franchement pas grand intérêt. Mais après tout, il suffit de sauter quelques lignes de temps à autre pour rendre le tout plus léger.
Plus gênant en revanche, l'évolution des sentiments du Capitaine ne correspond pas pour moi à ce que décrit Jane Austen. En fait, il n'y a pas véritablement d'évolution, ou seulement dans sa prise de conscience alors que dans l'original, on sent parfaitement la colère d'abord, le ressentiment, l'envie de vengeance même. Je me suis, à plusieurs reprises, fait la réflexion que ça ne collait pas. D'ailleurs, quand les mots de Jane Austen réapparaissent, c'est assez flagrant il me semble. Dans la lettre, par exemple, on sent le désespoir du Capitaine mais pas dans ce roman ou encore, le soir du concert, sa remarque à Anne est particulièrement méchante ("there is nothing worth my staying for") et une fois encore, on ne ressent rien de tout cela dans le roman de Susan Kaye. Ça manque de vigueur, de force, de profondeur et c'est particulièrement dommage pour un roman tel que Persuasion.
Enfin, dernier point noir, et si les deux précédents sont pour moi assez secondaires et n'ont pas gâchés mon plaisir de lecture, celui-là est inexcusable. Cette fin, ce mariage pour Anne et Frederick, c'est à la fois incompréhensible et tellement loin de tout ce qui fait l'essence même de ce couple, de ces personnages et de ce roman...
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December 1, 2017
Since I read these books so close together, I will review them both in here! These were pretty good books starring Captain Fredrick Wentworth! (A side note: the type is quite small in the print versions). It was really great to read the story from his point of view, and I loved seeing some side characters fleshed out (I actually didn't know he had a brother! How did I miss that!), and some original characters added. All good additions!
I wholly appreciated both Fredrick's intense pining in book two, and his obliviousness to his own feelings in book one. His growth and understanding of himself and his feelings were quite a joy to read!
I read a few criticisms over Anne "pulling a Lydia Bennet" - I assume this is in reference to her pushing for an elopement near the end of the book. I personally feel like given all the circumstances she definitely would have done just that! It felt right in line with the story and character.
I liked having a more fleshed out ending to the books. It was lovely to see a mostly satisfying end to the story. However! The second book left a lot of loose ends. In book one, Fredrick mentions that the Harville's need something to happen to save them from destitution, as he has done all he can. Does that something ever happen? What of George Tuggins? Last we saw he was left with Fredrick's brother - do he and his sister end up living there? And the biggest issue - in the last chapter Fredrick receives new orders to go to sea. How long is he gone for, will this effect their marriage?
Apparently there was supposed to be a third book some years ago - perhaps if it was published I would have these answers.
I do really enjoy these Jane Austen stories from the hero's perspective - it's so nice to see another point of view, and some ideas of what's going on in their heads.
I wholly appreciated both Fredrick's intense pining in book two, and his obliviousness to his own feelings in book one. His growth and understanding of himself and his feelings were quite a joy to read!
I read a few criticisms over Anne "pulling a Lydia Bennet" - I assume this is in reference to her pushing for an elopement near the end of the book. I personally feel like given all the circumstances she definitely would have done just that! It felt right in line with the story and character.
I liked having a more fleshed out ending to the books. It was lovely to see a mostly satisfying end to the story. However! The second book left a lot of loose ends. In book one, Fredrick mentions that the Harville's need something to happen to save them from destitution, as he has done all he can. Does that something ever happen? What of George Tuggins? Last we saw he was left with Fredrick's brother - do he and his sister end up living there? And the biggest issue - in the last chapter Fredrick receives new orders to go to sea. How long is he gone for, will this effect their marriage?
Apparently there was supposed to be a third book some years ago - perhaps if it was published I would have these answers.
I do really enjoy these Jane Austen stories from the hero's perspective - it's so nice to see another point of view, and some ideas of what's going on in their heads.
