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The First Argentines #2

Warrior's Ransom

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After a pilgrimage to the East Kingdoms seeking a blessing from the Fountain, source of the land’s magic, Sir Ransom Barton returns home in search of two dreams: Claire de Murrow, the heiress he loves, and a patron for his warrior skills. Unexpectedly, Ransom finds himself in the favor of Devon, the notorious Elder King. Brought into the ruler’s mesnie and given two wards of his own, Ransom is devoted to his privileged new position. He’s also privy to the running of the realm and to all its courtly intrigues—notably, the machinations of the king’s three remaining sons, all engaged in a manipulative battle to become heir to the throne.

As Ransom is thrust into the middle of poisonous family conspiracies and betrayals, allegiances are shattered, and Ransom fears he may end up serving his worst enemy—or worse, face exile for demonstrating loyalty.

Drawing on his developing powers, Ransom takes up arms against the dark forces coming in a war that will test the limits of his courage and determine the fate of the dangerous and fractious Argentine dynasty.

408 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 18, 2021

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Jeff Wheeler

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Wall Street Journal bestselling author Jeff Wheeler took an early retirement from his career at Intel in 2014 to write full-time. He is a husband, father of five, and a devout member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints. Jeff lives in the Rocky Mountains.

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1,287 reviews133 followers
April 1, 2022
Ransom the hero started out well but later turned into this Gary sue who, for no logical reason, was "chosen" as the savior of a family of kings who were all fools.

I wish he'd allowed them to all die even at the risk of destroying their world. Now, that would have been a story that made sense. What an eejit.
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970 reviews140 followers
May 25, 2021
Thank you so much to 47North via NetGalley for the early read of Warrior’s Ransom! I am a huge fan of the Kingfountain books, and this sequel to Knight’s Ransom is another big winner for me. All opinions are my own!

I read this book back before it was released, and honestly think it put me into a weeklong book and writing hangover.l

The action in this one was pretty breakneck. I thought we were going to spend half the book on Ransom’s pilgrimage, and was pleasantly surprised to find him right back in Kingfountain trying to play peacemaker between the king and his sons again.

Intrigue, honor, knights and warhorses, and of course war…

What I especially liked about this sequel was how it examined everyone as a morally gray character. Ransom and the poisoner are two sides of the same coin, both with the potential for great evil. Ransom recognizes this and does his best to serve his king with honor, vs succumbing to the black morass of his war deeds and experiences.

Devon Argentine (the elder king) is absolutely an amazing character as well, he might be sadistic and dangling the kingdom in front of his sons, but I really think that he just wanted to ease one of them into a peaceful secession. Watching his arc in this book was more than a little bit heartbreaking.

I also love love love how honorable Ransom is towards women: in the age of publish all the promiscuity, Ransom was totally ready to marry that lady that kissed him in front of his men! But Clare, oh Clare… It’s time for some Clare in the spotlight.

Estian is back… Benedict is back… we gain a few new characters that are all really nice additions too, and the poisoner is absolutely terrifying in this one.

If you’ve read this far, you will learn what this book taught me… So Wheeler makes things really, really convenient for Ransom, almost to the point that it deducts from the story. He really doesn’t though: no one can deny that Ransom is a hero, brave as anything, and deserving of all his rewards. I think things happen conveniently because Wheeler wanted to set up a certain storyline going forward, and that’s where he put his intrigue and energy. I know a lot of authors do this, and I tend to deduct for it, but here I can pretty plainly tell what the real objectives of the story are.

If I think the author is just being lazy and having things fall into place, I can’t deal with it. I think this is the first book that is carried enough by it’s intrigues and action, that I can forgive the things handed Ransom in order to further the story along.

Lastly: I really liked how Wheeler is starting to explore some of the ancient legends of Kingfountain. I think after so many books he can afford to give us a little deep lore at this point, and I hope this continues in book two!

Dialogue, self reflection, great characters, and a plot of war between King and sons that will have your head spinning… Don’t forget Ransom’s terrifically ugly horse… I fully recommend the series to pretty much anyone!
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1,212 reviews74 followers
May 23, 2021
4 stars

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This is another great book in this YA Fantasy series. If you haven't read the first book yet, you have time to pick it up and read, and then read this one before the third book comes out in September 2021.

