I would call this a poor person's Pride & Prejudice, except I do not wish to insult poor people. It was clearly inspired by it, as is obvious from the title, but boy does it not even come close. The thing is, I didn't need it to either. If this was a cute and fun but rather unoriginal small town, sunshine & grumpy romance, I would have still loved it. And it tried to be, but failed miserably.
So, I did like the set up for it, it reads very easily and quickly and the basic concepts for the characters do work, which is why I’m still giving it two stars instead of one, but that’s unfortunately where the nice things end.
The structure was terrible. What little plot there was, was pretty much pushed all in the final chapters and before that we get a toxic, problematic version of yearning, giving in and pulling back on repeat. Even if this was well done it would still have been a terrible idea. The inciting incident and the resolution of it, happen in one and the same chapter, literally within a handful of pages from each other. It really makes you wonder what the point of it all was and I suspect, this being a book from the 80s when smut wasn’t yet main stream like now, the plot was just an excuse to have a series of chapters with some steamy scenes in them. The plot in this makes “wafer thin” seem obese.
The romance, I’m sad to say, is more of the problematic kind that we see so often and which continues to baffle me why so many people are into it. Apparently, this shit has been going on for well over 40 years, no wonder the dating world is so messed up.
Vance, our MMC, seems to have just one emotion he can process and that is anger. He is angry all the time, at everyone and everything, including at our FMC Shane. He is in fact angry with her for – checking notes – “being attractive and a decent human being.” How dare she?!
He even expresses his love through anger, he’s always kissing her angrily, grabbing her angrily, shaking her angrily and doing other things to her angrily. But it’s okay, because he just can’t help himself around her and she knows that deep down that he’s a good person. How does she know this? Not a freaking clue, but she’s convinced he’s the man she’s going to marry from the minute she lays eyes on him and she even decides that if he’s doesn’t propose soon, she will…AFTER KNOWING HIM THREE MONTHS!
Do I even need to mention he has no respect for consent or her boundaries. But it’s okay though, because she secretly wants it anyway and he somehow knows that. Barf!
This is the kind of toxic shit that gives all romance novels a bad reputation and I for the life of me do not get why so many people are into this. Especially when it is this poorly written. Roberts has written over 200 books? Well yeah, I’m not surprised, even I could spit something like this out in a month, no problem.
I have heard that she has improved over the years and this one is from the 80s, so maybe I’m a little behind with my critique. I bought this in a bundle and the other book in it is from the 90s, so maybe that one will be better? I’m not holding my breath though.
Incidentally, I feel a little cheated, I bought this as part of a cosy winter reading sale (I read wintery books in summer because I hate the summer), but in spite of its Christmassy looking cover, it actually starts in September and only the last two or three chapters mention winter, snow or Christmas. I’ve said it before but I hate book marketing. Bunch of misleading assholes just trying to make a sale.
Anyway, like so many bad books I’ve been suckered into reading: good idea, terrible execution.