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Under the Lesser Moon

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“Dragons once led our people across the wastelands, away from storms, and toward hunting grounds.”

That’s what the elders say, but Akrist has squinted at empty skies his whole life. The dragons have abandoned them, and it’s Akrist’s fault. He’s cursed. Like every other firstborn son, he has inherited the sins of his ancestors. In his camp, he’s the only eldest boy left. Something happened to the others. Something terrible.

When Akrist befriends Tanar, an eldest boy from another tribe, he discovers the awful truth: they’re being raised as sacrifices to appease the Goddess and win back her dragons. The ritual happens when the dual moons eclipse. Escape is the only option, but Akrist was never taught to hunt or survive the wastelands alone. Time is running out, and he has to do something before the moons touch.

382 pages, Paperback

Published November 7, 2020

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Shelly Campbell

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At a young age, Shelly Campbell wanted to be an air show pilot or a pirate, possibly a dragon and definitely a writer and artist. She’s piloted a Cessna 172 through spins and stalls, and sailed up the east coast on a tall ship barque—mostly without projectile vomiting. In the end, Shelly found writing stories and drawing dragons to be so much easier on the stomach.

Shelly's tales are speculative fiction, tending toward literary with dollops of oddity. She enjoys the challenge of exploring new techniques and subject matter, and strives to embed inspiring stories in her writing and art.

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Author 77 books17.4k followers
September 18, 2020
The publisher of this book asked me to read it in advance of publication, hoping that I would love it enough to give it a cover quote. When I saw the cover copy, I zeroed in on "Dragons" and the statement that those who enjoyed the Dragonriders of Pern might enjoy this title as well. And I was like, sure send it to me! I missed the "This story is a dark, tribalistic, adult fantasy." And boy oh boy it was dark. I'd say this is a dark fantasy and borderline horror. The main character endures a great deal of physical pain and suffering.

For those who enjoy my books, this isn't for you, there's no humor or romance. If you enjoy dark fantasy, this book is well written and the world building is excellent and the tribes/society Campbell has built is finely detailed although very horrifying!
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October 13, 2020
In a world much different than ours, a young lad suffers unimaginable mental and physical pain, just because of his cultures unyielding belief system. This is his story of his struggles to not only cope, but to escape the fate that lies ahead for him.
I honestly could not put this book down , until I finished it... it’s that good! I can’t wait for the second book, so that I can dive back onto the rollercoaster ride that Shelly Campbell has written.
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October 13, 2020
This book about a fantasy Stone Age world grabs you from the first sentence. It is not the genre of book I normally read, but I was completely hooked by the end of the first chapter and pretty much ignored family and friends until I finished reading the whole book (as my husband will attest to). It is very well written with vivid descriptions of characters and the world they live in. I can’t wait for book 2.
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904 reviews154 followers
June 14, 2023
Review originally published in JamReads

Under The Lesser Moon is the first book in the Marked Son series, by Shelly Campbell, one of the SPFBO9 entries. A character-driven story, narrated with a great immersive voice, in a sort of Stone Age fantasy world, following the life of Akrist, a boy who is experiencing a really difficult existence due to the belief system of his tribe. As a small note, I read this book in audiobook format, and I have to say that Ryan Haugen's narration definitely enhances the experience of this novel.

Akrist is a daeson, a cursed son, a boy who is marked for sacrifice by his tribe, having a status that makes him be rejected by the rest; his tribe believes that firstborns inherit the sins of their ancestors, and they need to be sacrificed on specific circumstances to bring back the favour of dragons.
When Akrist discovers the truth thanks to a boy from another tribe, time starts racing for him. His only option consists of fleeing to the wastelands before the two moons touch between them, and for that, he needs to learn how to survive there; while the odds are not in his favour, Akrist proves he's a real fighter, gaining soon another purpose in his life, helping other in his situation.

