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The Injection

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The only thing to save two old friends from death may also be what kills them.

Mr. Peters is a successful business owner. Other than dealing with a recent rash of break-ins, he lives a very satisfying life. That was until a childhood friend and brilliant scientist paid him a visit.

While the two friends had a troubled past, not speaking for ten years, the reunion was a happy one. That happiness quickly took a wrong turn as their lives are threatened.

Now held captive, the use of an experimental drug was the only option. A top-secret drug that enhanced a person’s will and physicality is the only thing giving them a fighting chance.

However, there are deadly side effects. Along with enhanced abilities comes a decrease in mental stability. Moreover, there is more to the kidnappings than first thought.

Will the two childhood friends maintain their sanity long enough to survive?

292 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 20, 2020

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D.L. Jones

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DL Jones was born in Brooklyn NY, grew up in Newport News VA and has spent the last 8 years in Charlotte NC. He has served time in the US Army and works as an IT Professional. His first love has always been tech, well computers and the web specifically, which has led to a lot of writing. He has had several websites/blogs and podcast over the years.

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4,853 reviews13.1k followers
November 23, 2020
First and foremost, a large thank you to Reedsy Discovery and D.L. Jones for providing me with a copy of this publication, which allows me to provide you with an unbiased review.

Intrigued by the premise of his latest novel, I turned to D.L. Jones’ The Injection for something that straddles the medical and psychological thriller genres. When a pharmaceutical product shows interesting results in animal trials, it is used without being fully vetted on a man with an as yet unclear agenda. The results could be problematic, particularly when further lab tests show unexpected side effects. Jones keeps the reader guessing in this piece that has some great moments, though is mired in a sluggish narrative.

Tracey Jones has been hard at work on Hypo, an injection that could revolutionise the pharmaceutical world. Working to augment the actions of the hypothalamus gland, this drug allows the user to utilise sheer determination and strict focus to complete a task, dulling the pain and leaving the skin more resistant to injury. Its testing on mice is going well, though coming off the drug has the user entering a long and fitful slumber, likely as a form of recuperation.

When Tracey reaches out to his college friend, Chauncy Peters, the reaction is one of only slight trepidation. Chauncy and his wife had a run-in with Tracey back in college, something that helped fuel an exceptional thesis, but left the Joneses feeling betrayed. While Chauncy is eager to see his old friend, he has other things on his mind. His electronics shop has been the subject of a number of break-ins of late, which had the cops involved. The only other event in town that rivals the break-ins would be the number of week-long kidnappings taking place.

After Chauncy and Tracey spend some time together, they find themselves caught in the web of these same kidnappers. Tied-up and likely to be held for a while, Tracey talks about an experimental drug he’s been working on, Hypo. With some samples on him, Tracey and Chauncy inject themselves and show great force. They are able to escape, though the after effects leave both feeling completely drained.

Chauncy is shocked by the abilities this Hypo has on him and accepts a number of vials to use at his discretion. Tracey leaves town and returns to the lab to see how things are progressing. While Chauncy comes to terms with what has happened to him, he uses the drug’s determinative effects to help overcome an issue getting his wife pregnant. While she loves the vivaciousness her husband shows, Mrs. Peters comes to resent his aggressive side, something she shares repeatedly with a friend.

As Chauncy continues to use the drug to solve his everyday issues, Tracey learns some troubling news from additional trials, primarily that aggression is heightened to homicidal levels after prolonged use. Once Chauncy discovers a secret his wife has been keeping from him, he acts in the only way he knows how, though is clueless to the aggressive trigger he’s set off inside himself.

As the world seems to have turned against him, Chauncy Peters takes matters into his own hands, only to realise that he’s been played yet again. His aggression sees him get into trouble with the law. Blinded by rage, the truth spirals out of control and Chauncy has lost his ability to regulate. All from a simple injection!

Having never read any D.L. Jones before, I was eager to see if this might be an author I would add to my list. I enjoyed the dust jacket blurb for this book, which left me wondering how things would play out. However, even with such an intriguing premise, the narrative delivery offered some issues that left me feeling cheated and out of sorts.

Chauncy Peters serves the story well, not only as an unwitting test subject for a new drug, but as a local businessman who wants to help his community. He loves his wife and wants a family, though seems distracted by some of the things that he has going on. When introduced to Hypo, it takes over his world, much as illicit drugs might form an addiction. Before he can regulate himself, Chauncy is fixated on the effect the drug has on him and lets it overtake him. Struggling to find a calm balance, Chauncy becomes the author of his own demise, unable to allocate blame where it is needed.

Jones uses some interesting supporting characters to develop his story, some of whom serve their purpose well, while others are truly as flimsy as they present themselves to be. The story works well with some of the core secondary characters, though there are a few plot lines that were likely created solely to substantiate the use of other names that pepper the pages of this book. I can see what Jones was trying to do with some of his minor characters, but could have used less of their flighty interactions.