June 15, 2024
As Persuasion is my favorite of Jane Austen's novels, I should generally enjoy a retelling of it from Wentworth's perspective. And those points of the novel that stick most closely to the original narrative and simply retell the story from his point of view are the strongest bits and what made this novel interesting. I still felt there were too many side conversations with other sailors and family members that just filled space and were not so important to the narrative that they needed the space they were granted. Once again, I do not see why this had to be divided into two novels when the original Persuasion is rather slim. Also, I think the story would have been better to end where the novel did as I did not see anything gained from the extra additions. Overall, not terrible, but probably also not something I will remember for long.
April 28, 2020
I would give this 4 stars until it reaches the acceptance of the proposal. Then the story went into both points of view between Wentworth and Anne. The ending felt rushed and a bit out of character.
So this will satisfy the craving of seeing a favorite Austen work from the POV of the leading man, but the first is likely the better of the two.
Also, it could have been a glitch with my e-book, but it felt like the end sort of cut off and wasn't polished.
So this will satisfy the craving of seeing a favorite Austen work from the POV of the leading man, but the first is likely the better of the two.
Also, it could have been a glitch with my e-book, but it felt like the end sort of cut off and wasn't polished.
June 9, 2021
The author crossed the line making me unable to recommend this book (which I had enjoyed ) until she took the reader into Anne and the Captain’s bedroom. For shame! What an insult to Miss Austen whose characters were borrowed for this book! For shame!
May 8, 2025
Wentworths POV
Wonderfully executed Persuasion variation. Both books provide an in depth view of Fredericks thoughts. Scenes that Jane Austen left to a readers imagination are brought to life brilliantly by the author. Highly recommend this 2 part series.
Wonderfully executed Persuasion variation. Both books provide an in depth view of Fredericks thoughts. Scenes that Jane Austen left to a readers imagination are brought to life brilliantly by the author. Highly recommend this 2 part series.
April 1, 2019
Started off pretty well, but after being warned here on GR I flipped to end and was really unhappy with the story.
March 25, 2020
This is a two book set and I have enjoyed reading and now rereading both books.
August 24, 2023
I am not sure about the whole Gretna Green bit. It was touch scabrous, and logically unnecessary.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 12, 2011
For You Alone is the conclusion of Susan Kaye's retelling of Jane Austen's Persuasion as seen through the eyes of Captain Wentworth. While still having all of the wonderful qualities of the first book, None by You, For You Alone is not nearly as enjoyable a read.
Let me start by saying that if this were a trilogy, I would have no objections whatsoever to For You Alone. In fact, I would rate it five stars and would be writing a glowing review right now. But it's not. And that is a major problem. Why? Let me attempt to explain:
Kaye did a brilliant job in both book one and book two in bringing the world that Wentworth inhabits to life. All of the side characters are flushed out, interesting people, and the subplots surrounding them are captivating. Which is why I was so surprised to have For You Alone end with so many of those subplots left up in the air. What happens to Wentworth's promise to the imp, Mr. Tuggins? Did he ever return to take the boy into his household? If so, how did Anne react? (I mean, I know how Anne reacted: she welcomed the child with open arms. But still, I would liked to have that confirmed, thanks.) What about the courtship of Miss Elizabeth Elliot? Was it successful? If not, why? And, omg, the tragic friendship-ending misconception on the part of Gil? Did Wentworth ever sort that out? Oh, and don't forget the mysterious letter to Wentworth that set the last few scenes of the book. Is he getting a new post? Or? And the stand off between Wentworth and Sir. Walter. WHAT HAPPENS THERE??? IDEK, there is just so much that didn't get answered. And I would really have liked it to be.
