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Master of the Monsterverse #1
Monster Girl in My Closet
Some people have nightmares of finding a monster in their closet, but how many fantasize about it?
If you fall into the latter category, you get me. There I was, simply working to program my visual novel and find my muse, when BAM! Monster girl in my closet.
Needless to say, she changed my life. For the better at first, sure. But then there was the hunter, and the crazy lady who spoke of another world where the monsters live.
So the adventure began.
WARNING: Monster ladies, adult situations, and violence abound.
If you fall into the latter category, you get me. There I was, simply working to program my visual novel and find my muse, when BAM! Monster girl in my closet.
Needless to say, she changed my life. For the better at first, sure. But then there was the hunter, and the crazy lady who spoke of another world where the monsters live.
So the adventure began.
WARNING: Monster ladies, adult situations, and violence abound.
310 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 14, 2020
About the author
Jamie Hawke
77 books193 followersAfter working on Marvel and other games and traveling the world, Jamie Hawke decided to settle down and write fun, quirky, and sexy pulp science fiction and superhero books.
You'll find his harem gamelit books in Kindle Unlimited and Audio, and might want to start with Supers: Ex Heroes 1. The book reached #47 in the Amazon store, including #1 Bestseller in multiple categories (to include Superhero, Cyberpunk, and Colonization).
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It all started when Jamie was eleven, creating nude superhero comics with his best friend. What perverts! But hey, they were fun and provided good fodder for jokes up into their adult years. Now the stories have evolved, but they capture that same level of fun. Hopefully you will enjoy them as much as the author loved writing them!
Jamie also spent five years in Marine Corps intelligence, studied Muay Thai in Thailand, and lived in Japan for over three years. A lot of this plays into Jamie's books.
Enjoy what you're seeing here? Don't miss the fun, new release announcements, and maybe some freebies! Join the Jamie Hawke harem readers group on Facebook:
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Stories by Jamie include:
SUPERS BOOKS
Supers: Ex Heroes (1-6)
Supers: Ex Gods (1-3)
Tear it Up (1-3)
CHARM SCHOOL OUTCASTS
MYTH PROTECTOR (1-3)
LOST PIRATES (1-2)
KILL CODE
PLANET KILL (1-2)
RUNE WAKER
And more in the pipeline!
AUTHOR NOTE: I also write under another name, but kept them separate because those books are more clean (no explicit adult content). If you'd like to read them, I recommend the following:
SHADOW CORPS (Space Fantasy with Leveling and Skill Trees, Books 1-3, also in Audio)
More can be found here: http://bit.ly/JamieReadMore
DOUBLE DOWN PRESS is a part of ELDER TREE PRESS (ETP). For books with similar pacing and style, you might be interested to check out ET
You'll find his harem gamelit books in Kindle Unlimited and Audio, and might want to start with Supers: Ex Heroes 1. The book reached #47 in the Amazon store, including #1 Bestseller in multiple categories (to include Superhero, Cyberpunk, and Colonization).
Join the newsletter to never miss a release.
www.subscribepage.com/AuthorJamieHawke
When you're in the newsletter, you'll get EXCLUSIVE BOX SET, with stories from the various series.
Want to get early access? NWFW art from the books? A new Manga based on the Supers: Ex Heroes series? Patreon is your pal!
www.patreon.com/JamieHawke
And don't miss my next Kickstarter :)
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/...
It all started when Jamie was eleven, creating nude superhero comics with his best friend. What perverts! But hey, they were fun and provided good fodder for jokes up into their adult years. Now the stories have evolved, but they capture that same level of fun. Hopefully you will enjoy them as much as the author loved writing them!
Jamie also spent five years in Marine Corps intelligence, studied Muay Thai in Thailand, and lived in Japan for over three years. A lot of this plays into Jamie's books.
Enjoy what you're seeing here? Don't miss the fun, new release announcements, and maybe some freebies! Join the Jamie Hawke harem readers group on Facebook:
Facebook.com/groups/JamieHawke
Stories by Jamie include:
SUPERS BOOKS
Supers: Ex Heroes (1-6)
Supers: Ex Gods (1-3)
Tear it Up (1-3)
CHARM SCHOOL OUTCASTS
MYTH PROTECTOR (1-3)
LOST PIRATES (1-2)
KILL CODE
PLANET KILL (1-2)
RUNE WAKER
And more in the pipeline!
