I enjoyed the story but some of the storyline seemed a little choppy. I think it was transitioning from one scene to another kinda jumped, but it was an interesting story anyways. I enjoyed the various club scenes especially the deflowering, but it did seem a bit of a jumpy thing, like the first time she sucked one of her future Masters cocks... Surely there is a bit of a jumpy from reserved virgin to seeing his cock the first time and immediately slipping to her knees to suck him... I suppose it could happen but just seemed to jump... I was kinda looking forward to how the Master was gonna convince her to try something she clearly was curious but reserved about... I also was torn about the deflowering... It might have been interesting if the Three Masters each took her various virgin parts... But alas I liked how it was written as well... I only took away one star because I thought it felt like the story jumped over some interesting possibilities. It might have been fun had one of her doms discovered her on her shopping trip too... Could have incorporated buying her a anal toy. Alas again my imagination just wanted more details... The cage falling... Well again it seemed one of the three Masters would not have just left her without any reply... I feel like part of the story was missing.But it was a good . If you can imagine the bits that got skipped.
I have read my fair share of short stories and books with BDSM content. This one is more on the 'harder' side, meaning it's not just the typical dynamic between doms and submissives with casual spanking, whips, flogging, bondage/handcuffs, edging/orgasm denial, etc. but also includes chastity, cages, different equipment/devices, and more.
The story was quite interesting, and the characters were well-developed for a short story. However, their actions didn't always fit the normal mindset. For example, Scarlett blows Christian directly the first moment she is in the club, after we know she is a virgin and inexperienced. She jumps right into the BDSM lifestyle without much preamble. In the second moment, she allows Christian to deflower her on stage in front of an audience. It all moves really fast, and the same goes for their feelings. In a matter of a few days, they all develop feelings, which is a lot like insta-love.
The entire story takes place over a period of 4 weeks, but it's rushed with massive time jumps, so we don't really see the entire development. The falling of the cage was predictable to me. Overall, it was well-written, but it could have been smoother and more detailed.
Although the story plays in a bit more 'hardcore' type BDSM club, the story lacked depth. I would like to see deeper approach to character building and not to mention better emotional investment. Characters go from loosing virginity to full on BDSM while falling in love withing week or 2 but you don't get to feel it. Book had potential, but felt like it it was missing pages between chapters 😐
So the writing is great but the story line is not great. If your looking for great sex scenes this one is pretty good. I enjoy an emotion connection as well and this just didn't have it. Also the Masters all broke a cardinal rule and it pisses me off that it was never addressed. So again if you just want bdsm scenes this sorta has it but that's about it. For those actually in the scene don't read this one.
This was probably the worst BDSM book I have ever read. I had to stop reading it several times. I sincerely dislike not finishing a book, so I pushed myself with this. Frankly, I wish I hadn't. The plot was so ridiculous and weak. The characters lacked any depth or believability. Don't bother.
Just like the title says, a mixture between BDSM and reverse harem where reverse harem wins at the end. Maybe Skye is too willing to try since she is a simple girl with no experience at all, but let's grant she is a natural. Interesting.