Campbell narrates this using a first-person style, which results in a super immersive story, especially from the side of Akrist. We get a really well-developed main character, as we are literally inside his head, experiencing his suffering and struggles; but as a consequence of this decision, it is true that secondary characters end up being a little bit plain.

The world is extremely original, a sort of secondary world inspired by the Stone Age, which is a relatively unexplored setting in the genre, with several creatures and tribes, each one with its own belief system. It feels alive due to the amount of detail Campbell puts in the book, and the grittiness and darkness of the narration combine perfectly with this kind of world.

The pacing is really agile, making the book feel extremely short in comparison with its real length. There is no space for dull moments, despite I would say I was not a big fan of the romance components at some points (but I can understand why they are there).

Under The Lesser Moon is a marvelous dark and gritty fantasy, perfect for fans of The Clan of the Cave Bear and grimdark fans in general. Certainly, I want to see how Akrist's story continues in Voice of the Banished.
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Author 5 books142 followers
April 23, 2024
I received an audible code from the author, and boy am I glad, because the narration by Ryan Haugen is top tier.

This story has a unique world. The somewhat nomadic Hunter-gatherer communities definitely made me think of American Indians. But it’s also an incredibly bleak world too. Dystopian by definition, but still unique enough to not be entirely dark.

Akrist is marked as the community outcast by being the first born son. He’s the last remaining eldest son in the community, and all he knows is that something bad happened to the others. As an outcast he is often ignored, starved, looked down on. At worst, when he does receive actual contact with other humans, he is beat for the tiniest infractions.

After a special visit from a special someone that will be left unnamed because spoilers, it was interesting to see the novel progress around the idea of someone shunned being almost kind of welcomed in by necessity. It’s not all smooth and easy, both for the community, and Akrist. The struggle of which follows along with him during his entire life.

My one gripe (which I will try to remain as anti-spoiler as possible, but be forewarned) is that the character gets away from meeting the same fate as the other older boys just for it to circle back to it several years later and happen anyway. I do understand though that it’s creating the impetus for the book 2 character arc, but I just wish it had been done through something else entirely, especially with most of his life being so rough.

Personally a 4/5*! I most definitely need to keep going with audio for book 2!

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1,374 reviews240 followers
November 5, 2020
Under the Lesser Moon is an immersive dark fantasy that follows the life of Akrist, a daeson, or cursed son, who is marked for sacrifice by his tribe. Treated as less-than for his entire life because of his cursed status, Akrist’s story is heart-breaking. A boy who isn’t touched, who doesn’t know love, who lives on the outskirts of society, Akrist is rejected by his tribe daily. His own mother detests him, and his father barely offers him comfort.

Akrist is a survivor, and, against all odds, he perseveres. As he develops feelings for someone in the tribe, and they try to save other daesons from their terrible fate, Akrist finds a new purpose. However, is Akrist prepared for the wasteland that awaits? Will he be able to escape undetected? If he’s not sacrificed, will the Goddess ever return her dragons to their world?

Akrist is exceptionally well-developed, and I wholly rooted for him as he faced unfathomable and brutal obstacles throughout the novel. He has a lovely bond with a unique animal in his care, which makes sense since he is so connected to animals. Later in the story, Akrist finds friendship and support in some unexpected places, especially since one of his connections is with a creature that he’s taught to loathe and fear. I loved that Akrist managed to find hope even when things seemed hopeless.

Other characters, including several unusual creatures, are dynamically developed as well. I liked that so many characters had distinct and unique personalities and felt that this added such depth to the story. I could feel how conflicted Akrist’s father was, for example, wanting to love and protect his son while trying to appease his rage-filled and fearful wife. Even non-communicative creatures were vividly and effectively portrayed.

In addition to the fantastic character development, the world-building is exceptional. It’s a well-layered and immersive world, and I found the creation myth and its influence on society to be particularly fascinating. Strict, brutal, and unyielding religious and social beliefs dictate the lives of the characters, with most unwilling to stand up for change. I found it interesting that the people who are revered and respected are often the worst characters, and the good people are maltreated, rejected, and disrespected. There are definite messages here about a person’s worth and what society values.

