Good bones… desperate for an edit
This book is the second in a series of standalone contemporary romances. It’s a gorgeous, complex, MMF just waiting to be properly polished up.
Triggers:
Suicide attempts
Abuse
GBH
Neglect
Alcohol misuse
Toxic relationships
Bi erasure
Trust issues
Terrible parents
Vomiting
There are likely others, YMMV
Characters of Colour?
Yes! Our MC is biracial!
There are several other non-white, named characters. All are really well realised, none are caricatures or stereotypes.
A real rarity.
GLITTFAB/Queer characters?
HELL YES!
This is the BEST kind of ménage book - one where everyone involved is loving on everyone else.
Bi erasure is a real & super harmful thing, which is faced & handled with tact at several different points in the book.
As well as the main relationship, there are several other named GLITTFAB folx in the cast. Some were a little on the caricature side, but none became tropes.
Disabled characters?
All three MCs have histories of abuse & neglect. Those experiences affect them all, & their relationships with society, in profound ways.
It’s frustrating that only once suicide entered the picture, did that one MC get mental health care. There’s not even the consideration that these people, all with histories of abuse, would benefit from mental health care.
Anyhow.
No character has a physical or intellectual disability; no character is neuro-atypical.
Worth my time?
Debatable.
At 6 hours’ read time, This book was difficult to read, between the frankly bizarre use of grammar to the clear but incorrect intervention of Spell Check. The most glaring example in my eyes would be “neither regions”, instead of “nether regions”. When paired with the Gauntlet of Commas, I felt like most of my time was spent back-tracking & deciphering instead of reading. The strange use of “shake [character’s] head”, sometimes with the addendum “in agreement” (instead of nodding) added another layer to the deciphering game.
Re-read?
Without a serious overhaul, no way. I was asked why I was even continuing to read - we managed to work out that I was still enjoying this book, despite my struggles, but I didn’t enjoy it enough to do again.
Recommend?
To those looking for a bit of GLITTer in the ménage, or some POC in their casts.