AUTHOR NOTE: I also write under another name, but kept them separate because those books are more clean (no explicit adult content). If you'd like to read them, I recommend the following:
SHADOW CORPS (Space Fantasy with Leveling and Skill Trees, Books 1-3, also in Audio)
More can be found here: http://bit.ly/JamieReadMore
DOUBLE DOWN PRESS is a part of ELDER TREE PRESS (ETP). For books with similar pacing and style, you might be interested to check out ET
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October 26, 2020
Nope, I'm done. Got a quarter of the way through and had enough.
This is just bad. The story weak, the characters are bland and unappealing. The actions are forced. The events make no sense. From start to finish in all aspect, this one is a dud.
This is just bad. The story weak, the characters are bland and unappealing. The actions are forced. The events make no sense. From start to finish in all aspect, this one is a dud.
October 12, 2020
Interesting and Funny
A fast-paced frenetic R-rated anime-like monster girl harem adventure comedy. Slow to start, but then it really picks up. It’s an interesting book / series because it’s different, with a whole new source of monster girls and their various personalities and abilities. I’m intrigued. It’s a tad rough in spots, but I look forward to the next book. YMMV.
A fast-paced frenetic R-rated anime-like monster girl harem adventure comedy. Slow to start, but then it really picks up. It’s an interesting book / series because it’s different, with a whole new source of monster girls and their various personalities and abilities. I’m intrigued. It’s a tad rough in spots, but I look forward to the next book. YMMV.
August 23, 2021
This is a C+ monster girl harem with sex scenes
This is also the first Jamie Hawke that I've been able to finish. The characters are flat, the plot is minimal, and the dialog, especially the internal monologue is puerile. The supporting cast (the MC's friends) are serious douche bags, and Jamie Hawke has some weird thing about urination.
Other than that, it fine.
This book will not trigger any insecurities if you are intimidated by intellectual content.
Plus one star for the cover art.
This is also the first Jamie Hawke that I've been able to finish. The characters are flat, the plot is minimal, and the dialog, especially the internal monologue is puerile. The supporting cast (the MC's friends) are serious douche bags, and Jamie Hawke has some weird thing about urination.
Other than that, it fine.
This book will not trigger any insecurities if you are intimidated by intellectual content.
Plus one star for the cover art.
October 4, 2020
Excellent
Pulled in from the first word. Well worth your time reading. Waiting for the second book in the series. Recommend
Pulled in from the first word. Well worth your time reading. Waiting for the second book in the series. Recommend
October 11, 2021
Bad.... With a capital B
The way its written just rubs me wrong. I don't know how old the author is. But i would be surprised if he is over the age of 25. It just reads like something written by someone who's gone through public school in the last 20 years. IE Really bad.. Just like the quality of Education our public schools are putting out now days.
This is my opinion ... Nothing more.
August 19, 2026
The monster is really an erotic girl with some bat-like characteristics
Ferris got a huge surprise when his new bat totem transports a naked bat-girl to his closet. Their initial reactions to each other are hilarious, but soon the Hunter comes a-hunting, and they must run for their lives. The Hunter is only thrown off their trail when they perform the “ritual”, bringing pleasure to both. They embark on a quest to get allies from the Monsterverse to help fight the hunters and other evil entities. With the help of Ahlaksiz, they summon two more allies, a Thunderbird and a Panda, mostly resembling humans in the most important places, but with significant evidence of their monster nature. Together, after performing the “ritual”, they manage to destroy the Hunter and begin enjoying their life in the Humanverse. Lots of humorous situations and nonstop action, both violent against threats and erotic among their teammates.
Ferris got a huge surprise when his new bat totem transports a naked bat-girl to his closet. Their initial reactions to each other are hilarious, but soon the Hunter comes a-hunting, and they must run for their lives. The Hunter is only thrown off their trail when they perform the “ritual”, bringing pleasure to both. They embark on a quest to get allies from the Monsterverse to help fight the hunters and other evil entities. With the help of Ahlaksiz, they summon two more allies, a Thunderbird and a Panda, mostly resembling humans in the most important places, but with significant evidence of their monster nature. Together, after performing the “ritual”, they manage to destroy the Hunter and begin enjoying their life in the Humanverse. Lots of humorous situations and nonstop action, both violent against threats and erotic among their teammates.
