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Hidden Dragon Omegaverse
Phantom Orchid
My name is Orchid. The deadliest flower of the Wu dragon clan.
Sold into indentured servitude as an omega child, I fought my way out from under the silky sheets of pleasure houses and onto the bruising tatami mats of the dojo to become an assassin.
I make men fall to their knees. My hand squeezes their black hearts, enacting the ancient rule of our dragon ancestors.
I am judgment and justice, but not blind.
It is why I refuse to extinguish the valiant souls of the alphas from Clan Desden, overturning my entry into the assassin’s guild as I break my vows.
The price is a single night of pleasure.
It costs us all more than we bargained.
My exile is marked by not only death but rebirth.
Can I trust the alphas I shielded or must I erase every single mistake I have made to keep safe the life we created?
Sold into indentured servitude as an omega child, I fought my way out from under the silky sheets of pleasure houses and onto the bruising tatami mats of the dojo to become an assassin.
I make men fall to their knees. My hand squeezes their black hearts, enacting the ancient rule of our dragon ancestors.
I am judgment and justice, but not blind.
It is why I refuse to extinguish the valiant souls of the alphas from Clan Desden, overturning my entry into the assassin’s guild as I break my vows.
The price is a single night of pleasure.
It costs us all more than we bargained.
My exile is marked by not only death but rebirth.
Can I trust the alphas I shielded or must I erase every single mistake I have made to keep safe the life we created?
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First published September 11, 2020
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January 2, 2021
I absolutely loved Phantom Orchid ! With Reverse Harems, it can be hit or miss with me, generally if it's in one book there usually not enough depth, and if it's a series sometimes it drags. In this book, it hit the sweet spot. Do I want more? Of course, but that's because I really enjoyed it and loved the characters and world. This book is lengthy, but it is absolutely worth it. You get to know the characters and the world as well as watch the relationships develop. Could it have been longer, heck yes! I feel like we were just really starting to get to know these wonderful characters and see Lan and her Dragons settle into their individual relationships and bonds. For what it was, I thoroughly enjoyed it, and would certainly read more about these characters should the author choose to continue their story.
Leilan (Lan) was an awesome female lead, I loved her. While she does have some awkwardness, sass and occasionally can be a bit of a brat, she is otherwise mature (especially for her age), clear-headed and reasonable. She is both mature and naive, stubborn but willing to adapt. She has been through hardship, and is able to take care of herself and her boys, but knows how to ask for help. I really enjoyed getting to know Lan, her boys (Li Qiang, Zhang Wei - who were each their own characters themselves) and her men.
There is Gregoir Titan, Koa, Miyo, Xerxes, Vasilios, Atlas and Christian Riaan. Each of whom has their own voice in the story (though I do wish we had gotten to know them more - but really this was Lan's story). I did absolutely love that the author gave each male their own voice and perspective in this story, it added a depth we don't always see. Each of them stood out as their own, and had their own individual relationship with Lan, not just as a group.
Let's not forget the plot, which lets face it is not always a main factor in reverse harems. I'm pleased to say in Phantom Orchid it is well thought out and interwoven from the very beginning to the end. It was paced well, and didn't get lost in the story, with little parts of it unfolding at a time appropriately with the rest of the story. I liked that Lan's boys also played a major part of the story and also began to develop familial bonds with not only Lan's Dragons but their extended family as well. I do feel the ending was a bit rushed in comparison with the rest of the book.
And last but certainly not least, the sexy times. Fire. That's it. Definitely not everyone's cup of tea, but I enjoyed it. There is enough interwoven throughout the book that it doesn't drag, but it's not overwhelming and nothing but gratuitous sex (at least not for me).
I hope we get to see more of these characters in the future, but if we don't I can certainly see myself re-reading this book and checking out more of Ms. Jade's work in the future.
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Leilan (Lan) was an awesome female lead, I loved her. While she does have some awkwardness, sass and occasionally can be a bit of a brat, she is otherwise mature (especially for her age), clear-headed and reasonable. She is both mature and naive, stubborn but willing to adapt. She has been through hardship, and is able to take care of herself and her boys, but knows how to ask for help. I really enjoyed getting to know Lan, her boys (Li Qiang, Zhang Wei - who were each their own characters themselves) and her men.
There is Gregoir Titan, Koa, Miyo, Xerxes, Vasilios, Atlas and Christian Riaan. Each of whom has their own voice in the story (though I do wish we had gotten to know them more - but really this was Lan's story). I did absolutely love that the author gave each male their own voice and perspective in this story, it added a depth we don't always see. Each of them stood out as their own, and had their own individual relationship with Lan, not just as a group.
Let's not forget the plot, which lets face it is not always a main factor in reverse harems. I'm pleased to say in Phantom Orchid it is well thought out and interwoven from the very beginning to the end. It was paced well, and didn't get lost in the story, with little parts of it unfolding at a time appropriately with the rest of the story. I liked that Lan's boys also played a major part of the story and also began to develop familial bonds with not only Lan's Dragons but their extended family as well. I do feel the ending was a bit rushed in comparison with the rest of the book.
And last but certainly not least, the sexy times. Fire. That's it. Definitely not everyone's cup of tea, but I enjoyed it. There is enough interwoven throughout the book that it doesn't drag, but it's not overwhelming and nothing but gratuitous sex (at least not for me).
I hope we get to see more of these characters in the future, but if we don't I can certainly see myself re-reading this book and checking out more of Ms. Jade's work in the future.
Trigger Warning:
POV:
HEA:
Sexual themes:
Cliffhanger:
October 1, 2020
There was good and there was not as good.