This is much darker than my normal read, and the story includes difficult situations and events that might trigger readers. Child abuse, physical abuse, sexual abuse, animal abuse, violence, and disturbing sacrificial rituals are just some of the horrific things that the characters, especially Akrist, endure. However, if you like dark fantasy that borders on horror at times, then you will like this book. It’s a unique read with powerful messages, and I’m curious to see what is in store for Akrist as he continues his journey. Thanks so much to the author and Mythos & Ink for a copy of the book in exchange for my honest review!
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August 14, 2025
this self-published fantasy novel started off really strong for me! it's a stone age fantasy, which definitely isn't something i've read a lot of before, and i thought the mythology of this world was so cool—the culture and beliefs of this tribe, and how they drove their actions. the story also did a really good job of making me sympathize with the main character, and there were many moments in the writing that really made my heart ache for him. also the vaiyas! especially vax! i loved them so much. they were these dinosaur-like bird creatures that these camps raised, and they were precious.

i don't normally agree with marketing comps, but this one using assassin's apprentice and the clan of the cave bear as its comps actually made a lot of sense, and i could actually see it. not so much the a game of thrones comp though, but maybe that was just for the grimdark aspect. unfortunately, where it started to lose me was around the halfway mark when the romantic interest was introduced, and sad to say, i was just a little bored. at that point in the story, the events and narration got a bit repetitive. i'm the kind of reader who, once i notice a certain repetition in the writing style, i can't stop noticing it, especially if it's something that bugs me. in this instance, it's the way the main character invokes their god's name. "sweet nasheira", "mother of yurrii", "oh guides", it was just repeated too many times and took me out of the story every one of those times, hindering my enjoyment of it. the climax did get more exciting though, albeit a bit predictable, and it does not shy away from all the brutality.

since i got the audiobook for this for free for review, i'll review the narrator's performance as well. i thought he did a really good job with the overall narration and had a lot of great emotion in his voice, especially during the parts with the main character's inner thoughts, but audio mixing was really weird when it came to characters' dialogue, especially when there were exclamations. it got so distracting to the point that i had to stop listening the audio for a while because it was actually detrimental to my reading experience.

overall, this was a decent read! i don't think i'm invested enough to continue with the series, but i'm still glad i read this though, and got to experience something different.
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1,727 reviews215 followers
January 8, 2024
Under the Lesser Moon by Shelly Campbell is a gritty stone age fantasy.

While it isn't perfect, it was gripping and I devoured it in a matter of days! I especially enjoyed the different setting, with no knights and swords, but a tribe on the move, who hunts and gathers for everything they need.

I adored the giant birds! Especially how they, and their care, are integrated into every aspect of life. I don't usually like anthropomorphized animals, but even though these can talk and are way cleverer than any normal bird, they still felt like actual animals. The everyday life and setting was definitely a strength of the story!

I mostly liked the tone and voice of the main character, who is an outcast destined to be sacrificed. There's a romance that actual romance fans will likely find boring, but me, who usually hates romance, found quite good. As in, it's pretty matter of fact and straight forward, even though surrounding circumstances are in the way. There's no long back and forth or such, and while it's an important part of the character, it didn't take over teh story.

There's quite some twists and turns, but if you have read a lot, most of these you can see coming.

For me it doesn't register as grimdark, as I real a lot of *really dark* books, but there's quite some gory scenes so if you're sensitive to that, be advised. Outside of those, I think this would be a good book for younger (as in 16+, not middle grade...) or newer readers in the genre!
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576 reviews64 followers
May 30, 2023
3.6 on my score calculator.

This book is really fresh in its ideas and super stylish in the way the author tells the story. I thought the prose were excellent and the story really flowed throughout.

