Finding Us

by Sarah Sargent

The last five years have been perfect. I found the man who loves me for the man I became after my life was destroyed. We built a new life together, but now something is missing, at the same time I want to be a dad. I think I found a way to do that and help the family I destroyed. Will Kevin still love me after learning the truth? Can I for both of the things I want in my life?My boss asked if he could adopt my unborn child that I carry. He’s also giving me a chance to be a part of his family, I want to take him up on the offer, because the one person I have left is slowly dying, but can I live though all this heart ache?

290 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 14, 2020

About the author

An avid reader turned writer, I finally took the ideas that keep brewing and put them on to paper. I live in Colorado with my wonderful supportive husband and two kids.

Reviews

[R Loyal · Rating 1 out of 5]

It was very poorly written. I barely got halfway through before I just couldn’t be bothered. The story was jumbled, it was like entire parts had been taken out and then left with no explanation of what happened in the time between. There was a constant switch between present tense and past tense of how the characters were telling the story, and the multiple POVs just overall made it chaotic to read. The description of the book doesn’t really match up with the story, and it seems like the author was severely fetishizing what a gay relationship is like. I’m not sure why I bothered to keep reading past the first chapter. This was very, very rough, and I’m glad I got it on kindle unlimited because it’s not worth the price to buy it outright. I’d recommend that the author actually hire an editor before publishing their work next time, and if they did for this book they’ve got to fire them, because they obviously did not do their job. And perhaps taking a writing class or two.