There are aspects to this story I liked. It was a full, fully detailed, clear arc, story. I give multiple stars for that, since it’s so rare. The editing was good, only a couple of mistakes in the compound verbs or conjunctions. I liked the story itself, it’s definitely unique, not a rehash of other plots and characters, very much loved that. What I didn’t like: harem size. 7 guys is too many. I harp on this all the time. The author might think she’s building a bunch of different characters, but I, as the reader, didn’t feel it. I could have done without the youngest 4 guys. The very youngest comes off as a teenage jerk in every exchange. Doesn’t matter the “punishment”, he is still distasteful and sort of pedo-y. The triplets, meh, except for different powers, you could still mesh the personalities into one of the oldest 3 or at worse, create one new one. The dom/sub dynamic times 7 got SO, SO, SO, SO, SO, SO old. See what I did there? It’s crazy one note. Also, honestly, it ended up as supremely non sexy for me. I’m absolutely not into picturing subbing for 7 guys, much less at the same time. I’ve seen a larger group of alphas in an omegaverse done with much better variety and I can’t go back. I skipped almost all the sex scenes because, I mean, yeah, yeah, spanking all the freaking time, orgasm denial, bondage drawn out 7 times there ya go. Ok, unsexy sex aside, if there were fewer guys all the space dedicated to intro-ing, expanding on, having nookie with, unnecessary guys could have been dedicated to better establishing and exploring the relationships between the guys left. There was just not enough time for any sort of real interaction, deepening connection, like... the actual romance of the thing. FYI, protection is not romance. This was: I see, I like it, I want it, I got it. Not the first time I’ve written that in a review. Anyway, I liked Entrapment and I’ll try another book by this author, but this one was a bit of a disappointment for me.
There are aspects to this story I liked. It was a full, fully detailed, clear arc, story. I give multiple stars for that, since it’s so rare. The editing was good, only a couple of mistakes in the compound verbs or conjunctions. I liked the story itself, it’s definitely unique, not a rehash of other plots and characters, very much loved that. What I didn’t like: harem size. 7 guys is too many. I harp on this all the time. The author might think she’s building a bunch of different characters, but I, as the reader, didn’t feel it. I could have done without the youngest 4 guys. The very youngest comes off as a teenage jerk in every exchange. Doesn’t matter the “punishment”, he is still distasteful and sort of pedo-y. The triplets, meh, except for different powers, you could still mesh the personalities into one of the oldest 3 or at worse, create one new one. The dom/sub dynamic times 7 got SO, SO, SO, SO, SO, SO old. See what I did there? It’s crazy one note. Also, honestly, it ended up as supremely non sexy for me. I’m absolutely not into picturing subbing for 7 guys, much less at the same time. I’ve seen a larger group of alphas in an omegaverse done with much better variety and I can’t go back. I skipped almost all the sex scenes because, I mean, yeah, yeah, spanking all the freaking time, orgasm denial, bondage drawn out 7 times there ya go. Ok, unsexy sex aside, if there were fewer guys all the space dedicated to intro-ing, expanding on, having nookie with, unnecessary guys could have been dedicated to better establishing and exploring the relationships between the guys left. There was just not enough time for any sort of real interaction, deepening connection, like... the actual romance of the thing. FYI, protection is not romance. This was: I see, I like it, I want it, I got it. Not the first time I’ve written that in a review. Anyway, I liked Entrapment and I’ll try another book by this author, but this one was a bit of a disappointment for me.
March 1, 2022
I thought that the narration from Leilan (Orchid) was written with a different cadence and did sound Oriental to me. However, the POV from all the men sounded the same; no distinct voices and nothing to distinguish any of them from each other. Although they had different abilities, the way they thought and spoke -- the words they chose, the phrases they used, the tone and sentence structures were all the same. There was almost too much inner monologue from everyone but especially from Leilan. This slowed down the story and added small hills of info dumps here and there. But it gave a zen sort of feel to the story at times, so I think it did work for this particular book.
I don't know the author's ethnicity, but I am of Chinese descent and one big thing that bothered me was the way Leilan's twin boys were named: Zhang Wei and Li Qiang. Their names shouldn't be so dissimilar. The Chinese tend to use the same middle name for all the male children in the family -- even among the extended family with the same family name. So, one might be Zhang Wei and the other might be Zhang Xi. Or, one might be Li Qiang and the other might be Li Yuan.
I was also bothered by the fact that Orchid last met Titan and the others seven years ago, yet her boys are seven years old. At first I wondered if a dragon pregnancy might take less than nine months, but Leilan said she carried the boys for nine months, so it doesn't. Maybe, if she'd met Titan early in the year, it's possible that the children are seven years old, but I thought it more likely that they would be six... okay, it's a small quibble, but still!
Plus, I wanted more explanation about everyone's different abilities, like: WHY do they all have different abilities? You'd think that people from the same family would have similar abilities, because, hello, genetics. It was unusual that none of their abilities overlapped. I also never quite understood Miyo's abilities. But the descriptions of all their various abilities were interesting.
Ultimately, the really big thing that bugged me and the reason why this book gets three stars instead of four is that we never saw Leilan tell Titan and the others about her past. Ever. In her POV, in her internal monologue, we know that she was mistreated and abused as a child in Clan Wu. But she never once talks to them about it. Even when she tells Riaan, "No implements," (meaning no BDSM whips and paddles) she doesn't explain why.
Leilan has been so alone all her life and has had to hold it together for so long that I was looking forward to at least one scene where she lets go and is able to grieve for the pain she had endured. But we never see this happen. We see her moving in with the men and challenging them, making sure they know she's no pushover. We see her having sex with all of them and getting spanked and -- to her surprise -- liking it. We see her trusting them to protect and care for her sons. But we never see her allowing herself to be vulnerable with them.
And to me, that's a very key thing that this relationship needed to have. How could she not tell them about her past? Xerxes knows some of it due to his gift of touching objects and reading the events attached to them. But even he doesn't know the full story. I thought they needed to know, because only then would they really understand why she is the way she is. And only then would they be able to help her heal from the wounds of the past and feel accepted and loved. I kept waiting for one of them to go overboard during sex with the spanking and dominance, and for her to get stiff and fearful, which could lead to a revelation. But it never happened.
