An abomination, that was Lilly. A girl who was born in a good family, from the most powerful pack. Who could have thought this girl would be wolf-less?
I wasn't sure how to rate this book as I didn't get to finish it. The premise is good and the characters were starting to develop nicely. When I downloaded the app I was told the book was free but you have to pay by the chapter starting at chapter 12. I saw no indicator of how many chapters it was going to run- thus no way to know the total cost; I wasn't willing to do that. I agree with a previous reviewer that there are a lot of grammatical mistakes and the editing needs some work. The author shows promise and I would like to read the book through. I'd even pay a small amount to do so but I wasn't going to pay for each chapter. I also deleted the app (iReader) since that seems to be how they handle the platform.
This was a fun fluff read about a werewolf society. Unfortunately, it was absolutely riddled with grammatical mistakes that seriously detract from the readability. It was my first (and last) read from one of those by-the-chapter purchase apps. This is a very promising author but I feel frustrated to pay for the privilege of reading what seemed like a first draft. I guess I learned my lesson.
Interesting read, but I was frustrated with the format. I hate pay-by-the-chapter books. Just give me a price and let me buy the dang thing. Especially if you're going to have FIFTY-EIGHT chapters! Seriously?? Overall, the story was interesting. It got a little OTT toward the end because of who the hero/heroine turned out to be. I thought that was a bit much. There were a number of typos, but while they didn't really stop me from reading/understanding, they were a little annoying. I didn't see a way to easily report them on the platform so I couldn't let anyone know to fix them. It is yet another story of where the alpha/beta of a wolf pack is supposed to protect their members, and doesn't. I have decided I don't care for that since, by nature, the wolf pack protects its own.
Epic paranormal fantasy tale of eternal love with interesting plot twists. Editing tweaking ongoing as non-english speaking author. Book 2 "E Simple Love Story" still needs editing and not on same scale as Book 1. 2* Book 3 "An Enchanting Love Story" only just started.
I was really into this story, but it became so difficult to read as trying to get enough tokens was proving impossible without forking out loads of cash.
The first 12 chapters were unlocked, and I managed to get to Chapter 22. This is a shame as I was enjoying the story
This story had me laughing, squealing (yes, like a little girl) and even getting a bit misty eyed. The start is rough, but when a certain someone shows up everything definitely improves. There are several characters worth rooting for and there is some good character development for a few of them. Found it on iReader and it's definitely worth the money. The writing leaves something to be desired, but the story is so good it doesn't bother me much. Have reread it a few times if I'm being honest.