Sir Ransom Barton starts the book off on a pilgrimage to the East Kingdoms looking for a blessing from the Fountain, the source of magic for the kingdom. He then returns home to find a new patron and to seek out Claire, the heiress he loves. He arrives in Kingfountain and is unexpectedly welcomed by King Devon and made a part of his Council. The King grants Ransom another castle and two wards to oversee. He then sends Ransom on several missions to try to broker peace with the King's enemies. One of these missions puts him in contact with the poisoner who shot him in the leg and killed Devon the younger. His suspicions of who she is is correct, but she proposes she and Ransom join forces. As King Devon's sons start to betray him and join forces with his enemies, Ransom is thrust into more and more dangerous battles. The tides are turning against King Devon and Ransom's sense of honor and duty could leave him once again without a patron.

I loved this book. The action starts immediately and the intensity doesn't let up until the satisfying ending, although, of course, there is a juicy cliffhanger in the epilogue. The book is paced well and is a quick and easy read. Ransom shows growth in this book, and is not the young, inexperienced knight he was in the first book. He has a better sense of himself and trusts his instincts more, and is able to speak truth to power. Of course, he still serves a master, and must follow orders he doesn't necessarily agree with.

Claire is still imprisoned in the tower with the Queen, and still resists King Devon's efforts to marry her off to his sons. She sporadically hears news of the battles going on and is frustrated by her inability to take action. King Devon begrudgingly allows Claire and Ransom to write each other, which helps bring the two closer together. Of course, in typical star-crossed lover fashion, neither is sure of the other's feelings, so time is lost in the lack of communication. I highly recommend you start reading this series. I can't wait for the next book to come out.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from NetGalley and 47North. All opinions are my own.
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December 19, 2021
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Warrior’s Ransom by Jeff Wheeler is the second book in The First Argentines Series. We continue on in this story with Ransom going on a journey to the Eastern Kingdoms seeking blessings from the fountain. He returns from his pilgrimage to meet with his love Claire de Murrow and express his feelings. He is also in need of a patron for his skills and needs to be honor-bound to his patron. On his return, he finds himself in a position of favor from the Elder King Devon Argentine and is assigned two wards of his own to take care of. With more responsibilities comes great sacrifice. Nothing comes easy for Ransom as we witnessed in the first book, and the pattern continues on in this one as well. Ransom must serve his King and make sure to keep the peace in the kingdom amid the family drama, court politics, and treachery that threatens to bring the King down. Ransom has to make hard decisions against the enemy that is bringing war and his loyalties will be tested to their extreme.

The story takes a life of its own with events being placed to bring forward certain outcomes and yet somehow Jeff wheeler manages to keep the story interesting and exciting to read. There are battle scenes, epic betrayals, moral decisions to make, and court politics devouring the peace. I love how much there were parallel circumstances events from the Kingfountain series and this series. Despite the similarities, the events take a life of their own and the author’s decisions regarding the decision-making process for the previous series really helped me see the wisdom in his writing choices. The framework is similar to the first book and follows Ransom and his patron and the choices they make. Claire’s perspective is again given to us through her letters and diary entries.

Overall, this book builds on the first book and takes us on an unforgettable journey for Ransom, and takes us through his tumultuous life. I am really excited to see how the next book will shape up to be with the cliffhanger Jeff Wheeler left us within this book. This is the perfect YA epic fantasy series all readers should try out and explore. It’s massive in its scale of world-building with parallel worlds and interwoven worlds coming into play and references to the former made in the stories. It’s easily accessible, simple in its execution, and effortlessly engaging. I am giving the book 4 stars and looking forward to reading the next book.

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1,607 reviews174 followers
June 11, 2021
After reading the first book in this series, and finding it a little lackluster, I wasn't sure how I was going to like this one. Fortunately I enjoyed this book a lot! I was really happy that it didn't parallel the Kingfountain series too much, the way I thought the first book did. There are definitely the same themes of honor, truth, and loyalty that are included in all of Jeff Wheeler's books, but I appreciate those themes.

I especially like that the protagonists in Wheeler's books struggle with their decisions to do the right thing, but eventually do, despite the personal cost. I also really like how layered the other characters are as well. This book, just like Wheeler's others, shows us how people aren't just black and white, but many shades of gray. The king in this book did some despicable things, but also some things that made me want to like him at times too. The things that were done by certain characters in this book were truly tragic, and it was mainly because of pride. It's sad when people can't get out of their own way before their actions cause tragedy.