In this book you need to be prepared for an age gap relationship. Riaan is only 19 or 20 and Leilan is about seven years older than he is. His three older brothers, the triplets, are about four years younger than she is. She keeps thinking of Riaan as a kid, so he calls her a brat and dominates her sexually to show her that he's all grown up. Ummm... I don't know that I considered that sexy. I just have a really hard time wrapping my head around a confident, experienced, and in control 19-year-old dom. Even the most mature 19-year-old I've ever met wouldn't be able to pull off that vibe.
The story started out strong, and I liked Leilan's spunkiness, the way she wouldn't blindly carry out the hit just to get her dream place in Clan Wu's assassin's guild. I liked how she was extremely capable and not the kind of heroine to need saving. In fact, I was gleeful that she could bring the mightly Clan Desden alphas to their knees so easily. But later on in the story she lost some of that edge and that badassness.
After the 7-year gap... well, first of all, I wanted to know why there was a 7-year-gap, when she did make some attempt to contact Titan after finding out that she was pregnant. And I thought it was strange for the younger guys to have all fallen for her during the brief time that they met her. Yes, she had saved them from the fire, so maybe they would have idolised her, but fall for her? Is it because they were so young? The triplets were 16. However I tried to look at it, it still felt odd. That the three oldest alphas (Titan, Miyo, and Koa) would not have been able to forget her or get over her, that I could accept. After all, they'd had more time to connect with her through some sexual activity, and the twins (Miyo and Koa) got to see her badassness in action. But there was no connection with the younger alphas, nothing personal. The fact that the four younger alphas also wanted her felt a bit forced to me.
This was a 3.5 read but I usually round down instead of up. I really wanted the alphas to shower more praise on Leilan and to show her that they are not like the alphas in Clan Wu, not just by caring for her sexual pleasure, but by overall caring. It felt like everyone wanted to spank her, and while I get that, there just wasn't enough tenderness in between the spankings to help me understand why Leilan would feel safe with them or trust them.
I don't know the author's ethnicity, but I am of Chinese descent and one big thing that bothered me was the way Leilan's twin boys were named: Zhang Wei and Li Qiang. Their names shouldn't be so dissimilar. The Chinese tend to use the same middle name for all the male children in the family -- even among the extended family with the same family name. So, one might be Zhang Wei and the other might be Zhang Xi. Or, one might be Li Qiang and the other might be Li Yuan.
I was also bothered by the fact that Orchid last met Titan and the others seven years ago, yet her boys are seven years old. At first I wondered if a dragon pregnancy might take less than nine months, but Leilan said she carried the boys for nine months, so it doesn't. Maybe, if she'd met Titan early in the year, it's possible that the children are seven years old, but I thought it more likely that they would be six... okay, it's a small quibble, but still!
Plus, I wanted more explanation about everyone's different abilities, like: WHY do they all have different abilities? You'd think that people from the same family would have similar abilities, because, hello, genetics. It was unusual that none of their abilities overlapped. I also never quite understood Miyo's abilities. But the descriptions of all their various abilities were interesting.
Ultimately, the really big thing that bugged me and the reason why this book gets three stars instead of four is that we never saw Leilan tell Titan and the others about her past. Ever. In her POV, in her internal monologue, we know that she was mistreated and abused as a child in Clan Wu. But she never once talks to them about it. Even when she tells Riaan, "No implements," (meaning no BDSM whips and paddles) she doesn't explain why.
Leilan has been so alone all her life and has had to hold it together for so long that I was looking forward to at least one scene where she lets go and is able to grieve for the pain she had endured. But we never see this happen. We see her moving in with the men and challenging them, making sure they know she's no pushover. We see her having sex with all of them and getting spanked and -- to her surprise -- liking it. We see her trusting them to protect and care for her sons. But we never see her allowing herself to be vulnerable with them.
And to me, that's a very key thing that this relationship needed to have. How could she not tell them about her past? Xerxes knows some of it due to his gift of touching objects and reading the events attached to them. But even he doesn't know the full story. I thought they needed to know, because only then would they really understand why she is the way she is. And only then would they be able to help her heal from the wounds of the past and feel accepted and loved. I kept waiting for one of them to go overboard during sex with the spanking and dominance, and for her to get stiff and fearful, which could lead to a revelation. But it never happened.
In this book you need to be prepared for an age gap relationship. Riaan is only 19 or 20 and Leilan is about seven years older than he is. His three older brothers, the triplets, are about four years younger than she is. She keeps thinking of Riaan as a kid, so he calls her a brat and dominates her sexually to show her that he's all grown up. Ummm... I don't know that I considered that sexy. I just have a really hard time wrapping my head around a confident, experienced, and in control 19-year-old dom. Even the most mature 19-year-old I've ever met wouldn't be able to pull off that vibe.
The story started out strong, and I liked Leilan's spunkiness, the way she wouldn't blindly carry out the hit just to get her dream place in Clan Wu's assassin's guild. I liked how she was extremely capable and not the kind of heroine to need saving. In fact, I was gleeful that she could bring the mightly Clan Desden alphas to their knees so easily. But later on in the story she lost some of that edge and that badassness.
After the 7-year gap... well, first of all, I wanted to know why there was a 7-year-gap, when she did make some attempt to contact Titan after finding out that she was pregnant. And I thought it was strange for the younger guys to have all fallen for her during the brief time that they met her. Yes, she had saved them from the fire, so maybe they would have idolised her, but fall for her? Is it because they were so young? The triplets were 16. However I tried to look at it, it still felt odd. That the three oldest alphas (Titan, Miyo, and Koa) would not have been able to forget her or get over her, that I could accept. After all, they'd had more time to connect with her through some sexual activity, and the twins (Miyo and Koa) got to see her badassness in action. But there was no connection with the younger alphas, nothing personal. The fact that the four younger alphas also wanted her felt a bit forced to me.