Aside from all that, which might just be me wanting to more about things that no one else cares about, there was also the weird POV shift about three-fourths of the way through the book. After living exclusively in Wentworth's head for the whole of the series, we are suddenly looking out of Anne's eyes. o.O It was completely jarring and didn't do much to progress the plot along, as by that point they are already engaged and so there isn't even a reveal of her secret emotions. It seemed very tacked on to me, or at least not very well thought out, to have two, three tops, sections in Anne's POV. Especially when nothing momentous happens in them and nothing important is revealed from listing in on Anne's thoughts. Now, as with the above, if there were still one more book to go and Kaye was transitioning into a more equal mental landscape between the two, I could better understand her reasons for giving us a taste of Anne's thoughts and feelings. But as there isn't, it's just plain weird.
All of which bumps down my review to a mere three stars. Because, yes, I loved it, and, yes, I wanted more, but when I finished the book, I was left with a sense of dissatisfaction instead of the thrill of a truly good read.
Let me start by saying that if this were a trilogy, I would have no objections whatsoever to For You Alone. In fact, I would rate it five stars and would be writing a glowing review right now. But it's not. And that is a major problem. Why? Let me attempt to explain:
Kaye did a brilliant job in both book one and book two in bringing the world that Wentworth inhabits to life. All of the side characters are flushed out, interesting people, and the subplots surrounding them are captivating. Which is why I was so surprised to have For You Alone end with so many of those subplots left up in the air. What happens to Wentworth's promise to the imp, Mr. Tuggins? Did he ever return to take the boy into his household? If so, how did Anne react? (I mean, I know how Anne reacted: she welcomed the child with open arms. But still, I would liked to have that confirmed, thanks.) What about the courtship of Miss Elizabeth Elliot? Was it successful? If not, why? And, omg, the tragic friendship-ending misconception on the part of Gil? Did Wentworth ever sort that out? Oh, and don't forget the mysterious letter to Wentworth that set the last few scenes of the book. Is he getting a new post? Or? And the stand off between Wentworth and Sir. Walter. WHAT HAPPENS THERE??? IDEK, there is just so much that didn't get answered. And I would really have liked it to be.
Aside from all that, which might just be me wanting to more about things that no one else cares about, there was also the weird POV shift about three-fourths of the way through the book. After living exclusively in Wentworth's head for the whole of the series, we are suddenly looking out of Anne's eyes. o.O It was completely jarring and didn't do much to progress the plot along, as by that point they are already engaged and so there isn't even a reveal of her secret emotions. It seemed very tacked on to me, or at least not very well thought out, to have two, three tops, sections in Anne's POV. Especially when nothing momentous happens in them and nothing important is revealed from listing in on Anne's thoughts. Now, as with the above, if there were still one more book to go and Kaye was transitioning into a more equal mental landscape between the two, I could better understand her reasons for giving us a taste of Anne's thoughts and feelings. But as there isn't, it's just plain weird.
All of which bumps down my review to a mere three stars. Because, yes, I loved it, and, yes, I wanted more, but when I finished the book, I was left with a sense of dissatisfaction instead of the thrill of a truly good read.
December 7, 2019
I read this two-book variation on "Persuasion,” which is a short Austen novel and my favorite. The fact that author Susan Kaye took TWO books to tell the story from Wentworth's side annoyed me. The first book took way too much time in his life right before "Persuasion" begins in an attempt to develop Wentworth's character. But yawn! I only read the second book as an OCD response to finish the story I know and I love. The second was better than the first, but skip these books.
April 16, 2010
Book 2 starts out with much more interesting situations than the first. Within the first 50 pages there is jealousy, marriage intrigue, and hints of child abuse by a preacher. Wow. just wow. (Turns out the abuse was done by the preacher's father, but still, wow.) But sadly it did not end that way. Without giving anything away all I can say is that it seemed extremely out of character for Anne, and while I understand that she is trying to prove to Frederick her strong and non-timid character she should still have been written as herself. I did not find her to be worthy of being called a Lydia Bennet though as some of reviews have done. She was certainly not that horrible.