I also want to say that I really appreciate that this book, and all of Jeff Wheeler's books can be read and enjoyed by any age. There are not a lot of books series like that any more. This book left me wanting to read the next book right away, but it hasn't been published yet. Needless to say, I'm looking forward to reading the next two books later this year!

Thanks to NetGalley and 47North for providing me with an ARC of this book.

Review also posted at Writings of a Reader.
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14 reviews
June 18, 2025
Jeff doesn’t know how to write a bad book🙏🏼😌
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2,174 reviews219 followers
February 21, 2024
I think I actually enjoyed this one more than the first of the series.
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653 reviews3 followers
February 26, 2021
A little disappointed in this book. While there was some excitement and action, I feel like the book started and ended in the same place. While there is a new king, the story didn’t really progress much in my opinion. I’ll say it again, the second book in a series always seems to lag behind the first and last and I think this happened.

I do want to say, that I am a huge Jeff Wheeler fan and think he is an excellent writer and amazing story teller. Maybe I am being too strict because I expect so much.

Thanks to NetGalley, 47N, and Jeff Wheeler for providing me with an advanced reading copy..
468 reviews12 followers
January 2, 2022
Warrior's Ransom is the second book in The First Argentines series, and I enjoyed it even more than the first book. Ransom continues to struggle finding a master worthy of his loyalty, and I have to admire his earnestness and his steadfastness as I am not sure I would be able to do the same in his shoes. This second book explores that theme of trust and loyalty and the dilemma it imposes on men when the people they serve make poor decisions that put many lives in jeopardy.

Ransom is a character to admire and I love his growing development in this book. I was a little disappointed that his journey/quest was only a small part of the book, but he did receive a gift during his journey that would certainly help him during his difficulties later on. Even though he has many doubts and is not always sure his decisions are the right ones, he trusts in his loyalty and in his honour and his duty as a knight. There are many who mock him for his ideals and urge him to break his bonds of loyalty, but I have to admire him for his steadfastness and sticking to his oaths, even when he is torn. And having magic on his side to guide him doesn't hurt either. A lot of his decisions are made with the Fountain's guidance and blessing, even if he doesn't understand the reasons behind those pushes and pulls he receives.

Although I do find the journal writing from Claire to be intriguing, I find it irritating at the same time. I feel like I don't really know her that well and wish we got her information through her point of view rather than through chronicles. I think learning more about the machinations of the castle would have been interesting and it would have developed a few other characters that were kind of left in the background.

The plot development is coming along nicely and there is certainly a lot going on. Although the story focuses on Ransom, there is almost an innocence to him as he gets caught up in a lot of political intrigue that he only seems to sense at the last minute; I think his loyalty doesn't always let him understand how others can be so deceptive. It's not that he is blind or naive or unwary, but still seems shocked when people do dirty, underhanded things. And there is a lot going on. Ransom is constantly putting out fires or avoiding poisonous traps; the twists and turns were plenty. I do wish that Ransom would take the time to explore the Fountain blessed magic, or the legends, and see how they could help him, as they did feature more prominently in this book. I was hoping for a bit more of that in this book.

Warrior's Ransom continues to focus on Ransom and in this one, he learns more about his fountain-blessed magic and how it can help him during his battles and with his decisions. The writing, as always, is detailed and full of complex characters. Highly recommend this series.
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3,401 reviews52 followers
March 18, 2021
I received this ARC from the publisher and NetGalley in order to provide an honest review.

First let me say that this is book 2 in a new trilogy - The First Argentines. But, this trilogy is based in the Kingfountain world which already has several series and trilogies that have come before it. While I do not think that you necessarily need to read any of the other series in this world to be able to enjoy this trilogy, I DO think that this book can not be read as a stand alone. You really need to read the first book - Knights Ransom - to get the set up, the timeline and just an understanding of what is going on at this moment in time.

This book brings back memories because it starts us with two children who meet and become friends while being kept as "wards" of the King at the Palace in Kingfountain. In other words, the King had the children to keep their noble parents in line. Sound familiar? Here is where knowing the events in earlier books gives the reader a much bigger picture of the dynamics.