This was a 3.5 read but I usually round down instead of up. I really wanted the alphas to shower more praise on Leilan and to show her that they are not like the alphas in Clan Wu, not just by caring for her sexual pleasure, but by overall caring. It felt like everyone wanted to spank her, and while I get that, there just wasn't enough tenderness in between the spankings to help me understand why Leilan would feel safe with them or trust them.
September 26, 2020
So much awesomeness in this book!!! Love the characters, the drama, the intrigue, and the steamy scenes!!! Excellent world building and character development which I am always over the moon to see in a book I am reading. I was so much more invested in the story because of it.
The sage bits of wisdom at the beginning of chapters is also a nice little something extra. Not only are they thought provoking, they give a glimpse of what the chapter contains. Very awesome!
Only thing I didn’t care for too much was the epilogue. Not to say it is bad. It isn’t; I just felt it could have been better when compared to the rest of the book.
The sage bits of wisdom at the beginning of chapters is also a nice little something extra. Not only are they thought provoking, they give a glimpse of what the chapter contains. Very awesome!
Only thing I didn’t care for too much was the epilogue. Not to say it is bad. It isn’t; I just felt it could have been better when compared to the rest of the book.
September 21, 2020
One of the things that always makes me wary of standalones are that I'm skeptical as to how they'll end. I'm always afraid that there won't be enough, that I'll get that sense of something lacking in the end, but Jade does a great job of giving us a book where we feel fulfilled, not wanting as we turn that very last page. She spared no necessary details, and the proof is in the pages- this book is chunky, but it's because we're getting everything we need.
Lan is a very interesting character; one of the first things I noticed about her was how her voice stood out from many of the RH leading ladies out there. There's something very polished in the way she acts, speaks, and thinks, a clear maturity and clarity in decision-making, a precision in how her voice shares her past and present with us. Now, that's not to say that she doesn't have some of the awkwardness or sass that we love in all of those other FMCs, because she does have them, but Jade has really created someone unique, which was very refreshing to me.
While Lan's history means that she has plenty of experience with men, she's totally naive when it comes to intimacy. So, there's this naivete about her when it comes to the s*xy times, and even though she's not a blushing virgin, there are still so many firsts that she experiences with us along for the ride. So, if you like that chemistry where the MMCs take charge and help the FMC wake up and explore that sensual side of her, this is definitely a dynamic that you'll be intrigued by.
Lan is also a mother of twin boys, and her boys are fully little humans, so we're seeing them adventuring, talking, and getting into shenanigans, rather than having a baby who couldn't play much of an active role in the story. For me, this was another factor that I think makes Jade's character stand out. There's a lack of FMCs who are able to be deadly, s*xy, and all those awesome things while still putting on the mom hat too. There's a great balance to how Lan is written so that we don't see her as just a mom, but as a woman and someone who has needs, feelings, and her own challenges and burdens to overcome.
Her men are just as well-done as she is, and we've got a few tropes to explore. The guys were all raised as brothers, in a sense, and we've also got sets of siblings within the harem. Each of the men has their own unique power, personality, and kinks to work out. Personally, I liked them all, and the narrative style gives us a chance to get in each of their heads, though in a more unique way than usual. There are certain chunks of the books that are dedicated to each guy instead of it alternating for single chapters at a time, which I hadn't seen often before, but I found that I liked it. It gave me a chance to really dig into their heads a bit more before I was kicked into someone else's voice.
The plotting was well done and well paced, two things that are very important to me when a book is so large. We have just enough flashback to help understand the characters and the conflict better, and the past and present mesh together very well into a very nicely written adventure you can just lose yourself in.
Overall, I enjoyed this second installment in Jade's dragon omegaverse, and I'm totally up for checking out what comes next.
Lan is a very interesting character; one of the first things I noticed about her was how her voice stood out from many of the RH leading ladies out there. There's something very polished in the way she acts, speaks, and thinks, a clear maturity and clarity in decision-making, a precision in how her voice shares her past and present with us. Now, that's not to say that she doesn't have some of the awkwardness or sass that we love in all of those other FMCs, because she does have them, but Jade has really created someone unique, which was very refreshing to me.
While Lan's history means that she has plenty of experience with men, she's totally naive when it comes to intimacy. So, there's this naivete about her when it comes to the s*xy times, and even though she's not a blushing virgin, there are still so many firsts that she experiences with us along for the ride. So, if you like that chemistry where the MMCs take charge and help the FMC wake up and explore that sensual side of her, this is definitely a dynamic that you'll be intrigued by.
Lan is also a mother of twin boys, and her boys are fully little humans, so we're seeing them adventuring, talking, and getting into shenanigans, rather than having a baby who couldn't play much of an active role in the story. For me, this was another factor that I think makes Jade's character stand out. There's a lack of FMCs who are able to be deadly, s*xy, and all those awesome things while still putting on the mom hat too. There's a great balance to how Lan is written so that we don't see her as just a mom, but as a woman and someone who has needs, feelings, and her own challenges and burdens to overcome.
Her men are just as well-done as she is, and we've got a few tropes to explore. The guys were all raised as brothers, in a sense, and we've also got sets of siblings within the harem. Each of the men has their own unique power, personality, and kinks to work out. Personally, I liked them all, and the narrative style gives us a chance to get in each of their heads, though in a more unique way than usual. There are certain chunks of the books that are dedicated to each guy instead of it alternating for single chapters at a time, which I hadn't seen often before, but I found that I liked it. It gave me a chance to really dig into their heads a bit more before I was kicked into someone else's voice.