July 12, 2022
Farris gets a birthday present from his older brother that changes his life forever .
Farris a regular average guy with only 2 friends from across the hall from him at his apartment . He receives a gift from his older brother for his birthday a totem from a shop in their old neighborhood they grew up in . The totem had magical powers if only felt by the right person an intent . Switch Farris accidentally activated it . Summoning his first monster girl . recommend reading excellent series .
Farris a regular average guy with only 2 friends from across the hall from him at his apartment . He receives a gift from his older brother for his birthday a totem from a shop in their old neighborhood they grew up in . The totem had magical powers if only felt by the right person an intent . Switch Farris accidentally activated it . Summoning his first monster girl . recommend reading excellent series .
October 5, 2020
Fun, exciting and gorgeous Monster Girls
Firstly, love the cover art, which drew me to this book.
Once I started reading, I didn't want to put it down. Loved it!
Did find parts of the book to be a tad fast paced and glazed over some details, but overall the book balances out the pace, action, excitement and all the gorgeous Mo after women for a fun and enjoyable read.
Already want the second one!
Firstly, love the cover art, which drew me to this book.
Once I started reading, I didn't want to put it down. Loved it!
Did find parts of the book to be a tad fast paced and glazed over some details, but overall the book balances out the pace, action, excitement and all the gorgeous Mo after women for a fun and enjoyable read.
Already want the second one!
November 9, 2020
Intriguing start
This is an intriguing new series. I like the main character and I'm hoping that he definitely gained some confidence. I do like that even in the first book he has gained quite a bit of confidence. I also like the fact that there is backstory to kind of explain his reticence in some aspects. The other characters are also very well done and I'm looking forward to learning more about them. Looking forward to reading the next book.
This is an intriguing new series. I like the main character and I'm hoping that he definitely gained some confidence. I do like that even in the first book he has gained quite a bit of confidence. I also like the fact that there is backstory to kind of explain his reticence in some aspects. The other characters are also very well done and I'm looking forward to learning more about them. Looking forward to reading the next book.
February 24, 2021
Decent start
Fantasy monster girls harem adult situations
The MC is a reclusive human graphic designer and novelist who accidentally summons a monster girl. Trouble is, the girl is being hunted. Both are forced to flee. They find some help and decide their chances against the hunter are better with more monster girls.
Story is short but has bonus illustrations at the end. Rough start but quirky. Worth checking out.
Fantasy monster girls harem adult situations
The MC is a reclusive human graphic designer and novelist who accidentally summons a monster girl. Trouble is, the girl is being hunted. Both are forced to flee. They find some help and decide their chances against the hunter are better with more monster girls.
Story is short but has bonus illustrations at the end. Rough start but quirky. Worth checking out.
June 25, 2021
Somethings Soft And Beautiful This Way Come
Ferris is a reasonably successful nerd, working as a design artist and a visual novelist on the side. He has fantasies of monster girls until a birthday gift totem brings these fantasies to reality. He can't resist these girls, and wants to protect them. Adventure ensures. I like the action, humor, and love/lust. I look forward to the next book.
Ferris is a reasonably successful nerd, working as a design artist and a visual novelist on the side. He has fantasies of monster girls until a birthday gift totem brings these fantasies to reality. He can't resist these girls, and wants to protect them. Adventure ensures. I like the action, humor, and love/lust. I look forward to the next book.
April 29, 2026
If this author worked for marvel, he was a janitor
Seriously, if this author worked for marvel, I want to know what he was doing.
This book is poorly written. The world is not well developed. The characterizations are rushed and sloppy. The motivations for the characters are awkward as hell.
All in all not a good book. Would not recommend. The only real plus is as far as I can tell, it’s probably not AI.
Seriously, if this author worked for marvel, I want to know what he was doing.
This book is poorly written. The world is not well developed. The characterizations are rushed and sloppy. The motivations for the characters are awkward as hell.
All in all not a good book. Would not recommend. The only real plus is as far as I can tell, it’s probably not AI.
April 2, 2021
After rifling through a few first volumes of other harem series which didn't capture my attention, I was actually impressed with Monster Girl in My Closet. Take an somewhat awkward narrator, a feisty young woman who happens to be half-bat, and friends who tolerate the narrator's awkwardness, and you get a funny and dynamic story. Well done!