The trilogy itself is based on the writings of a journal found in the archives of one of those children as she is growing up and is said to be one of the only books or writings that have been found that is able to give scholars a better idea of the events that happened so long ago - at the beginning of the Argentine reign.

Claire is hilarious. I loved her right away. She has spunk, tenacity, and she is cheeky and full of snark. The inclusion of a diary entry at the beginning of each chapter is done brilliantly. I will say that I'm glad Mr. Wheeler placed a map at the beginning because geography is important in this series and people are traveling everywhere in the world so the map was very useful.

But, the star of the show is Ransom. What an absolutely wonderful character. I fell in love with him immediately. I ran the gamut of emotions because a lot of things happen to Ransom in the first book and I can not tell you how many times my eyes watered for him, just thinking about what he had to endure. But, this is book 2.

Ransom starts off on his quest and we finally get to see him getting more information on what it means to be "fountain blessed". In the later trilogies, that knowledge is more common knowledge, but back then not only were there not many people who were "fountain blessed" but on the Argentine side of things, they were pretty clueless about what they were up against.

Without giving away spoilers, book 2 is a fantastic continuation of Ransom's story. What can I say other than there is so much drama and intrigue going on in this book that it is sometimes difficult to keep track of all of the schemes in place. And of course, Ransom ends up in the middle of it...EVERY TIME.

If book 1 was the set up, book two throws everything at the wall. There really was more action than I was expecting because Mr. Wheeler tends to build and build as the books go forward so if this is book 2...man, I can not even begin to imagine what to expect in books three and four.

I do have to say that it has been a while since I have been in the Kingfountain world and I really did forget how Mr. Wheeler just is able to pull the reader in and then grab tight and hold the reader on the edge of your seat as things go from bad to worse. I kept saying to myself, "okay, just one more chapter" and before I knew it, it was morning and then I thought, "might as well finish it" because apparently sleep wasn't happening.

One thing I want to say. Ransom is such a wonderful character. His loyalty is something to behold and his sense of honor makes it hard not to just absolutely fall in love with him. I am looking forward to the Argentines learning more in the books to come about the Fountain Blessed and for them to begin to understand the power of the Fountain, the Wizr board, and all of the other things that this involves. As I said before, if you have read all the previous books, it is so exciting to try to see where everything fits in to later things (**hint hint* the heir that will be born that needs to be protected) Oh, and the "thing" with Brythonica! How exciting! It's almost like Easter eggs being found. Kind of.

So, yep. I really liked it. Have REALLY liked the first two books and was excited to see that the wait for book 3 will not be too bad.

This review and my opinions are completely my own and I thank NetGalley for giving me the opportunity to get a sneak peak at this book.
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3,282 reviews274 followers
March 15, 2021
In this, the second in the First Argentines series, Ransom finds himself once again serving the king. But machinations and deception abound as he works to ensure the safety of the country without betraying his own heart. It's a nail-biting, one-sitting read that is both enchanting and absorbing! And, just when one thinks the story-line might fall into the predictable, it completely twists again and the reader is racing in another direction! Luckily all those turns lead to a very satisfying end that leaves one happy they read - while still anxious to continue!

*It is highly recommended that the previous book in this series be read first, as much of the background is contingent upon that story.*
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28 reviews
June 27, 2022
6.5/10

I think it took me around a day to read this lol, but that does not necessarily mean it was my favorite.

Similar to the first book, the plot moves extremely fast which can be a good thing. In this entry, however, I think it does more harm than good. Interesting conflicts and dynamics are established in the story, but they are resolved as soon as they are introduced which left me feeling disengaged. It becomes hard to care or treat the story seriously when it changes so drastically every 10 pages.

I still really enjoy the subtle fantasy aspects, romance between characters, and medieval universe so that is why the rating is a 6.5. I simply wish there was more to the story than plot twists and betrayals in every chapter.
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Author 1 book50 followers
February 4, 2022
The second book in "The First Argentines" series has middle-book syndrome., in my opinion.

Wheeler is a good writer, but I think he could have put a bit more effort into this story. There were elements of 'tell', especially with the letters at the beginning of each chapter; flashback scenes might have worked better here.

Some of the antagonists seemed not fleshed out, compared to the very much fleshed out main character.

