the writing was simple and weak and don't have chapter topic or no. just an ongoing story 🤡 no index nothing
characters are teenagers in class 12 🤡🤡 talking about love 🤡🤡🤡
the story is shallow and repetitive
I don’t like it much.
It is readable, but not impressive.
It doesn’t make you think deeply.
It doesn’t stay with you after finishing.
It is more like time-pass emotional drama than literature.
You can finish it fast without effort bcz no heavy descriptions, no slow buildup.
●Shallow characters:
Disha is always confused
Raghav is always careless
Dhruv is always “perfect”
They feel one-dimensional, not human.
●Predictable story:
You can guess the ending very early.
No real twist, no shock.
●Overdramatic emotions:
Too much crying, overthinking, self-pity
Not balanced with strength or growth.
●Weak writing quality:
Repeated ideas
Basic vocabulary
No powerful scenes or memorable lines:
●Too idealised Dhruv
He is written like a “nice guy fantasy”
Real people are more complex than that
*Disha* is a schoolgirl living in Mumbai.
Her parents constantly fight. There is no peace in the house.The only person who gives her comfort is her grandmother. Because of the daily fights, Disha grows up feeling unloved and emotionally weak. She starts believing that love is unsafe and that relationships only bring pain.
*Dhruv* comes from a poor family.He studies hard, works part-time, and takes care of his younger sister.He is serious, responsible, and mature.Raghav is his best friend.
*Raghav* is rich, carefree, popular, and very confident.They are complete opposites but still very close
Disha slowly starts noticing Raghav.
She develops a crush on him but keeps it secret.Her best friend Kajal keeps teasing her and encouraging her.Raghav likes her too, but he is not serious about commitment.Raghav does not fully understand her emotional state.He behaves casually when she needs support.Disha feels ignored and insecure.They break upDhruv sees Disha’s pain.He listens to her.He supports her quietly.He never pushes his feelings on her.Over time, Disha feels safe with Dhruv.She realises he understands her without judging.After losing Disha, Raghav realises his mistake.Disha gives herself a second chance at love – this time with Dhruv.Not because of attraction, but because of trust.
THINGS I HAVE LEARNED ABOUT FIRST LOVE FROM THIS BOOK AND PERSONAL EXPERIENCE:
~Second chances are not weak – they are wise.
~Disha breaks with the wrong person, heals, and chooses the right one that is her second chance.
~First love is not always right love
~Attraction is not the same as commitment
~The right person may come later, not first
~Emotional safety matters more than excitement