The plotting was well done and well paced, two things that are very important to me when a book is so large. We have just enough flashback to help understand the characters and the conflict better, and the past and present mesh together very well into a very nicely written adventure you can just lose yourself in.
Overall, I enjoyed this second installment in Jade's dragon omegaverse, and I'm totally up for checking out what comes next.
February 20, 2021
Long
Brutally fantastic with a bit of mush. The guys weren't as awful and scary as hinted. Minot dragon-ness but all the magic.
Brutally fantastic with a bit of mush. The guys weren't as awful and scary as hinted. Minot dragon-ness but all the magic.
September 12, 2020
This book was absolutely amazing.
I loved the concept of the hidden dragon omegaverse, and I really enjoyed Entrapment, but this book definitely surpassed my expectations. Each character was well developed, the world building was amazing and as always the writing was spectacular.
I loved Lan and I absolutely loved her boys- they were so realistic for their age and absolutely hilarious. This book balanced some pretty serious themes and triggers with light humor and some very sweet moments. I don’t know how the author does it, but she kept me absolutely captivated through over 700 pages of content. The author clearly did a lot of research on chinese culture to make this book authentic and it really shows.
Then when you take into consideration that she wrote this BEAST of a book while being a Doctor on the frontlines in a pandemic? That raises it to a whole other level. Fantastic job, Mercedes!
** I received an arc in exchange for an honest review **
I loved the concept of the hidden dragon omegaverse, and I really enjoyed Entrapment, but this book definitely surpassed my expectations. Each character was well developed, the world building was amazing and as always the writing was spectacular.
I loved Lan and I absolutely loved her boys- they were so realistic for their age and absolutely hilarious. This book balanced some pretty serious themes and triggers with light humor and some very sweet moments. I don’t know how the author does it, but she kept me absolutely captivated through over 700 pages of content. The author clearly did a lot of research on chinese culture to make this book authentic and it really shows.
Then when you take into consideration that she wrote this BEAST of a book while being a Doctor on the frontlines in a pandemic? That raises it to a whole other level. Fantastic job, Mercedes!
** I received an arc in exchange for an honest review **
December 6, 2023
Such a great Omegaverse book!
I loved Phantom Orchid!! I only wish that Mercedes Jade would “hurry up” and create more novels JUST LIKE THIS ONE in the Omegaverse universe!
**SPOILERS**
Leilan (Phantom Orchid) is an assassin trained by her “house” to eliminate any target(s) given to her. She was sold by her mother as a small child to the Wu dragon clan and was forced into slavery! When the head of the Wu clan sees her magic he sends her to train as an assassin NOT as a flower, a.k.a. a pleasure girl (try geisha).
Her first “assignment” out on her own is to eliminate the dragon clan (leader) responsible for the murder of a girl named Jessica. She’s only eighteen and she stalks the clan to Dales bar and grill where the Uber famous and strong and wealthy Desdan dragon clan are drowning their sorrows over their lost friend, Jessica. It doesn’t take Leilan (Orchid) long to realize that these dragons WERE NOT responsible for Jessica’s murder and she can’t bear to assassinate them…in fact she feels protective of them. She puts together more of the mysterious pieces when she incapacitates Alpha Titan’s (lead of the clan) sentinels, sleeps with Titan (to get info out of him- but feels a connection to him) and has to fight off another Wu assassin who came after HER to kill her and the Desdan’s. She ends up thwarting a terror attack, saving the Desdan Alphas, and in doing so fakes her own death and disappears!!
Seven years go by and Leilan is living as a single Omega dragon shifter in HIDING with her two twin Alpha sons (products of her one night stand with Alpha Titan). By a quirk of fate, Titan reappears in her life and Leilan realizes she cannot hide any longer, and that her boys NEED PROTECTION, and THEIR FATHER!! She puts together a crazy plan and manages to pull it off. In doing so she begins a chain of insane events!!
Titan is both so happy and furious to learn that his Orchid is ALIVE! He and his brothers (clan brothers) mourned her after they thought she died in the bombing at Dales. He’s shocked to learn he has sons, but knows if what she says is true he MUST HAVE BOTH HIS ORCHID AND SONS PROTECTED and part of the Desdan dragon clan!! There are A LOT of Desdan brothers, each with magical abilities, and they come to learn they are ALL equally as attracted to, and want, Leilan, Titan’s mate.
The book is paced well. Leilan is strong, feisty, cool and a great mom!!! Titan will MELT YOU, he’s such a dominant strong Alpha dragon *swoon* love him!! Atlas, Riian, Xerxes, Vasilios, heck all of clan Desdan are awesome!! Each one brings something needed to the relationship, and they ALL work seamlessly together to LOVE Leilan and their boys!!!
I thoroughly enjoyed this offering from Mercedes Jade…only wish there had been more, or that this book would have been a duology! I would’ve LOVED to have seen the Desdan Alphas caring for (tugging their hair out) over BABY DRAGONLINGS!! lol!! Seriously wish there had been bonus content that showed Leilan getting pregnant after her heat and giving every Alpha kids, and her sons, siblings 🥰 I think that would’ve been awesome!! I truly did not want to be done with Orchid and her Desdan Alphas!!
I loved Phantom Orchid!! I only wish that Mercedes Jade would “hurry up” and create more novels JUST LIKE THIS ONE in the Omegaverse universe!
**SPOILERS**
Leilan (Phantom Orchid) is an assassin trained by her “house” to eliminate any target(s) given to her. She was sold by her mother as a small child to the Wu dragon clan and was forced into slavery! When the head of the Wu clan sees her magic he sends her to train as an assassin NOT as a flower, a.k.a. a pleasure girl (try geisha).