Alas, it's an epic fantasy, and we all know I no longer read 'epic' well.
Profile Image for Amanda Sue.
151 reviews7 followers
October 26, 2022
Okay.. 2.5

What happened here because this book was not it. I struggled so hard to get through this one. I literally had to sit myself down in complete silence to just push myself through it. It was so slow and felt like a repeat of the last book. Another war, another king, another book of reading the same letters from Claire while stuck in a tower. It was painful.

I was also disappointed about the change in the character of Alix. I really didn't want her to be a bad guy, but I guess it makes sense so it's not a repeat of Owen and Evie, which the author does talk about at the end of the book. I'm guessing she's going to be the villain of book 3, which I have already started reading.
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1,115 reviews14 followers
January 13, 2022
This series of books is getting in the way of work as I catch myself thinking about the books while I am at work. I find myself daydreaming about what is going to happen and what has happened. The books are very easy to picture in my mind while I am reading.
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74 reviews1 follower
June 12, 2021
I love this series. So well done. He captures emotions very honestly but does t flood you with words. Amazing.
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509 reviews11 followers
March 25, 2022
Wonderful book

This second book in the series has Sir Ransom fighting more battles for his king and this keeps him away from his lady love. There is much political intrigue in this book between the king and his sons.
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April 1, 2024
3.5 stars- ehhhh. First book was better and tired of Ransom being a goody goody!
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Author 2 books22 followers
June 5, 2021
Great second book. Ended more happily than I was expecting, looking forward to book three!
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474 reviews6 followers
April 26, 2021
Love Ransom. Easily one of my favorite characters that I discovered this year. I realized while reading that he is a lot like the Goblin Emperor. More precise review to come later.

I received a copy of this book from net galley in exchange for an honest review.
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138 reviews3 followers
April 1, 2021
I was given a free copy of Warrior’s Ransom by Jeff Wheeler (author), 47North (publisher) and Net Galley in exchange for an honest review. Warrior’s Ransom is the second in the First Argetines series and will be published on May 18, 2021. Knight’s Ransom is the first in the series and was published on January 26, 2021 and the third and fourth books will be published soon.

I did not read Knight’s Ransom.

This review will not contain any spoilers.

I would characterize Warrior’s Ransom as high fantasy featuring knights, kings, warring royal families, romance, and a bit of magic.

The setting of the story in what appears to be medieval European kingdoms at war with noble families choosing sides.

The magic system is limited to the main character and one of the antagonists and it seems the ability to use magic is innate.

Warrior’s Ransom has one main character who is knight and is virtuous, kind, loyal, honest, reliable, and nearly infallible. The main character is three-dimensional and very engaging. Mr. Wheeler does a commendable job in fleshing out several of the side characters so that each character appears individual and distinct particularly the king, his sons, and wife.

I thought, however, the antagonists are flat and one-dimensional. I think I would have preferred if Mr. Wheeler wrote some of this story from their perspectives to get a better idea as to their motivations and reasons for doing what they are doing.

The pacing of the story is at a steady clip and the story flows from beginning to end without the mushy middle.

Even though the pacing is solid, I thought there is more telling than showing. It came in sharp relief when the main character’s romantic interest is featured in letters in the beginning of each chapter. I think if this character’s arc was featured in scenes, instead of letters, the story would have additional layers and would have had more of an emotional impact.

Mr. Wheeler presents several interesting plot and character bits that I would have preferred to be fleshed out and expanded to make this story more complex and emotionally satisfying, but this is Mr. Wheeler’s novel and not mine.

Even with these quibbles, I think I would be interested in reading the next novel in the series because the main character is engaging and interesting.

I would recommend Warrior’s Ransom to readers who like fantasy stories featuring knights, warring within royal families, some political intrigue, and told in a straight-forward manner.

I rate Warrior’s Ransom 3.5 stars.

I would like to thank Jeff Wheeler, 47North, and Netgalley for the free ARC.
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1,172 reviews24 followers
March 17, 2021
Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC!

I'm loving having more books set in the Kingfountain world, my favorite of all of Wheeler's series. I feel like Wheeler hits his stride in these books where he draws from European history. There's always lots of heart and critical choices being made.

