Peter David, as a good comic book writer should be able to do, draws powerful images with his prose. His words allow the reader to picture the powerful heroes that we once read comic books about. Further, at least in this case, David does a wonderful job getting us into the minds of these heroes, a difficult task, one few comic-based novels actually manage to do.
However, at times he makes grammarical errors or uses odd speech patterns that just make little or no sense.
For example:
PAGE 59-- Sue speaks to her son, Franklin about Ben Grimm
"You're Uncle Ben," Sue repliec, "is a wise man."
Okay-- so he just needs a better editor?
Still, Mr. David feels the need to speechify a bit in a few places. It is almost as if the Fantastic Four have a few "talking points" and Mr. David feels the need to get them out in the open.. They aren't bad points at all.
On page 161 Johnny Storm minimizez his position as a hero in order to honor policemen and firefighters are real heroes. on page 63 & 64 Ben Grimm has a similar conversation with his date, Mandy- a character introduced just for the plot of the book, by the way.
It is a fine and noble sentiment-- I think young people especially ought to be brought up with the notion that police and firefighters are our real heroes-- however, the similarity in the two conversations seemed to be a publicist's talking point created for the superhero team-- and sadly, because of that-- the author's message is slightened softly because the words seem phony and contrived rather than being the actual feelings of our heroes.
Still, the author manages to tell a comic-book story with complex ideas that reveal real human emotions and problems. A really decent comic-book novel that fails to rise to greatness, but is decent.