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222 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 14, 2016
After five long years of chaos and grief, she’d finally pieced her life back together. She’d given up everything: her savings, her farm—hell, even her own name. But it had been worth it to shake the stigma of being convicted in the court of public opinion for something she hadn’t even done. — Amy Williams
I want to start this review by saying I enjoyed it. I liked Carter and Amy, the development of their relationship. The supporting cast are likeable. The plot is more than decent, the writing is intelligent and there are some good messages (body image, antibullying). But it's three stars because I wanted more.
Lori Sjoberg is a new author for me and I read Fractured without having read Driven (Kayla and Mason's story). You don't have to have read it, there is enough there that it works without it and since Carter is coming home he explains anything the reader needs to know. Lori has an interesting style, one that is not common in romance, or at least not the romance novels I read. There is a larger storyline under the romance that is revealed to the reader in bits and pieces through contextual elements. It's slightly more natural than the life story dump.
There is perhaps an expectation that it will be equal on both sides but Carter's clear PTSD is seriously underutilised. I'm not saying having him lash out physically or shut down but it is barely addressed. The military is set up as a part of the plot and it's not well executed. Also, Amy is a horse trainer, do you realise the possibilities there? And once her issue/drama comes out there is never really a proper discussion about it. It feels off-putting and wrong. (Yeah, I'm overthinking maybe, but I'm here for the plot, not the smut I barely skim that these days).
Once I started seeing all the ways this could have been tweaked just a little. I couldn't rate any higher than three. I didn't hate it, it's a decent read, it just had potential and once that missed potential it seen it cannot be unseen,
“Figures. There’s a lot more bimbos in the Trek universe.”
“That’s not true.”
“Oh, please.” She ticked off a list with her fingers. “Seven of Nine, Deanna Troi, the green chick, pretty much every single woman Kirk slept with…should I continue, or do you get the point?” — Carter Phillips & Amy Williams
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