Her first “assignment” out on her own is to eliminate the dragon clan (leader) responsible for the murder of a girl named Jessica. She’s only eighteen and she stalks the clan to Dales bar and grill where the Uber famous and strong and wealthy Desdan dragon clan are drowning their sorrows over their lost friend, Jessica. It doesn’t take Leilan (Orchid) long to realize that these dragons WERE NOT responsible for Jessica’s murder and she can’t bear to assassinate them…in fact she feels protective of them. She puts together more of the mysterious pieces when she incapacitates Alpha Titan’s (lead of the clan) sentinels, sleeps with Titan (to get info out of him- but feels a connection to him) and has to fight off another Wu assassin who came after HER to kill her and the Desdan’s. She ends up thwarting a terror attack, saving the Desdan Alphas, and in doing so fakes her own death and disappears!!
Seven years go by and Leilan is living as a single Omega dragon shifter in HIDING with her two twin Alpha sons (products of her one night stand with Alpha Titan). By a quirk of fate, Titan reappears in her life and Leilan realizes she cannot hide any longer, and that her boys NEED PROTECTION, and THEIR FATHER!! She puts together a crazy plan and manages to pull it off. In doing so she begins a chain of insane events!!
Titan is both so happy and furious to learn that his Orchid is ALIVE! He and his brothers (clan brothers) mourned her after they thought she died in the bombing at Dales. He’s shocked to learn he has sons, but knows if what she says is true he MUST HAVE BOTH HIS ORCHID AND SONS PROTECTED and part of the Desdan dragon clan!! There are A LOT of Desdan brothers, each with magical abilities, and they come to learn they are ALL equally as attracted to, and want, Leilan, Titan’s mate.
The book is paced well. Leilan is strong, feisty, cool and a great mom!!! Titan will MELT YOU, he’s such a dominant strong Alpha dragon *swoon* love him!! Atlas, Riian, Xerxes, Vasilios, heck all of clan Desdan are awesome!! Each one brings something needed to the relationship, and they ALL work seamlessly together to LOVE Leilan and their boys!!!
I thoroughly enjoyed this offering from Mercedes Jade…only wish there had been more, or that this book would have been a duology! I would’ve LOVED to have seen the Desdan Alphas caring for (tugging their hair out) over BABY DRAGONLINGS!! lol!! Seriously wish there had been bonus content that showed Leilan getting pregnant after her heat and giving every Alpha kids, and her sons, siblings 🥰 I think that would’ve been awesome!! I truly did not want to be done with Orchid and her Desdan Alphas!!
January 25, 2021
Sweet omegaverse rh standalone
I do love this sweet omegaverse trend in RH and this is a good installment, if not as good as the first. It was ridiculously long. Now don't get me wrong, I love a good thick book. But this just kept going on an on. That would have been okay if there was actually some plot movement. The majority of the 761 is Lan agonizing over her decisions and rehashing the past over and over. She has moments when I liked her but most of the time i was fed up with her wishywashyness. I wanted to scream at her to own up to her choices and stop trying to run. I didn't like most of the guys very much either. Chris was absolutely awful, to the point that I had to skip most of the scenes with him because he made me so angry. He's a spoilt rotten child who "disciplines" Lan just because he can. I would have been completely fine if Lan had never mated with him or the younger alphas. In fact, I think it would have been better without the youngest 4 as extra baggage.The only characters that I actually liked were Lan's twin boys.
Despite all that, I still read the whole thing and (mostly) enjoyed it. I still prefer the first in this author's hidden dragon series but I bought this to add to my collection and I'll definitely read more from her if she continues this series.
I do love this sweet omegaverse trend in RH and this is a good installment, if not as good as the first. It was ridiculously long. Now don't get me wrong, I love a good thick book. But this just kept going on an on. That would have been okay if there was actually some plot movement. The majority of the 761 is Lan agonizing over her decisions and rehashing the past over and over. She has moments when I liked her but most of the time i was fed up with her wishywashyness. I wanted to scream at her to own up to her choices and stop trying to run. I didn't like most of the guys very much either. Chris was absolutely awful, to the point that I had to skip most of the scenes with him because he made me so angry. He's a spoilt rotten child who "disciplines" Lan just because he can. I would have been completely fine if Lan had never mated with him or the younger alphas. In fact, I think it would have been better without the youngest 4 as extra baggage.The only characters that I actually liked were Lan's twin boys.
Despite all that, I still read the whole thing and (mostly) enjoyed it. I still prefer the first in this author's hidden dragon series but I bought this to add to my collection and I'll definitely read more from her if she continues this series.
December 2, 2020
Not my thing but damn good writing
I tend to steer away from Omega stories as I am not a fan of stories where females are dominated or subjugated or where they tolerate bad behavior because of hormones and slick. Some of the reviews made me think the Alphas were going to be more sweet than dominant so I went ahead and gave this a go and apparently the fmc is an assassin which is a theme I LOVE. Unfortunately this still had more domination and humiliation than I want to read. It was hard to get through certain parts, I almost gave up twice, but ultimately the author can tell a really good story and the Omega is not a pushover which helped lessen some of my misery at what I was reading. Honestly I just started skipping over the sex which is where the degradation happens, the actual story was thrilling and intense. I'm giving this four stars simply due to the quality of writing which was totally on point.
I tend to steer away from Omega stories as I am not a fan of stories where females are dominated or subjugated or where they tolerate bad behavior because of hormones and slick. Some of the reviews made me think the Alphas were going to be more sweet than dominant so I went ahead and gave this a go and apparently the fmc is an assassin which is a theme I LOVE. Unfortunately this still had more domination and humiliation than I want to read. It was hard to get through certain parts, I almost gave up twice, but ultimately the author can tell a really good story and the Omega is not a pushover which helped lessen some of my misery at what I was reading. Honestly I just started skipping over the sex which is where the degradation happens, the actual story was thrilling and intense. I'm giving this four stars simply due to the quality of writing which was totally on point.
