A GHOST OF A CHANCE:(Book 4 Ghost Detective Series): Jane Hinchey.
WELCOME TO FITZ'S CRAZY CRAZY LIFE!!!
As Everything Goes To Hell In A Handbasket...
Including the House as the Pet's Run Rampage,
Cases Are Out of Hand & Off The Wall,
Danger Lurks Behind Every Dark Corner & Bend,
And Oh No, Not Audrey's Coffee Too, Well That's The Last Straw As Life In General Goes To The Dogs!
I adore this author, the series & her characters as all hell breaks loose in Firefly Bay in every way shape & form possible as the Internal Affairs Investigation into Police Corruption amps up, so too does the action & danger considerably in this instalment of the Ghost Detective Series for adorable klutz & cat whisperer PI Audrey Fitz Fitzgerald!
As Internal Affairs Investigator Savannah McIntosh the tall leggy, blue-eyed, blonde with drop-dead gorgeous supermodel looks & hair (looks like she just stepped off the catwalks of the world & not a long ride) arrives in town to clean up the FBPD & take out the corrupt trash.
Rumour mills run rampant as everyone quickly learns dum dum dum....Shock & horror, it just so happens this sophisticated, co-ordinated lanky hot blonde, that's everything that Audrey's not, just so happens to be an another Galloway (Captain Cowboy Hot Pants) ex-girlfriend & partner as everyone expects Audrey to fall to pieces.
This book has our beloved Audrey in way over her head once again. But this time it has little to do with her inexperience as a PI, nor rushing headlong into danger without thinking about the consequences, the danger, arranging back up or pre-planning, but not even the seasoned cops will see this coming!
As much as I love everything about these Cozy Mysteries, there are one or two small exceptions and I don't particularly like writing criticisms, but if you don't, how can an author truly improve their skills & craft and work on flaws in a story if all they ever hear is how great they are? But there's a way to do both without blowing smoke up their butts.
Think about it how can they improve their spelling, punctuation & grammar if they don't have a dedicated team of editors, ARC & BETA Readers? Many typos slip through even the best of editors, after all, we're all human & we all make mistakes.
But there's a way to write it without being offensive, try, 'Constructive Criticism' written in a positive & nice way & explain why you feel as you do.
Then there's just downright 'Nasty Criticism' & no-one needs the later after pouring their blood, sweat, tears & tantrums into such hard work only to have it shot to pieces, or if you truly feel the need, have the decorum to write privately & contact the author directly.
So here's my constructive criticism for A Ghost of a Chance.
Cons:
Most books in this series have begun the same way. Audrey is on some ridiculous case no person in their right mind would splash out hundreds (or more) of dollars for on a private investigator to check out! i.e. a missing goldfish (especially without asking other household members first if they flushed it) or missing newspapers off the front lawn/porch.
And then as Fitz cracks the simple zany case, a real case drops into her lap!
And I understand not every case can be a murder or the case of the year, but they should also be realistic.
Sorry, Jane, I have no wish to be rude, never would be nasty, but I just can't see anyone forking out hard-earned money for a private detective when they can simply spend another dollar to buy a newspaper or set up a cheap camera to catch the thief in action. It's just not logical.
Pros:
Although in saying that, the formula was changed up in a big way after 4 books & a novella in the series. Not about the cases, but what happens in the cases.
I thought this was a masterstroke! And most definitely not a Con, it's a Pro, but follows on from the paragraph above.
I won't say more, I don't want to create spoilers here, but you'll pick it by the end of book 4 'A Ghost Of A Chance!' (there's a tiny clue)!
Pro & Cons:
While I loved this book, I have given this instalment a lower score than the last for a couple of reasons, but just by a tad! And it makes me feel good inside everything I read a Jane Hinchey Cozy Mystery & realise I have my usual big dopey grin plastered on my face from ear to ear the whole time I read one of her books, as I always do. These books are like a great big warm blanket wrapped around you in front of a roaring fire in the middle of winter. Pure Comfort!
The Cons:
1). While I adored it, I didn't love it as much as the last novella, but still really enjoyed it and rate it quite highly.
2). The world-building and descriptive nature which Ms Hincey excels at wasn't quite up to her usual standard, but that could be as the last book was set in a different town than where every other book of the series has been set (Firefly Bay compared to a family holiday home near a lake). It may just be the difference of needing to outline a new town, homes, buildings & outdoor woodlands covered in ice & snow, plus there's a whole new secondary set of characters (well apart from the usual Fitzgerald Clan).
The Pros:
One of the huge improvements for me in this & the last story was no mention of Audrey's signature defensive move of kicking an attacker in the family jewels! Thanks, Jane, that's a stroke of genius in my opinion & while we usually see funny videos of men rolling on the ground in agony it's usually after a child or a ball hits them when they are around friends & family; when there's no danger nor adrenaline pumping.
But in true times of danger & adrenaline, most men can & will get straight back up to fight/attack & most self-defence teachers teach better, more effective moves, stating a kick to the groin is not an effective move/tactic for this reason. S;o I have to congratulate the author for adapting this.
And can't wait to read the next episode in the series! Back to the Writing Cave Cat lady. Lol!
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I RATE A GHOST OF A CHANCE
4.5⭐OUT OF 5⭐!!!!
Do yourself a favour and check out Jane's other series & standalone books. You won't regret it. Both her Cozy's & Paranormals are Absolute Rip Snorters!
I received an ARC of this book from the author, but that in no way affects my reviews and this is my fair, honest and impartial opinion & review as always.
Reviewed By: Jewelz Pederick.
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