I liked the MC but all the other characters sometimes felt a bit weak and without substance, mainly I think because we spend so much time with the MC. The romance section didn't do a whole lot for me in truth

I was impressed with the imagination in the story and the mythology style history. The unique creatures and companions were a highlight. The worldbuilding was great too

I would be surprised if this doesn't really land for some of the blogs reviewing this book in spfbo9
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242 reviews99 followers
July 26, 2023
Hi all I am back after a long break.
Under the Lesser Moon is a low to no magic fantasy novel set in a Stone Age tribe on a planet that seems to be much like earth weather wise but has two moons which are important to their creation story.(I say maybe low because there’s some premonition and the ability to communicate with a Chinese style dragon that could be magical but no one is throwing spells around haha).

I found the world building to be very good and thorough without any info dumps that didn’t fit into the natural flow of the story.

The creation story of the tribes in this world centers around the belief that a female god created two sons and the older son killed the younger son out of jealousy. Because of this murder the oldest son of every mother is shunned and treated horribly by the tribes.

Our MC is named Akrist and is one of these older sons called Daeson and we follow his life as an outcast. The narration is in his voice and he is the only POV throughout the novel.

This is an adult book and is definitely Grimdark. The world itself isn’t grim but the character interactions definitely are. There is rampant child abuse perpetrated on the Daeson so if that is a trigger for you then I would recommend skipping this book. There is some sexual coerción but it’s not talked about in graphic detail and there’s no outright rape talked about.
The litany of bad luck and poor treatment that Akrist our MC suffers from during this novel is legion and I have to admit that there was a short period of time about 7 hours in I thought about just stopping my listen because between Akrist’s own poor decisions and the general bad luck he had it was just a bit much. I would have been happier if he’d had about 70% of the bad events happen to him haha.

I always like to talk about the writing with self published novels and it was very well written. I got into that movie in my mind, that I drone on about and my wife hates to hear me mention at this point haha, almost immediately and I was able to stay there the entire time I listened.

As a result of my work and life in general most novels I’ll review will be based on listening to audiobooks so I’ll start including the narration and how the audiobook was in these reviews going forward.

The narrator for the audiobook was amazing. He did the different voices quite well and it was clear that he had read the material before he began reading. I’ve noticed that even some of the most popular novels from major publishers sometimes suffer from having famous narrators who clearly haven’t read anything before the first time it’s spoken into a microphone. You get a lot of someone saying dialogue in a normal voice and then the text will say the character yelled that line out in distress. In this case the narrator appropriately yelled on those occasions.

My rating for this book would be more of a 3.5 or a 4 minus as we used to say. I enjoyed most of the audiobook and I did find myself listening both in my tractor and on the way home from work. If there had been 20-30% less tragedy and awfulness for poor Akrist our MC then I would probably have given this book a 4.5. If you are triggered by child abuse then don’t read the book. If you like Grimdark tales then I think it’s worth giving the book a shot. You don’t see a lot of Stone Age fantasy and I think that the story is going to get better for Akrist moving forward. Big things happen at the end of the story that should lead to an interesting book 2.
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454 reviews30 followers
November 1, 2020
I read this book for a blog tour, so thank you to the publisher and the author for letting me take part in this tour and for providing me with a free copy of the ebook in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.

This was a really unique and different fantasy story to those I usually read. The main character is also really unique, he was the firstborn son of Aella and Hasev and because of his birth, he is shunned by his community because he is cursed. I can imagine this society existing, so it was really rather eerie.

I thought the world-building, although on the simpler side, was still very rich and I could picture it vividly. We focus mainly on Akrist, the daeson (cursed son) in this book, and although there are loads of other characters, it is his story and his path, I really enjoyed that for a change.

The plot was very interesting and once I reached about 20%, I just could not put this book down, I was hooked. The writing style was also a unique one, it flowed beautifully and even though the pacing was on the slower side, I enjoyed it very much.