January 31, 2021
Part 1 of the first "book" was a bit icky to me with the plans of coerced intimacy with Lan/Orchid from the three alphas, but once the story got full underway, it was quite captivating. I'm a giant sucker for the single parent with secret children trope, and it was interesting seeing a different POV with the younger alphas all grown up and matured. Plus, once I knew we had dragon shifters and alpha/omega relationships involved, I was in my trope heaven.
+1 for the deep relationship developments and also incorporating the kids into the family. Minor nitpicks are that I wished there had been more inter-dragon pack politics, dragon shifting and magic use, and overall world-building other than the brush-over with Clan Wu with 3rd party mentions. Lan didn't even interact with most of her former clan face-to-face in the present, and we only saw them in her memories and flashbacks.
Overall, it was a great standalone book with hot smut scenes - would reread again.
+1 for the deep relationship developments and also incorporating the kids into the family. Minor nitpicks are that I wished there had been more inter-dragon pack politics, dragon shifting and magic use, and overall world-building other than the brush-over with Clan Wu with 3rd party mentions. Lan didn't even interact with most of her former clan face-to-face in the present, and we only saw them in her memories and flashbacks.
Overall, it was a great standalone book with hot smut scenes - would reread again.
December 2, 2020
I'm halfway through this and thinking I'll just give it up. The character development is missing and characterisations are inconsistent at best, entirely lacking at worst. I'm struggling to tell any of them apart. Based on their actions they might as well just be three, four guys at once. There's been little sex thus far, and the reviews have me thinking that the sex to come isn't exactly worth it to persist with the book.
A bummer, because I genuinely like the setup, and the worldbuilding & magic is interesting. I feel like a good editor could have jumped in, cleaned up all the messy repetition and inconsistencies, knocked off a character or two, and given us a far better book at the end of it.
A bummer, because I genuinely like the setup, and the worldbuilding & magic is interesting. I feel like a good editor could have jumped in, cleaned up all the messy repetition and inconsistencies, knocked off a character or two, and given us a far better book at the end of it.
June 9, 2021
It was decent
The story was good overall, but I felt like it was very long and drawn out. I did not realize going in (blind) that it was two books. It is noted in the table of contents as book 1 and book 2, so it was my oversight. Still felt really long.
I also felt like the conclusion of the story was rushed like the author realized it was dragging and was trying to tie it all up. There was less than 8% of the story to go and I didn't see how we could get a satisfying ending with only a small amount of story left.
My opinion: good story overall, but too much filler and not enough stready progression in the plot.
The story was good overall, but I felt like it was very long and drawn out. I did not realize going in (blind) that it was two books. It is noted in the table of contents as book 1 and book 2, so it was my oversight. Still felt really long.
I also felt like the conclusion of the story was rushed like the author realized it was dragging and was trying to tie it all up. There was less than 8% of the story to go and I didn't see how we could get a satisfying ending with only a small amount of story left.
My opinion: good story overall, but too much filler and not enough stready progression in the plot.
September 19, 2020
Not your usual Omegaverse! Loved it!
I really enjoyed this book, I have a bit of a love hate relationship with the usual Omegaverse books but this is absolutely outstanding.
I loved that there is a big murder/mystery element to this book, really pushing those Alpha instincts, I love that it's shifter Omegaverse, that the MC is older with children, that consent is a massive part of this book as well, and I also loved the inclusion of different cultures.
I highly recommend reading this book, it is beautifully written and presented as well. A great read.
I really enjoyed this book, I have a bit of a love hate relationship with the usual Omegaverse books but this is absolutely outstanding.
I loved that there is a big murder/mystery element to this book, really pushing those Alpha instincts, I love that it's shifter Omegaverse, that the MC is older with children, that consent is a massive part of this book as well, and I also loved the inclusion of different cultures.
I highly recommend reading this book, it is beautifully written and presented as well. A great read.
July 15, 2021
Very captivating book
Wowzer! 5 star rating.
This was a very captivating book. The author did an amazing job with the suspense, the plots, the story telling, all of it.
The characters were nicely woven together to bring about the storyline. The author's writing style was easy to follow and made sense. It's not always that I find I enjoy an author's way of writing. I've read books that were good but hard to make sense of.
The Desden Clan and Orchid coming together was a smooth transition from start to finish. I can't wait to see if I can find more from this author.
Wowzer! 5 star rating.
This was a very captivating book. The author did an amazing job with the suspense, the plots, the story telling, all of it.
The characters were nicely woven together to bring about the storyline. The author's writing style was easy to follow and made sense. It's not always that I find I enjoy an author's way of writing. I've read books that were good but hard to make sense of.
The Desden Clan and Orchid coming together was a smooth transition from start to finish. I can't wait to see if I can find more from this author.
December 30, 2023
Another great read by Mercedes Jade.
It's a RH, OMEGAVERSE with dragon shapeshiftes.
Isn't a light read but is very powerful. Have mentions of child abuse, physically and sexually.
The FMC is a badass. She was sold by her mother to a house where she was baddly treat. They prostitute her until she gets them to accept that she works for them as an assassin.
She fakes her death to escape.
But she got pregnant and to protect her babys she needs the help of the babys father and his pack.
They never forget her.
I loved the book.
It's a RH, OMEGAVERSE with dragon shapeshiftes.
Isn't a light read but is very powerful. Have mentions of child abuse, physically and sexually.
The FMC is a badass. She was sold by her mother to a house where she was baddly treat. They prostitute her until she gets them to accept that she works for them as an assassin.
She fakes her death to escape.
But she got pregnant and to protect her babys she needs the help of the babys father and his pack.
They never forget her.
I loved the book.
July 8, 2024
What A Story!
Trigger warnings: child abuse, sexual degradation, child slavery, rape, murder, evil magic, reverse harem, omega heat, knotting.
Once you get past all of that? This a an awesome who done it!
One choice. One choice changes the lives of so many people. Instead of killing a whole clan investigating the death of their friend, a female assassin saves them. She fakes her own death, then finds out her one night of bliss with a drunken head alpha has left her pregnant.
