This could have been a nice, light beach read, but too many characters and plot lines were just not developed and/or just left hanging. The “mystery” about Stacy not liking the beach was teased from almost the beginning of the book, but the “big reveal” didn’t happen until there were only about ten pages left in the book and was really very anticlimactic and then quickly glossed over. I never got the sense that Kaye was going to change her ways or that her husband, Chase, was going to be able to stop “sneaking” food that she didn’t think he should be eating. The couple, the Goldsmiths, that invited them to go along on a trip and initially Chase is angry that Kaye said no without even checking with him, but then, on page 199, when pressed, he says “Not with those two. Are you kidding? They’d drive me nuts.” Not 100 pages later, at the end of the book, Kaye’s talking about going to Maine with this same couple, saying “I think it might be fun.” -?!?!? So many things just didn’t make sense. The introduction of Brad’s girlfriend, Iona, who brought nothing to the story and then just as quickly was written out of it. Kaye not being aware that Stacy already knew the author, Billy Jacob, when she invited him to the house (and Stacy not telling her from the get go)but then helping him finish his book - ? Stacy telling Billy to never return to the house anymore because “that’s weird” and then him showing up there with his finished book, edited by Kaye - ??? Stacy is almost four months pregnant at the beginning of the book, making her almost seven months pregnant by the end, but other than saying that she wanted a big family and her being tired frequently, nothing is really ever said about her pregnancy. What was the point of her being pregnant? For someone who wanted a big family, Stacy never seemed at all excited about this baby, nor did her husband or their children. As I said, this could have been a nice, light beach read, but too many plots either didn’t make sense or just didn’t deliver.