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The Chronicle of the Jali #1
The Redemption of Storms
After robbing the royal palace of an ancient empire on the brink of collapse, Koujo is on the run from the imperial army with his team. Koujo must navigate the perils of leadership and political brinkmanship as he avoids the ever-present threat of execution at the hands of the empire.
All while he attempts to accomplish his ultimate goal of building an army to conquer the empire and prevent a looming bloody civil war. If he succeeds, he saves the world, prevents a war and becomes the most powerful man alive. If he fails, he’ll be executed for treason, the empire falls and millions die.
All while he attempts to accomplish his ultimate goal of building an army to conquer the empire and prevent a looming bloody civil war. If he succeeds, he saves the world, prevents a war and becomes the most powerful man alive. If he fails, he’ll be executed for treason, the empire falls and millions die.
- GenresFantasy
331 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 9, 2020
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October 24, 2020
Wow!
Writer needs to go back to the drawing board on this one. The characters make no sense and the plot leaves something to be desired. He tries writing an independent woman who makes her own choice and then the MC props her with the following, if I win you have to join my team, and if you win then you can join any team that'll have you. The assignment was to join a team so she already can join any team but if she beats him then she has his approval to join any team.. WTF? I quit after 20%, I really tried but there are just too many holes and typos. Nice try but not good enough. If this gets a rework with an editor then maybe I'll revisit it someday.
Writer needs to go back to the drawing board on this one. The characters make no sense and the plot leaves something to be desired. He tries writing an independent woman who makes her own choice and then the MC props her with the following, if I win you have to join my team, and if you win then you can join any team that'll have you. The assignment was to join a team so she already can join any team but if she beats him then she has his approval to join any team.. WTF? I quit after 20%, I really tried but there are just too many holes and typos. Nice try but not good enough. If this gets a rework with an editor then maybe I'll revisit it someday.
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