And it just gets better!
Trigger warnings: child abuse, sexual degradation, child slavery, rape, murder, evil magic, reverse harem, omega heat, knotting.
Once you get past all of that? This a an awesome who done it!
One choice. One choice changes the lives of so many people. Instead of killing a whole clan investigating the death of their friend, a female assassin saves them. She fakes her own death, then finds out her one night of bliss with a drunken head alpha has left her pregnant.
And it just gets better!
September 14, 2020
Lan aka Orchid (FMC) us one hell of a character. A bad*** & kick*** omega assassin as well as a strong mum of two boys (Loved her boys. I actually laughed at some of their antics). Add to the mix The Desden Alphas with all their hotness!! My god did they steam up my kindle! Yes this book has some dark themes but Lan and her family balance that out perfectly. An absolutely brilliant read with great characters. I just loved it!
September 14, 2020
This book is fantastic. I was drawn in from the very beginning. I love a strong FMC. I thoroughly enjoyed watching Lan learn that she can depend on her family to help take care of things. Her men allowing her to still have her independence let me truly fall in love with them. There is not a male in this entire book who is not an alpha! I would absolutely read another book in this hidden dragon omegaverse.
September 20, 2020
Incredible!!
Loved this book! Lan is amazing; a fierce assassin and capable mother who doesn’t stubbornly refuse to see the opportunities in front of her when brought back into contact with the alphas she ran from. The alphas are each unique and distinct for such a large harem. While there is plenty of suspense and a mystery to solve the book really focuses on the relationship between Lan and her alphas which is really caring, steamy, and fun.
Loved this book! Lan is amazing; a fierce assassin and capable mother who doesn’t stubbornly refuse to see the opportunities in front of her when brought back into contact with the alphas she ran from. The alphas are each unique and distinct for such a large harem. While there is plenty of suspense and a mystery to solve the book really focuses on the relationship between Lan and her alphas which is really caring, steamy, and fun.
November 25, 2020
Dragons - oh my
A great omegaverse standalone, with lots of action and a strong female lead. The characters are well rounded and clan structures are interesting. An Asian MC is a wonderful change of pace and the weaving in of Asian culture into the storyline is well done - and appreciated. This is a very well done reverse harem, with multiple points of view. Would definitely recommend for anyone looking for omegaverse, single parent or RH tropes
A great omegaverse standalone, with lots of action and a strong female lead. The characters are well rounded and clan structures are interesting. An Asian MC is a wonderful change of pace and the weaving in of Asian culture into the storyline is well done - and appreciated. This is a very well done reverse harem, with multiple points of view. Would definitely recommend for anyone looking for omegaverse, single parent or RH tropes
September 15, 2020
😍😍😍😍
OMMFG I'm in love with this book and I hope you make more stories about Orchid and her 7 😋 mate's!! I really enjoyed the length of the 2 book's and how their son's were incorporated throughout the story. Wish we could see more babies from them and get answers about her her ex-clan.
OMMFG I'm in love with this book and I hope you make more stories about Orchid and her 7 😋 mate's!! I really enjoyed the length of the 2 book's and how their son's were incorporated throughout the story. Wish we could see more babies from them and get answers about her her ex-clan.
December 11, 2020
Great Omegaverse
With most omegaverse books, the FMC is weak willed. This book has a strong FMC who doesn’t let a lifetime of hardships break her. I really liked the writing style and the incorporation of different cultures. Multiple POV gives you insight during both steamy and action scenes. The plot line took a twist I didn’t see coming.
With most omegaverse books, the FMC is weak willed. This book has a strong FMC who doesn’t let a lifetime of hardships break her. I really liked the writing style and the incorporation of different cultures. Multiple POV gives you insight during both steamy and action scenes. The plot line took a twist I didn’t see coming.
September 30, 2022
Dnf
I tried, really really hard to finish it, but it feels like I'm just torturing myself. I couldn't like the fmc. She's annoying on so many levels.. I couldn't with the guys.. this could've been easily 300 pages and be done with it. It is so hard to push through this. Oh well, off to next book...
I tried, really really hard to finish it, but it feels like I'm just torturing myself. I couldn't like the fmc. She's annoying on so many levels.. I couldn't with the guys.. this could've been easily 300 pages and be done with it. It is so hard to push through this. Oh well, off to next book...
September 13, 2020
I was slow to get into this story but once I did I couldn't put it down. There is some hot scenes and I enjoyed the mystery. It is a long book and has a satisfying end. I would love to read more about these characters.
September 13, 2020
Sweet omegaverse amazing read
This cannot be the last book in the series!!! It is amazing and just what I was looking for. The connection between the omega and alpha is so well put together. There's a plot that captivates you! I couldnt put it down!
This cannot be the last book in the series!!! It is amazing and just what I was looking for. The connection between the omega and alpha is so well put together. There's a plot that captivates you! I couldnt put it down!
March 8, 2021
Really well done.
This book was very well done. Interesting and full of mystery. Completely wrapped in a love story. With baggage and a dark background. I loved it. So great a must read.
This book was very well done. Interesting and full of mystery. Completely wrapped in a love story. With baggage and a dark background. I loved it. So great a must read.
September 13, 2020
Fabulous
Such a fabulous book! We always need more books like this!!! I absolutely loved it and those delineated scenes!!! Ohhh myyyy
Such a fabulous book! We always need more books like this!!! I absolutely loved it and those delineated scenes!!! Ohhh myyyy
October 3, 2020
Great story
This was a really interesting story and I would like to read more if they release other books. I love dragons and I liked how the MC was hardcore 😂
This was a really interesting story and I would like to read more if they release other books. I love dragons and I liked how the MC was hardcore 😂
November 11, 2020
Didn't finish. Just couldn't get into it.
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