There was a lot of buzz about who is Marcie Steele on Twitter lately, and oh my gosh, I don't have to tell you that I was also curious who she is? And of course it made me also desperate to read Marcie's debut novel, "Stirred with Love". In fact, when I saw this gorgeous, beautiful cover of this story, I thought, no matter who Marcie Steele is, I must read this book! And so, as soon as it whizzed its way to my kindle, I started reading it.
Very quickly it turned out that as much as it is a nice, uncomplicated story, it is also a very steady one. There are no twists or turns there, well, maybe except of two, the one with Lily and the second, that lasted for two or three pages with Will, and the rest is... just flat. I don't want to sound harsh, it's not that I didn't like it, there only wasn't anything that was new to me, that I could say, oh wow, this I haven't read about yet.
I was not sure what to do with Kate, the main character, especially at the beginning. She seemed as if she doesn't know what she really wants from life. She suffered in a relationship - because it looked like this, as I had a feeling she despises her husband, but on the other hand not wanting to do something to change this situation, to leave this vicious circle, and then getting a shock of her life when someone else made this decision for her. Still I'm not sure why she was begging Nick to come back to her if it was she who so quickly left their house and moved to other city. I just couldn't keep up with her. Then, after only few days, deciding that yes, it's better when they get a divorce. Whirlwind of emotions is nothing compared to Kate. On the other hand, I liked her other side: this of a great and imaginative businesswoman, with great ideas about the cafe. She was independent and clever, so I guess that she could once lose her head and that we can forgive her for this.
But I think there was nothing that would make me warm to Chloe, and even her youth couldn't justify her being a spoiled, sulking, jealous brat. Sorry, but this is the impression that she left me with. She might have been growing up throughout the story, she might have been finding her own way, but she was also big enough girl to stop behaving like a spoiled brat only because her mum died when she was a girl and her father had a new girlfriend now. For me she was this kind of a person that yes, lost her mother, the most beloved person in the world, and was still missing her, but also her dad tried to make it up somehow to her, content to indulge her and in fact our Chloe has a long, long way before her to learn and to see what life really is about.
The pace in this story was slow, oh so slow, and the author wrote herself: the next week has just gone, it's already the next Monday... , and in the meantime nothing in particular happened. The one and only electricity breakdown really didn't bring the tension and I was truly not scared that the opening of the cafe won't happen. The book was a tad too predictable and a tad too obvious, and I really expected something much more original. There was a potential to this story, but what I got was a one - level, steady, slow novel with characters that didn't appeal to me as much as I'd liked them to. The setting was also not too spectacular, and the descriptions didn't give me goosebumps. Of course, I am not an author and I don't want to pretend to be smart, but when I think how different could the story go, or how many missed opportunities there were, I just want to cry.
But really, there is nothing wrong with this story! It was just an average read that is very likely going to be forgotten just after finishing it. You know the feeling, when you think that the story could be so great and yet its potential seems to be not fulfilled? Well, this is how I feel with this novel. It's a real shame, as I truly had high expectations, but nevertheless, I'm waiting for Marcie's next book.
Copy received from publisher in exchange for a review.