Overall, this was a great first book in a new fantasy series and one I will be continuing as soon as possible! I gave this book 4 stars and I recommend to fantasy lovers, especially those who love dragons, legends and a unique and endearing character!
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Author 9 books21 followers
January 21, 2021
The writing, the world-building, and the characters were all compelling. Akrist lives in a merciless world, as he is the firstborn cursed son. The nuances of the world's creation myth turned guide-to-living are explored throughout the book: I always felt like I was learning something new about how the rules affected individual characters and their relationships. The impact of tradition and belief-systems on a community feels real and very pertinent to our world today. Campbell creates scenes with incredible detail and deep understanding. I would be interested to know what kind of research went into creating this rich fantasy world. Oh, and there are dragons! I can't wait for the next book!
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Author 6 books82 followers
May 25, 2023
For someone like myself who doesn't read a lot of fantasy, I have to say UNDER THE LESSER MOON by Shelly Campbell was a pleasant surprise. My commute to and from work has been really quite enjoyable this past week. Ryan Haugen, the narrator, gives a stellar performance here. Had me immersed the whole time.
From the characters to the world building, the highs and lows throughout, everything felt like a genuine labour of love. I even said that to myself a few times in the car.
Shelly Campbell is a great writer.
I really need to check out her other work soon. Part 2 is already out there. I also need to read GULF as well. Heard great things about that.

Anyway, UTLM gets a deserving 5 stars.
2 reviews1 follower
October 15, 2020
This book follows the life of Akrist, a young boy marked for sacrifice since his birth.

We watch as he struggles to come to terms with who his society says he is, and how to cope with relationships he’s not allowed to have.

I picked up the book and couldn’t put it down; the story grabs you from the first page. The world and characters are so detailed you feel like you’re right there with them.

You’ll like this book if you enjoyed Game of Thrones.

I can’t wait to read the next in the series!
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620 reviews70 followers
October 12, 2023
Riveting dystopia

He will know no love of any kind. Ever. He is sin & soon will serve as yet another sacrifice. For the goddess favour to return.

Wow! Bleak & disturbing belief system. A mesmerizing & harrowing page turning gem! #SPFBO9 semifinalist!
290 reviews9 followers
August 10, 2023
Loved this!! Cursed firstborn sons, dragons, wandering societies, messed up creation myths! Can't wait to find out what happens next
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Author 13 books45 followers
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November 13, 2020
I had the pleasure of beta reading this story while the author was writing it and it is truly one of the most compelling tales I’ve ever read. The lines between sacred and profane are smudged here, as Campbell explores the lengths a society will go to in order to protect themselves from the unknown. There’s a fine line between the rituals we establish that bring hope and joy to our worlds and those that require a brutal sacrifice to ensure safety and security. It’s more than fantasy fiction. It’s a deep dive into the anthropological mechanisms that drive each of us to conform lest we face banishment. One moment you find yourself turning pages panting for relief, and the next moment you’re begging for more. Campbell’s rare talent shines hope in the darkest of places. When this story is done, you won’t forget it.
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2,101 reviews33 followers
April 29, 2023
Challenging, dark, mysterious, reflective, sad, and tense.
Slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? No, except for poor Akrist.
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0 ⭐

This story is sort of depressing. It is where the reader and the main protagonist (Akrist), come to an understanding that his life is one of toil and trouble, and that not much good is going to happen in his life...so enjoy the small improvements, for it will NOT last long.

My wife and I listened to this book, together. She's a Horror fan and I'm a Fantasy fan (nerd), and we pretty much were NOT satisfied to the fullest in either area, but what we DID get...was a Epic Pre-Historical tale of nomads...in this fantastical world.

The story is built upon three main parts (as we saw it while listening):

1) Introduction to Akrist's life. He's not welcomed in his clan, because he is connected to worms. The "good guys" are connected to dragons. When worms are around, dragons are NOT. So...his presence is not liked. So, his mother basically abandons him, his dad is okay with him, and so are his brother. 