Warrior's Ransom follows directly after Knight's Ransom, picking up with the layers of intrigue and warring nations. Will this Devon king ever figure out what he's done? King Devon jumps off the page as the most willful and inconstant king - making me crazy, but Ransom is loyal to a fault. Devon's sons are all a mess. Mind you, these messes make for an exciting read.

I liked how we got to see more of the mysterious caped woman in this one. Have you guessed her background? I had my sneaking suspicions, but I'll keep them to myself to let you make your own discoveries.

I'm still giving it five stars because I'm so happy to be back in Kingfountain with its special brand of magic.
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316 reviews6 followers
November 27, 2021
The second instalment of The First Argentines book series.
The story picks up close to where the last one left off, where Ransom is on a pilgrimage into the deserts to seek out a Fountain and find out for once and for all if he truly is Fountain Blessed. He is then caught up in a continuation of Devon the Elder's war games with his sons. Ransom and Claire's fates are uncertain as King Devon dangles heiress after heiress in front of Ransom, and pressures Claire into accepting one of his many marriage schemes.

But beneath all the pressure from the King, there are legends and relics of the court of the fabled King Andrew coming to light, as well as deceit and intrigue from the Occitanians.

Allegiances shift, and all eyes are on Ransom, watching and waiting to see if he will remain duty bound to his Mad King. What is done cannot be undone.
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335 reviews49 followers
September 16, 2021
An amazing sequel to Knight’s Ransom

Again told through the diary of Claire.
Ransom now in the center of political intrigue, working with King Devon the elder and seeing his power on the rise within the kingdom and himself.
Dealing with a plot from the kings sons to overthrow him and take control.
Lovers separated and forced to marry others for political strength, great battle scenes that Wheeler has a tremendous knack for writing.

Such an engaging story with twists and turns that keep you intrigued on what’s going to happen next, because in typical Wheeler fashion the story is always much deeper than outside appearances show.

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80 reviews5 followers
May 18, 2021
If you recall my review of the prior book in this series - and honestly, why would you? I rated it just Four Star though I am certainly what most would characterize, fairly, as a Jeff Wheeler fan. Here are the highlights from that review -

Honestly, this review pains me to write. I've struggled with it, delayed it, written it, deleted it, rewritten it, deleted it again, and... I'm still not perfectly happy with it. Sadly, I feel the same with Knight's Ransom, the First Argentine. and disclosure, I received an Advance Copy in exchange for an honest review.

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Structurally, King's Ransom is hung on a familiar framework, but with some inspired choices. By placing the novel, chronologically, prior to earlier works, Jeff avoids the pitfalls of some of his earlier crossover works. Dedicated and experienced readers can rediscover the magic of the world all over again, without passages of explanations for readers new to the world. It also obviates the need for particular reading order, whether chronologically in world, or chronologically by order of writing. This is another choice I strongly applaud.

That brings me to Claire, and the reason for a four star rating, after the praise above. In the first book of the series, Claire is one of many background characters, but a clearly important one to future works. Knowing Jeff's style and themes, I expect certain things of her character, her story arc to raise to the fore in future works. In short, I bring baggage to the story, baggage this work failed to satisfy. Scenes where Claire was present were fine - not exceptional - but fine. Too brief to show the kind of development I was seeking, but enough to lay groundwork for future novels.

Jeff Wheeler also, quite effectively, makes use of epigraphs in prior works. Some of which contain profound quotes which remain with me long after the last page is turned, the novel done. Here, however, many epigraphs are given over to letters or diary entries attributed to Claire. I absolutely hated these. They captured almost nothing of the character for me, and did little to advance the story line. Mostly, they consisted of brief reporting of events happening to her, and her response at times, but little enough of her struggles to comprise those responses. I believe the book would have been better had they been entirely stricken from the work.

For that reason, a book I loved is rated just four star. I'm eagerly looking forward to Claire getting the pages she deserves in a future work.

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Having set the groundwork then, this is another Four Star work.in the series, which I will continue to eagerly consume. Claire gets more pages, and they are markedly better than her appearance in the epigraphs of the prior novel, but that is, honestly, a very low bar. Ransom continues in his efforts to find a Master worthy of his trust and loyalty, as events buffet him from place to place, ruler to ruler. Job-like, he continues to suffer while passing the tests before him admirably, the Reader's hopes buoyed through these setbacks by a certain sense of "rightness", confident that - eventually - Ransom will be rewarded in his efforts.