While I cannot fault the core idea of the story, I found the delivery to be full of issues. The narrative was not as crisp as it could have been, at times recounted in a 1920s dark sleuth mystery, complete with “Girl, if only you...” and “Gosh, ....” I sought grit in the writing and got moments of pablum. Even the rage Chauncy Peters showed throughout was diluted to the point of being unbelievable in the present day. There were some narrative twists, which did work well and the chapters were short enough to make me want to forge ahead, but I worry for readers who are expecting something sharp and edgy, based on the summary. While not a book clinging to life-support, some readers may call out a Code Blue to resuscitate the narrative from its 1920s shell!

Kudos, Mr. Jones, for a valiant effort with a strong premise. Perhaps your work with your own alter ego left you divided in how to present this as top of the genre. I may come back for another try of a different publication, when time permits.

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6,817 reviews634 followers
October 5, 2020
You’ve heard it-“I was instantly plunged headfirst into this tale.” This time out, D.L. Jones and Devante Cresh send readers into a death-defying leap that will have you wide-eyed in shock! (And THAT was page one.) Hang on tight, as THE INJECTION takes two men on a power trip that goes awry.

He was trouble when they were younger, but Tracy is now a successful scientist with a miracle drug that could revolutionize everything from soldiering to that never-ending to-do list. When Tracy contacts his old buddy, Chauncy, who knew fate would give them a chance to use the drug to save their lives? But, like everything else, there is a dark side…and both men are about to discover just how dark and dangerous it can be.

In a world of high tech and science, this tale brings in a bit of the slightly quirky, as one rather “average” guy finds himself super powered, super messed up and super unstable mentally. Face it, if something is too good to be true…there must be consequences.

D.L. Jones and Devante Cresh keep their story on the light side of darkness, with lots of action, some down-to-earth, every day dialogue and enough missteps to keep one wondering what could go wrong next!

I received a complimentary ARC edition from D.L. Jones! This is my honest and voluntary review.

Publisher : 43TEN Press (October 20, 2020)
Genre: Medical Thriller
Available from: Amazon
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Profile Image for Meenaz Lodhi.
1,022 reviews86 followers
October 21, 2020
I was pleasantly surprised at this medical thriller. It’s nothing like I had envisioned it, I even changed my mind from a 4* to a 5*! It has nothing of the technical and medical jargon, au contraire, it reads with an efficient, fast and intricate plot. It’s written like a theatrical novel or a film script, every scene is written with precise detail, the minute description of every scenario jumps from the book, so you could see and live it with realism.
The plot is unique, unpredictable, intriguing, the momentum keeps growing with each chapter, fast paced, full of thrilling and exciting action, it even felt short! The characters are fascinating, seemingly down to earth, normal people; that a scientist could go to such lengths to develop his experimental drug is astounding and horrifying! And the consequences resulting from the drug are disproportional, anticlimactic and horrendous. It was an immense pleasure to read this story. I highly recommend it!
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4,638 reviews140 followers
October 15, 2020
This is what you get when a thriller, an action adventure and horror oh get together to work. ron the same project. They’ve made a new drug and the unlucky guy who gets it now he is super powers he could be shot by bullets, But then needs the weekend to sleep it off. From the dialogue to the background description I have to say I really enjoyed this book. I thought it was a medical thriller and it was medical and thrilling I must say, but so different from the medical thrillers I thought it would be. I highly recommend this book. I received this book from the author on authors XP and involuntarily leaving this review. This was so good!
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2,179 reviews54 followers
October 23, 2020
A gritty, intense, fast-paced, riveting, artful melding of stunning psychological thrills and nail-biting anticipation. An edgy mystery full of dark secrets, shocking plot twists and pulse-pounding, palpable tension. A MUST for fans of techno-thrillers who thrive on superbly-written, unputdownable suspense!

*I received a complimentary ARC of this book in order to read and provide a voluntary, unbiased and honest review, should I choose to do so.
711 reviews10 followers
October 30, 2020
Enjoyed the book very much. Human experimentation. Fast moving, full of suspence and intrigue. Loved the ending. Very worth reading.

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16.7k reviews155 followers
November 11, 2020
They are old friends and have not seen each other for many years. Things seem to be going well until they are kidnapped and a drug may be the only way to escape. What will the drug do? How will it affect them? See how they get on

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4,152 reviews31 followers
November 5, 2020
A fast-paced intriguing fun read. The plot is different to the norm and the characters are great together with wonderful dialogue. It makes for an interesting few hours read.

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February 13, 2021
An interesting story. You real feel for the characters in this story. I did not like the way it ended which left no room for future stories. Of course, I would love to try something like this.
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