Also, he does not always make the soundest of judgments...just saying.

2) Akrist falls in love...and basically finds someone who "sees him" and accepts him as a good person. Well, this is probably the best time of his life. Because the story is the way it is, this time of his life comes to an end in a dramatic fashion...with some body horror aspec. Marie was chuckling, as I was hunched over and grabbing hold of my private parts in sympathy to Akrist and all the boys were going through. It reminded me of The World According to Garp...and the scene where Garp cruised down the hill without the motor and smashed into the another car in his driveway. What was happening in the OTHER car mad ALL the men in the crowd gasp and reach down. Most all the women were chuckling, or all out laughing. Yeah. Similar vibe.

3) The time after...and Akrist's found friend and then family...and what he would do for them...even to his detriment, though they both helped each other through difficult times. This seemed one-sided at times, but we do believe it was a two-way street.

Now, the way this story ended made us both scratch our head. The return of one character, but then the return of another...then the end (which we saw was approaching), but didn't think it would be THAT abrupt.

We were left looking at each other...thinking...it can't be over, can it? But it was. 

We want to know more...so that is good, but we are left unfullfilled in a sense. We had the appetizer, the salad and the meal, but we wanted the dessert and the coffee afterwards...so that the discussion of the story could be cordial. 

It feels like the author gave us the first three parts of the meal, but then shoved us out the door without the dessert and the coffee. 

Ugh. 

That does NOT mean we didn't enjoy it, one bit. We were invested in Akrist and wanted him to get back to his tribe and his love. That hasn't happened yet. 

Obstacles have gotten in his way. 

We need to know what happens, next. 

👉Content Warnings

Graphic: Body horror, Torture, Confinement, and Violence

Moderate: Injury/Injury detail, Death, Domestic abuse, and Pregnancy

Minor: Rape and Sexism
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18 reviews4 followers
March 16, 2026
I first picked this novel up at a local fan convention (like Comic-Con) directly from the author, who had a booth in the artist section of the vendor hall, back in 2024. It is the first of a duology called The Marked Son. I didn't start reading it until last year, before the same convention started, intending to finish it to determine whether I liked it enough to purchase the second book in the duology. Unfortunately, time ran out before the convention, so it kind of got put on the back burner while I read other things. I dislike taking physical books with me on my commutes to and from work, so it was only in downtime when I had days off or for a bit before work that I sat down to read it. I really enjoyed reading this book, despite how long it took me to finish it.

Akrist is an outcast, simply because he is a firstborn son, they are called daeson. In the world they live in families, see first-born sons as inherently evil because of the actions of their goddess's first-born son, Pau. Nasheira, their Goddess, had two sons, Pau and Yurrii. Pau became jealous of Yurrii and murdered him. Pau was the elder of the two brothers, and so because of this sin, all first-born sons are damned, and the elders and their parents perform the ritual that sacrifices the daeson to appease their Goddess, during the convergences of the two moons in their sky. Akrist's perspective reveals the treatment of the Daeson through his personal experiences and hardships as he endeavours to survive their cruelty and escape his destiny after discovering the details of the ritual sacrifice from an older Daeson.

The world-building in this story is wonderful. You get a clear picture of how the characters in the story live, their convictions, and their beliefs. The story is told from the point of view of the main character, Akrist. Shelly Campbell does a wonderful job showing us his experiences through life, capturing his anguish, fear, but also his resilience. Akrist is a character who has every reason to give up, but he does not. While the story's pacing is slow in the beginning, it gains speed about a quarter of the way through the book. The writing flows nicely, so you are reading pages faster than you expected, or at least that is how it was for me.

