Didn't Like It
THIS REVIEW MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS. CONTINUE TO READ AT YOUR OWN RISK
I didn't care for Logan or Ava in this one. Logan was a whiny, self-centered, egotistical b!+c# throughout this book. He was always harping on other people's secrets, while shoving his skeletons deep into his closet.
Ava got on my nerves. You know somebody is after you, but you decide you can handle it all on your own. This is what I refer to as Super B!tch syndrome. She can't defeat dust bunnies,but she's gonna figure out how to keep safe from an unknown attacker?
This is when I find myself rooting for the bad guy.
I only read this last book in the series because I wanted to know who the Barren Mother was and find out who was after Ava and Logan. This part of the story was pretty good, but not good enough to overlook several issues.
First, there were two major inconsistencies: First, there is a bad guy/henchman using the code name Hawk. In the last book, Hawk was the deputy named Morris. This book renames Morris to make him Falcon...so someoneelse can be Hawk??? Yeah...No.
Next, Victor the sleazy pedophile is somehow shifting his desires from 9-y.o. Cassidy to 16-y.o. Monique. The problem? Victor was killed in the last book with one of Phoenix's arrows through his throat. They even described his corpse falling over and being propped up by the arrow. How was he resurrected to be the guest sleaze for this book? (OH...it was a "different " Victor? One who just happened to want the same little girl as his predecessor? Yeah...No...again.)
Then, there are smaller inconsistencies in this book along with a myriad of typos: putting question marks on statements and periods on questions; leaving words out of sentences; incorrect verb tense agreement (probably only a thing for an English major...sorry...not sorry)...I could go on.
Even though I have issues with the proofing and editing of this book, I think I would enjoy books featuring the O'Connor brothers and the Rice brothers. (Just get someone else to edit them, please and thank you!)