Lucien: The Razorback MC Book 1

by Bonnie Patrick

Growing up in a military household I only had my brother to depend on. Father was always out for months at a time, and mommy dearest died before my brother knew her as a real mother. So, I took care of my little brother. I made sure he had food and school lunch and just about anything he needed. And when I turned 17, got my first job, I started to get him things he wanted. I got him a game system, I got him books and a laptop. I took care of him. Then he turned into a Marine jar head just like our father. But he was still my little brother. But since he was in the Middle East... I had no one. No friends, no family, and certainly no love. Until I come across a flirty biker, Lucien, that apparently can't seem to leave me alone. All I had meant to do was talk up the babe in the damn coffee shop. She was always here. Always making the coffee. Never actually talking to the people. She didn't even have a nametag. Then came the gun and the threats. I stepped up, I took the asshat down. But not before he called the owner, Jackie, by name, trying to take her. It wasn't a robbery, it was a kidnapping. In broad fucking daylight. It was my damn luck that the honey I wanted to get to know turned out to be the owner that had a gun in her face, and for some reason, I had a feeling that it wasn't the first time she had one pointed at her. the fucking bastard got away after she decided to hit him over the head and missed and hit me. So now... I am her very personal body guard. I just hoped she didn't mind my kid, my club, and my dirty mouth. If she didn't then she would fit right in. PREVIOUSLY on Wattpad, with over a 121,000 readers. Constantly trying to do better and revise and update the following books on Wattpad.

167 pages, Kindle Edition

Published September 4, 2020

Reviews

[Leila Matthews · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed the storyline, but the book needs some work. A good edit, at the very least, there are plot holes and multiple instances of the same thing occurring in more than one chapter (i.e., the first time I love you is said).

It was difficult to read in places as I tried to string the story together, BUT I enjoyed it enough to keep going. (It may have helped that im a BETA reader for other authors and have read some rough drafts in the past)

[Elizabeth Scott · Rating 3 out of 5]

So So

First..a good editor is needed. I am not the grammar police. But there were lots of errors in spelling and grammar. It made for some difficulty reading. The plot was instalove with a biker with a kid. The girl owns a cafe. Not really a MC book.

[Richard W. Moyer · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love it!

First started reading it on wattpad and fell in love with it! Bonnie is an incredible author and I cant wait to read more of her books!