There are some content warnings if you decide you might like to read this book, which the author warns about on one of the first pages of the book. The content warnings include violence, non-graphic sex, physical abuse, mental abuse, sexual abuse, animal cruelty, kidnapping, blood, and death. If the depiction of themes like this trigger you, I would advise you to proceed with caution if you choose to read this novel.

I would definitely recommend reading this book if you enjoy fantasy novels and great world-building. I will definitely purchase the second book as soon as I can, because I need to know how the story concludes, and I'm now mad at myself for not finishing it sooner.
204 reviews2 followers
November 3, 2020
This book is superbly written and sucked me in to the narrative right from the first page. It was one of those books where I just needed to know what was going to happen next.

Before I talk more about the plot/characters, I have to say that this book is dark. Really, really dark. It won’t be for everyone. I’d say it surpasses grimdark in places and heads straight for horror. It was utterly unrelenting in its darkness as well, we as the reader never got chance to draw breath before our characters were hit with the next crisis, the next horrific bit of information.

The world building in this book is excellent, and utterly believable. It’s not a world I’d want to live in though. The society is built around a tale where the Goddess’ first born Son kills the second and is punished by the Goddess for it. As a result first born son’s are shunned their entire lives with minimal contact with their families and tribe before being horrifically sacrificed in the hope of appeasing their Goddess and bringing in Dragon ‘guides’

Our main character Akrist is one such first born son or ‘daeson’ and his story is filled with pain.
The author explores all aspects of such an upbringing, the psychological and physical damage that is done. It’s not an easy read.

The other members of the Tribe are well characterised as well none of them feel flat and the camp feels realistic. They don’t have an easy life either, it’s a hard hunting/gathering life. Their leader is drug addled and cruel and often brings suffering in his wake.

Akrist was likeable and you were always on his side even when you wanted him to take a different action. The Vaiya’s (giant birds, used a bit like horses) were adorable and I wish they existed.

This book is marketed on its dragons and although they are undoubtedly important to the story and the world built here we actually see very little of them in this book. I suspect this will change as the series develops but don’t go into this one expecting a lot of dragon interaction.

Despite (or maybe because of) the unrelenting darkness this book was gripping. I found myself willing everything to be alright.

With thanks to Mythos and Ink Publishing for sending me a copy in exchange for honest review.
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391 reviews8 followers
November 19, 2020
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Under a Lesser Moon is the first book of Shelly Campbell’s series The Marked Son. Set in a unique world that is part Stone Age and part fantasy, it follows young Akrist and the unique struggles he faces. As a first born son he is an outcast, looked down on by everyone in his clan, his only concern is to try and survive. When another clan joins his and Akrist meets another first born son like himself he learns a terrible truth – first born sons are raised only to be sacrificed when the two moons meet.

Dear reader, I won’t mince words – Under a Lesser Moon is a very dark book. The world that Akrist and his clan lives in is not a friendly one. Survival is a day to day struggle with the possibility of death at every turn.

As dragons are an important part of the story, some might compare Lesser Moon to Anne McCaffrey’s Dragonriders of Pern series. Unfortunately, this is not an apt comparison. A better comparison would be to compare Lesser Moon to Jean Auel’s Clan of the Cave Bear series.

With Under the Lesser Moon, Campbell has created a new world that is both cruel and beautiful. The characters are well fleshed out and though some of them are not the nicest of people, their actions and ways of thinking are not out of place in the land they inhabit.

As much as I enjoyed reading Under the Lesser Moon, this is not a book I would recommend to everyone. There is a good deal of dark subject matter and there are some scenes that could be triggering. Older readers and readers that are familiar with Auel’s Cave Bear books will likely enjoy this new series. For every one else, proceed with caution but also dare to step out of your comfort zone.
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27 reviews28 followers
January 14, 2022
First book of the year leggooooo!

I finished the book in one sitting, it was very engrossing. So why did I not give it five stars?
I have a bone to pick with Akrist's inner monologue, the tortured good man with low self esteem thing is really played out in fantasy novels, I want something new!
This is in no way mitigating the very real acts of injustice he's subjected to, or the way his psyche is shaped as a consequence.