September 7, 2021
So a little guilty pleasure but a fun one at that. This one hits all the tropes, monster girl, harem, virgin guy. Ferris a up and coming graphic designer finally meets the girl of his dreams. She just happens to be a monster from another dimension. Sexually compatible and with a lot of graphic descriptions. It still puts on a good show and lots of action to keep us going.
November 21, 2020
I love this series of books.
I love this series of books and am looking forward to the next installments. I love the new characters and will love the here more about the mythics vs legendary war too
I love this series of books and am looking forward to the next installments. I love the new characters and will love the here more about the mythics vs legendary war too
January 21, 2021
So bad! Why write a harem with explicit sex with a childish story. Its even more childish then an anime, which its trying to be with all tropes. Geek virgin with a heart of gold that is shy. Oh, the monster girl meets his friend almost directly, that would probably work well. Such crap!
February 4, 2021
Different types of monster girls. I like it
This is a good book. You shouldy read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. The book is a good read. i enjoyed it alot.. Download or buy it today. why not?
This is a good book. You shouldy read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. The book is a good read. i enjoyed it alot.. Download or buy it today. why not?
April 24, 2021
Monster girl dream Comes True
Ya, I want to start to find magical totems to bring Monster girls from the demon realm.
This was a fun read and I'm on to the next book.
Read in 2 days
Ya, I want to start to find magical totems to bring Monster girls from the demon realm.
This was a fun read and I'm on to the next book.
Read in 2 days
June 21, 2022
The story feels weak and forced. There is hardly any progression in the characters and this first book feels a bit like pokemon; gotta catch them all. It's an ok book to read, but not fun enough to get the later itterations; this series is not for me.
October 3, 2020
Awesome
Great start to a new series!! The premise of how the MC gets his powers and summons monster girls is really great!! More more
Great start to a new series!! The premise of how the MC gets his powers and summons monster girls is really great!! More more
October 3, 2020
Fun fast paced read
Love the beginning. This is fast paced and hard to put down. Very descriptive and well worth it. Definitely adults only.
Love the beginning. This is fast paced and hard to put down. Very descriptive and well worth it. Definitely adults only.
October 17, 2020
This one comes with pictures
A really good well paced adventure, no over the top sex, but it's still there which is great. Believable MC, looking forward to book 2
A really good well paced adventure, no over the top sex, but it's still there which is great. Believable MC, looking forward to book 2
December 4, 2020
Been a While
Since we had a good romp for fun. This is a good way to spend an afternoon.
I have to find that shop!
TTFN
-Will
Since we had a good romp for fun. This is a good way to spend an afternoon.
I have to find that shop!
TTFN
-Will
February 21, 2021
A fun adventure
While this story is not a new concept, it is still a lot of fun. Plenty of awkwardness, misunderstandings, culture shock and obligatory sex.
While this story is not a new concept, it is still a lot of fun. Plenty of awkwardness, misunderstandings, culture shock and obligatory sex.
April 4, 2021
Good
Too fast paced on the romance stuff, bit overall was a very fun and exciting book.
Four more words required
Too fast paced on the romance stuff, bit overall was a very fun and exciting book.
Four more words required
May 12, 2021
Like this
Interesting start lots of problems for them to handle and tons of trouble hoping that it just keeps getting better
Interesting start lots of problems for them to handle and tons of trouble hoping that it just keeps getting better
October 22, 2021
Good read
I enjoyed the book. It was an interesting story. Adventure, sex, and story enthralling enough for me to want to know more.
I enjoyed the book. It was an interesting story. Adventure, sex, and story enthralling enough for me to want to know more.
April 28, 2024
Wild and crazy
Such a wild and crazy ride of a story. The monster girls are so enjoyably fresh as characters. Having a MC who isn't full of himself is nice as well.
Such a wild and crazy ride of a story. The monster girls are so enjoyably fresh as characters. Having a MC who isn't full of himself is nice as well.
June 12, 2026
Its good for boredom it basically a predictable hit and run 🏃♀️
September 29, 2026
Quite fun story. Even though it has some really illogical things, some contradictions to previously written things, and some messed up story flow parts.
Also feels like author should had done some actual real life research instead of base of anecdotes and guesses... }:X
Also feels like author should had done some actual real life research instead of base of anecdotes and guesses... }:X
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