Some few of the scenes seemed a little rushed, Ransom's luck (or fate) changing rapidly for reasons not always evident, but behind it all, a chessboard is played by an unseen hand. Other characters, besides Claire, receive further development as well - enough so that as I anticipate the release of "Lady's Ransom" (Book 3) in the coming months, I begin to hope that its not about Claire at all....

and in the interest of full disclosure, I did receive a very Advance Readers copy at no charge to myself, though I'd have used my Kindle Unlimited subscription on release date otherwise (and may still) - as some scenes may have undergone minor edits before final publication.

Edit - picked up a copy via KU, now listening to the Audio version.
434 reviews3 followers
April 30, 2021
An e-copy of this book was provided to me in exchange for a fair and honest review. Thanks to netgalley and 47North. This book is the second of what appears to be a four book series called the Argentines, set in the world of the Fountain. The Fountain is the mysterious magic source of this world that provides boons, items and guidance to characters in the novel. This series, and Wheeler, who is one of my favorite writers, is set apart by a constant attention to the economics of the world. This makes it feel more realistic. While the main character no longer has the money troubles as he had in the first book, economics plays a major motivating factor in this world, as it does in ours. The motives of the antagonists are partially economic, but still not fully elucidated. Both sides have magical items and powers, and, presumably are getting guidance from the fountain, but the books hasn't yet unveiled why these forces appear to be in opposition. In the author's note, Wheeler says that there are some real life inspiration for the battle scenes, which I find interesting in its own right. The battle scenes are very well done. Think Last Kingdom or anything by Anthony Ryan or Evan Winter. The book feels nicely paced as well. It took me a few days of reading to get hooked, but then I blew through 60% of the book, and stayed up way too late on the final day of reading-so this book will grab you in the best possible way. There are enough mysteries here to keep a reader wanting more, and the plot advanced farther in this book, and deepened beyond what in the first book was mostly Ruler Vs Ruler to hinting at something much deeper at play. A complex antagonist, who may or may not be a villain has a more prominent role here and it sets up exciting possibilities to see how these characters develop in the next two books. The book follows Ransom's POV, which each chapter starting with a letter from Claire. The thing that sets Ransom apart from everyone else in this world is his dedication to his word-he doesn't betray it. Which sets up the possibility that the author is going to throw everything possible at the character to see if he will break, which I find compelling. Woman characters play important roles here, but because the POV follows Ransom, you may not feel it at first. The character of Alix in particular will be one the reader will enjoy. Fans of Ryan, Winter, Feist, Lawrence and Martin will like this, and fans of Hobb will find Ransom to have Fitz like characteristics, despite it not being a first person POV. I highly recommend this author and series
4 reviews1 follower
May 18, 2021
I was given an ARC by Jeff Wheeler to give an honest review.

This book is the second one in the First Argentines series. You can read the books out of order, Wheeler weaves in the back story with finesse. However, reading the first book Knight's Ransom makes this book more enjoyable.

The First Argentines series started off reminiscent of The Queen's Poisoner. But the story develops a different flavor as it proceeds with Warrior's Ransom.

The story continues with Ransom coming into his own, a true warrior equipped with his Fountain blessed power, and we discover one more layer of his magic. Ransom’s journey is thoroughly enjoyable. The complex relation between Ransom and his nemesis, the cloaked lady from the first book, develops even further in this book and leaves you wanting for more. The story continues to be narrated through the diary of the feisty Claire de Murrow. Her voice is so distinct and endearing, I'm hoping to see more of her character, to know more about her. After two books I still feel I do not know what drives her.

Several storylines are woven intricately into a fine tapestry. All the characters are fully rounded, no single dimensional unbelievable people here. Wheeler’s writing shines in the battle and fight scenes. The world descriptions place you right in the midst of the battlefield or castles.

What I love about Wheeler’s writing is that his stories are deeper than mere plot and description. The philosophy of life and psychology of the character shines through. The story is engaging, the writing, excellent. The story doesn't end on a cliff hanger per se but without doubt, the ending is a peek into the next book. Warrior’s Ransom is definitely one of those stories which is a one sitting read, and will make you want more!
I just cannot wait for Lady's Ransom.

I was also given the audio book and I must say Kate Rudd is phenomenal. Again. She certainly has set a high bar for audio books!
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