Wow, I wanted to like this book! I like stories of wounded warriors who make it back through difficulties. I thought that’s what this story would showcase, but it didn’t. It’s about two lonely people who totally miscommunicate in ways that are not comical nor heartwarming: they’re annoying.
It’s a romance with a little mystery of town robberies thrown in to add more pages. I think it’s because the romance is not sustainable. In chapter 19 (out of 39 chapters), readers will have worked out who is doing the pillaging and thieving, and will have figured out that it’s going to be heartbreaking. Except…it isn’t…because a few “how sad” sentences are thrown in about the thieves, then nothing. What happens to these poor folk? Who knows? Clearly, they were a device used by the writer to pad the storyline and move it along.
We’re given little views into the lives of a few of the townspeople; they all seem to be nice folk with lives that interest them. These people are just devices to add pages to the book, and they are left in the dust when the main characters leave town.
Levi Jacobson owns a security firm in a small town; he is curiously imprecise when describing how he makes money in such a tiny town – the business comes mostly from surrounding small towns. OK. Sage Reynolds has been hired by Levi sight unseen for a two-week job. He thinks he’s hiring a man. Hello? The name is “Sage,” not Casey or Lee or Pat or other gender-neutral name. Why would he assume “Sage” is a man? They have a real knock-down, drag-out fight over that. He wants her to leave. She threatens a discrimination lawsuit. Nice meet-cute. Yuck.
Upon meeting him, Sage wonders what his lips would feel like if she kissed him. There’s no lead up, just a misogynistic blowup between the two, then some lust. While working on the town robberies case, Levi kisses Sage, again out of the blue. All this kissing and lusting and yet there is zero chemistry between them. Yes, we’re told again and again that Levi is handsome, and Sage is beautiful. Yadda, yadda, yadda. It’s as if the writer cannot wait to get to the sex scenes. Even the sex is so-so. A lot of descriptive words, but no real chemistry between the two players. Maybe it’s because after he kisses her, Levi turns around and insults Sage. I’m not feeling the love here.
There’s a curious discrepancy concerning the reason for Levi being asked to join another security group as a partner. The two men who make the offer tell him they won’t lie to him, they “need the capital [he] can provide.” Yet two pages later, they tell Levi, “We have a support network in place, we have the financial resources…” and we’re told who those resources are. So, what is it? Do they need Levi’s money or not?
The book ends abruptly. One minute we’re in Levi’s small town and the next we’ve moved on to a new town, presumably in Kentucky. There is no buildup, no goodbye to the old town, nor hello to the new one. It’s just one paragraph in one town, then the next paragraph (albeit in the final chapter) in a new one. Weird.
I rated the book 2.5 stars and rounded down. The book feels like a draft; there’s not much substance yet. I went back and forth between rounding up or rounding down, because the writing style isn’t bad, but the story is weak. There’s scarcely a plot. Characters are moved around like plastic checker pieces. No chemistry between the two main characters. Lots of loose ends at the end, but oddly, I don’t have any wish to know more about those loose threads. As to the rest of the books in this series? A tip of my hat and a polite, “No, thank you.”