Bursting: Desperate: Book One

by Shea Dixon

Caught short on a ride home, Doyle finds a new, unexpected pleasure in desperation and wetting. Who knew being a filthy, dirty boy could be so hot? Walking an erotic line between control and abandon, Doyle wets himself every chance he can and gets his release in the drenched result.

But when his roommate catches him in the act, everything he thought he believed about sex is questioned. Will he deny his love of wild wetting? Or will his friend help him take it somewhere even better? Grab your copy now to find out!

This story contains extremely explicit scenes of desperation, watersports, and first-time gay experiences. All characters are consenting adults. Intended for readers 18+ years of age.

Genres: Erotica, M M Romance, BDSM, Short Stories

27 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 26, 2020

Reviews

[Ellie]

Unrated

Though I did find it a bit rushed, it showcases a relatively niche kink (watersports) in a completely nonjudgmental way, with no shame or any negative feelings, and I did really appreciate the easy awakening aspect of it.

This isn't my thing though so I've decided to leave it unrated.

[Brooke · Rating 3 out of 5]

WTF did I just read?

Short erotica with couple of typos that kind of ruin the flow. The POV is 3rd person, sometimes jumping from the main character’s POV to his roommate’s, which can be a little confusing.

This is not really my kink, but I kind of had fun anyway. Solid series if you like water sports.

[Krissreads · Rating 3 out of 5]

A weird little number that’s definitely not for everyone unless you like to get pissed on 😇💦 #dontyucksomeonesyum

1 of 3 - “Desperate by Shae Dixon” for complete series

[Aaron Grant · Rating 5 out of 5]

This story is super fucking hot. It's not often that I find an erotica book on kindle that so perfectly encapsulates everything I love about this particular niche. In this book, Doyle has to pee, really bad. Really bad. It's right there in the title of the series: Desperate Doyle. He's coming home from the club, and he elected to forgo the bathroom before getting into the taxi (one of my favorite tropes is not using the bathroom when the option arises only to realize soon after what a terrible mistake that was). This leads to an honest-to-goodness accident (another of my favorite tropes), which Doyle finds surprisingly exciting.

This book seriously has so many of my favorite tropes: unintentional desperation, genuine accidents, kink discovery, public sex acts (Doyle gets hard as fuck after pissing himself and jerks off right in front of his door), getting caught, sex between roommates...It's...so good. I really, REALLY hope that another one is on the way soon!!

[Alex · Rating 3 out of 5]

Doyle can’t hold his bladder, has an accident, it turns him on, and suddenly he’s experimenting with men.

What a wild ride in less than 30 pages.

Slow burn (relative) with watersports.

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice: 🌶️
POV: Solo Third

[alyspa:) · Rating 2 out of 5]

not to yuck anybody’s yum but personally not for me

[Smut Librarian · Rating 5 out of 5]

It's a niche kink, but brilliantly done. Great writing, a quick read and so immersive. Thoroughly enjoyed it in a single sitting.

[Claudia · Rating 5 out of 5]

So… when you think you can’t get any kinkier.
This scratched the itch instantly
Great kinky erotica

[Bekka]

Fun short piss kink awakening story! Since I’m in The midst of bingo may revisit the following installments at a later date :)