I read the first book in this series, which is required reading in order to know what's going on in this second book. I gave that book a poor review (2 stars) for several reasons. Those issues haven't really been resolved in this book, but they were less glaring. When I read the first book, I didn't know it was a cliffhanger and was upset that it was and that the write-up specifically said it wasn't a cliffhanger. I don't like to be blindsided by those. In this case, I knew that it's another cliffhanger and there are three books in the series so that issue of not knowing it's a cliffhanger was eliminated. I still feel that should be clearly pointed out in the write-up.
The other issues included typos and formatting errors which continue in this book but aren't as plentiful. Either that or I've just gotten used to them. The remaining big issue is that the characters make some really stupid decisions and the resolutions are very drawn out. As in the first book, I think about 100 pages of this 500+ page book could be eliminated. Thankfully, there is less vomiting and cleaning although they weren't completely eliminated.
Why is it that every man Ava decides to spend time with is a jerk? Even Xander is a jerk at times and not in a "he's a bad boy" way but more in a "he's a stubborn jerk" way. (Amazon won't let me use stronger language.) She and Xander do some things that I just want to smack them for. A little of that is understandable but it would have been nice to have less of those dumb actions.
I'm now invested in the story and will read the last book in the series. I hope the writing continues to improve and the errors continue to decrease. I think this is a developing author who would have benefited a great deal from a good editor or a beta group of readers. There's a lot of promise in these stories, which is why I'm continuing to read the series even with the issues rather than stopping after the first book. This is worth your time, just be forewarned that you'll need to tolerate typos and formatting issues (change of speaker without a new paragraph and continued same speaker over multiple paragraphs), and the characters might frustrate you at times.