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Tales of a Seductress
After an unfortunate mishap with some stairs, I found myself in a fantasy world filled with sex and violence. Stripped of everything and turned into breeding stock by the first band of goblins I encountered, I turned to the only weapon I had available to me, my body! Now, I’m a seductress, the first and only RPG class that weaponizes the art of seduction. I will survive this new and dangerous world the only way I know one guy at a time.
906 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 21, 2020
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October 12, 2022
Really needs some proofreading, and a better understanding of double negatives.
Just some examples:
"I groaned, stumbling to the ground, a sharp pain spiking through my leg. That wasn’t to say I wasn’t in particularly bad shape. This was only a testament to how bad I was looking right now."
So she IS in a bad shape. Which makes the whole sentence bizarre. I am in bad shape but I'm only like this because of how I look? I would have figured it had more to do with the wound in her leg than what shape she's in.
"It doesn’t matter. I wouldn’t feel pity right now, even if she didn’t deserve it. The guys, though… they all deserved it after what they did to me."
Whoever "She" is doesn't deserve pity, so our MC won't feel it. Kind of a "Duh" moment.
And the guys DON'T deserve pity, so contrasting someone who doesn't deserve pity to another person who doesn't deserve pity just makes no sense.
"My only regret was that I didn’t have to power to do it myself."
the power to do it myself.
I could go on.
It's a poor showing.
Just some examples:
"I groaned, stumbling to the ground, a sharp pain spiking through my leg. That wasn’t to say I wasn’t in particularly bad shape. This was only a testament to how bad I was looking right now."
So she IS in a bad shape. Which makes the whole sentence bizarre. I am in bad shape but I'm only like this because of how I look? I would have figured it had more to do with the wound in her leg than what shape she's in.
"It doesn’t matter. I wouldn’t feel pity right now, even if she didn’t deserve it. The guys, though… they all deserved it after what they did to me."
Whoever "She" is doesn't deserve pity, so our MC won't feel it. Kind of a "Duh" moment.
And the guys DON'T deserve pity, so contrasting someone who doesn't deserve pity to another person who doesn't deserve pity just makes no sense.
"My only regret was that I didn’t have to power to do it myself."
the power to do it myself.
I could go on.
It's a poor showing.
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