After seeing several 5-star reviews for this book, I was looking forward to reading it. It is described as a story of a woman’s triumph over adversity, so I was hoping for an exciting and inspiring read. But once I started, I kept waiting for the excitement and inspiration to show up. Unfortunately, they never did.
The writing is tedious and choppy at the same time. The characters are cartoonish, in particular the villain, who is too evil to be believable. Rather than scatter his faults throughout a narrative that shows the reader how malevolent he is, the author devotes an entire section of the story to describing how awful he is. And each horrible characteristic is followed by yet another, just in case the previous flaws weren’t revolting enough. It all added up to a caricature of a villain that made me wonder how anyone with his combination of outrageous flaws could possibly be a successful, world-traveling businessman.
After half of the book being devoted to the heroine’s childhood trauma, her struggles with homelessness and addiction are quickly skimmed over, as are her recovery and redemption. Her time at Mid-Town Martial Arts with Leah was where the meat of the story should have taken place – a chance to show how a woman can overcome the horrors of an abusive and traumatic childhood. But other than one quick fight scene, the rest is only obliquely referred to.
I finished the book because I kept hoping I would find what had made others give it such a good review, but I just could not find anything likable about the story or the characters. This is a one and done for me.
I received a free advance review copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.