Its an entertaining book, and a great story! But the writing could have been a lot better. 3.5 stars

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43 reviews3 followers
June 4, 2021
This is hands down one of my favourite books of 2021 so far.

I picked it up totally by accident at a local bookstore and thought that it looked right up my alley.

1) the creation myth was unique and I particularly enjoyed how it had been twisted into something so dark.

2) the world building was incredible. I’ve never read a Stone Age fantasy series before. It was easy to immerse myself in the world Shelly created and it left me wanting to know more. Her world building is expertly delivered. You’re not going to get pages of info dumping, but rather a slow burn to understanding the world and society that Akrist lives in

3) character building was amazing. Akrist was very well written and had great character development. I appreciated that he didn’t just get over his traumas and insecurities and continues to carry them with him through to the end of the book. I can’t wait to see how he continues to grow in later books.

My only critique is that the first 1/3 of the book had some interesting pacing, but it was necessary for world and character building. The later 2/3 was so captivating that I couldn’t put the book down and finished it in one sitting.

This book gets 5 stars from me.
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January 12, 2021
This is a HARSH and DARK world and I love it!
Few of the characters are shown as actually ‘evil’ while doing things that are abhorrent to us today. They are very well explored and humanised as a product of their religion/tradition/history. The MC Akrist clearly has a moral code closer to modern society and sees vilification for the sin of being the first born son. Despite his best efforts and some hefty supernatural intervention his rugged individualism cannot overcome a culture hell bent on oppression...Yet?

Impressively for all of the animals in this harsh world, even the prey animals wounded in hunting traps are shown compassionately. The wurms turned out to be even more complex and interesting than expected early which I greatly appreciated.

Special mention to the Vaiya, the intelligent birds of burden who really stole the show. Many of the strongest moments were shared with these lovable companions.
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18 reviews1 follower
November 7, 2021
I really enjoyed this books and to say a gobbled it up in own day (and a nearly all nighter) would be a misrepresentation of how much I enjoyed it. The characters were well developed the storyline hit all the right spots and the heroes journey was fantastic.

The only reason I cannot bring myself to give it 5 stars is that it was very hard to read in some places. I don't handle violence against children well, and this book it about a culture of people who sacrifice their firstborns every 12yrs in a horribly gruesome way. It was heartbreaking. At times I came close to putting the book down because I just couldn't take it anymore. But I didn't, a couldn't put it down at all.
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Author 9 books14 followers
November 12, 2020
I loved this book. Once I started reading it, I had to finish. The pacing is so expertly crafted, the tension real and palpable.

The story is brutal, full of terrible ordeals that shape the main character into a twisted mass of emotional and physical scars. Along the way, you learn a ton about the fascinating world in which he dwells.

A tale of survival when everything, even the manner of your birth sets the world against you.

The ending is wicked, and demands you immediately start emailing the author to harangue her for book 2. So much more to come!
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Author 11 books1 follower
January 2, 2021
Under the Lesser Moon is a dark, visually harsh and emotionally heart wrenching story. Beautifully written, with engaging characters and unique details that bring the world to life. I read this in just over a week. There were a few times I had to stop and put the book down because I was too nervous to read what happened next. An engaging, thrilling read from the first page.

Looking forward to the next in the series.
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Author 15 books475 followers
October 16, 2022
A unique, dark fantasy about a character named Akrist who endures the unimaginable in his quest to survive to see the next day. The world-building and the primitive setting bring the story to life and make is disturbingly realistic. If you're looking for something creepy to give you the feels, this is the story. I highly recommend it to dark fantasy fans.
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20 reviews
March 1, 2021
The only reason it took me a week to read this book is because I don’t ever want it to end. Shelly draws you fully
Into a world of her imagination with fully developed characters and culture that leaves you wanting more.
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