All in all, the majority of the book went along well, although a bit akwardly at times. Such as Wentworth's visit to his brother while bringing along a new ward so too speak, but then leaving him without a second thought. Also, he just seemed overtly emotional in this book. The first book totally nailed his voice. He was emotional while still in control. This book had me thinking he sounded somewhat like a woman of that time would have sounded like.
Basically, it wasn't as good as the first book (even with the first books super slow start) but was good all the same. I don't ever see myself rereading them though.
What annoys me most about this book is the incessant typos which are sadly much more often in this book compared to the last. Misused punctuation, a lack of spacing, and forgetting to start a new paragraphs were some things that bothered me, but when NAMES are wrong I am thoroughly annoyed. Twice Wentworth is referred to as Went-worth even though it was not at the end of a line, and in the previous book Louisa became Louise and at one point was addressed as Henrietta by mistake. I understand that the books were published by an independent publisher but still the sheer numbers of mistakes is highly annoying and quickly pulls the reader right out of the story. Also, the paper and cover were of such high quality, so it was dissapointing to realize that that same quality did not extend to the text.
All in all, the majority of the book went along well, although a bit akwardly at times. Such as Wentworth's visit to his brother while bringing along a new ward so too speak, but then leaving him without a second thought. Also, he just seemed overtly emotional in this book. The first book totally nailed his voice. He was emotional while still in control. This book had me thinking he sounded somewhat like a woman of that time would have sounded like.
Basically, it wasn't as good as the first book (even with the first books super slow start) but was good all the same. I don't ever see myself rereading them though.
What annoys me most about this book is the incessant typos which are sadly much more often in this book compared to the last. Misused punctuation, a lack of spacing, and forgetting to start a new paragraphs were some things that bothered me, but when NAMES are wrong I am thoroughly annoyed. Twice Wentworth is referred to as Went-worth even though it was not at the end of a line, and in the previous book Louisa became Louise and at one point was addressed as Henrietta by mistake. I understand that the books were published by an independent publisher but still the sheer numbers of mistakes is highly annoying and quickly pulls the reader right out of the story. Also, the paper and cover were of such high quality, so it was dissapointing to realize that that same quality did not extend to the text.
February 13, 2017
3.5 stars. I enjoyed this book very much but for the last 25 pages or so. The ending felt very rushed and incongruous with the rest of the story. I also felt there were several unanswered questions at the end that I would have liked to have seen wrapped up. For instance, what of George Tuggins? An epilogue would have served nicely.
March 2, 2016
3 1/2 stars
Ms. Kaye's second book in her Frederick Wentworth series brings with it a fresh take on the Captain's character and family. In the first book, Kaye was primarily following the outline set forth in Austen's original novel. In "For You Alone" Kaye was able to include more of her own original ideas and explored much more of Wentworth's background and his earlier life. Much of the story takes place in the interim between the events in Lyme and the Captain's trip to Bath. While visiting his brother, Captain Wentworth expresses much about his feelings for Anne and the changes they have undergone in the years since their broken engagement. We also learn a great deal more about the Captain's childhood and the relationship he has with his siblings. As with the first book, I definitely recommend this to fans of Austen sequels or variations looking for a well written Persuasion novel. I look forward to reading more from Ms. Kaye in the future and hope that the rumors of a third book in this series eventually come true.
Ms. Kaye's second book in her Frederick Wentworth series brings with it a fresh take on the Captain's character and family. In the first book, Kaye was primarily following the outline set forth in Austen's original novel. In "For You Alone" Kaye was able to include more of her own original ideas and explored much more of Wentworth's background and his earlier life. Much of the story takes place in the interim between the events in Lyme and the Captain's trip to Bath. While visiting his brother, Captain Wentworth expresses much about his feelings for Anne and the changes they have undergone in the years since their broken engagement. We also learn a great deal more about the Captain's childhood and the relationship he has with his siblings. As with the first book, I definitely recommend this to fans of Austen sequels or variations looking for a well written Persuasion novel. I look forward to reading more from Ms. Kaye in the future and hope that the rumors of a third book in this series eventually come true.
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