Two things need to be established up front:
1) This is a LOTR facsimile out-and-out, and it was intentionally written to be so. Those who actually take the time to learn some of the history behind the book know that it was originally written to be a sequel to the LOTR trilogy, but the green light for publication was never given by Tolkien's family. The book was thus published after some edits to make it "its own story."
2) This is epic fantasy. In that vein, it is by nature slow in developing its story.
Okay, now that we have the foundation, let's move into the review. Some spoilers are sprinkled into the review. Oh, and I'm sure there will be some typos as well, since Goodread's review box is acting funny right now. You've been warned.
Unlike many fantasy fans, I'm not attached to the LOTR trilogy. (I must admit to having only read The Hobbit.) Thus, the many blatant and veiled similarities between this novel and LOTR don't rile me as much. I give the author more of a pass on his borrowing of ideas, than others such as Paolini, precisely because he is upfront about why he did what he did. He doesn't try to take any credit away from Tolkein. I'm cool with that. Put all of that to the side.
What I don't like about the book is the tedious pacing and needless ponderous descriptions. Characterization is also a significant problem. And while I understand the world-building purpose behind it, the faux names to objects (sometimes multiple to a single one) are cumbersome and detract from the story.
The pacing is atrocious, even for an epic fantasy. For most of the book's middle section, it felt as though more attention was given to developing the relationship between Tuck and Laurelin than to the impending doom surrouding the whole land. It is difficult to care about the gravity of the danger posed by Modru's forces when the primary character spends his waking hours speaking with a teenager who's only thoughts and expressions are in regards to her bethrothed prince, whom the reader has not yet met. Let me put this another way. Most if not all of the middle section consists of characters we don't care about talking to each other about characters we have yet to meet, and thus don't care about. (I'll address the characterization problem in short order.) Compared with the amount of space devoted to the aforementioned empty conversations, the final battle scene was rushed and formulaic. Tens of thousands of enemy troops surround the king's castle, lay seige, attack, and through successive waves overrun each of the walls to the last one. The success of the enemy, as far the plot is concerned, is largely premised on the idiocy of the castle's defenders. The pacing gets even worse following the primary characters' desperate attempt to escape the fallen castle, when the reader is forced to endure endless pages of description about the dark cloud that has fallen over the land (a phenomenon that gets a great deal of description throughout the book) and empty dialogue between Tuck and Galen. Nothing of immediacy happens to either character as they set out in search of missing companions, feared to be captured by the enemy. Let me reiterate this point. A large chunk of the book's end is just two characters and a horse riding through deserted lands talking to each other about things we've been given no reason to care about. No immediacy. No threat. Just two guys and a horse. Until the last page, when a "twist" (re: foreseeable) occurs that places Galen between two competing choices. The cliff hanger, of course, is which of the two decisions he will choose. That will presumably be addressed in the next book.
Now to characterization. There isn't a single character in this book that I can relate to or that I find interesting in the least. The story follows Tuck and is mostly told from his perspective, with an occasional allusion to another character's thoughts or perceptions. Tuck's physical abilities and martial prowess are sufficiently established so that within the context of the story, they are believable. Provided intense training on the use of his bow, there is little reason to question his ubercoolness with it. This is true of his Warrow companions as well, for they have all been trained to a sharp edge to be angels of death from afar. But that's where the believability ends. Tuck is provided a stock romantic interest whom the reader meets briefly at the very beginning of the book. His best friend is a one-dimensional character defined by his moodiness and anger. (Given the predictability of the characters, I'm also assuming there is some buried rivalry between the two characters, of which Tuck is completely unaware. I won't be surprised in the least if it turns out that part of the rivarly has to do with this female Warrow we know nothing about.) Tuck's relationship with Laurelin is so forced and shallow that his emotional expressions over the princess are laughable. Tuck is also an emotional Warrow, who tears up and cries over nearly everything. To be fair, this could be an exaggeration of a cultural characteristic, since most of the Warrows in the book where their emotions on their sleeve. Although Tuck's general motivation--to fight and defeat the forces of evil--provide plenty of impetus for his actions vis-a-vis combat, his more personal motivations are predictable, stale, and unbelievable. His reasons for joining Galen in the prince's quest to find Laurelin hold no emotional merit, since there is nothing presented in the body of the story to support them.
As mentioned above, Danner--the primary character's best friend--is one-dimensional. His entire character is defined by his obsessive need to express moodiness, most often the gloomy and angry kind. My assumption is that the author intended Danner to be a foil to Tuck's pluckiness and youthful idealism. Intended being the operative term. Danner essentially comes across as a three-foot emo, and has few if any redeeming qualities, other than being Tuck's best friend and a member of the author's preferred species (re: Warrows).
If Danner is one-dimensional, than Laurelin is no-dimensional. The only characteristic provided this character is her excessive beauty. And because she is beautiful, she is good and everyone loves her more than life itself, including Tuck. Nearly every time Laurelin speaks, she carries on about her betrothed, to the point where I'm sure if the characters were talking about paint drying, she'd find a way to fit Galen into the conversation. No seriously, Laurelin is defined one hundred percent by her constant repining for Galen. And everybody loves her for it. Yeah, makes no sense. Basically, she's a representation of perfect good and is meant to provide emotional imperative to the actions of the book's male characters. I'm no feminist, but even I have to roll my eyes on this one.
Galen is an idiot. And the successor to the throne. I weep for the people of Mithgar. My guess is that Galen is based on Aragon, given the former's military prowess and "leader's bearing." Three fourths of the book are devoted to talking about the guy, but we don't meet him until the end. That's fine. It's a time-proven writing technique and there is nothing inherently wrong with that. And provided that this is a fantasy story, I also cannot fault the author for using this technique to only define the character's military abilities and nothing more. Hey, it is what it is. But once we meet Galen, it becomes apparent quickly that the guy is lacking in wisdom and intelligence. Just as Laurelin's definition is inextricably tied to Galen, Galen's motivation is nothing without Laurelin. To put this into context, we have the successor to the throne abandoning his people to go on a wild chase in the midst of an apocalyptic invasion, pursuing an unknown enemy force, with paper thin evidence that said force is holding Laurelin and Igon hostage. Oh, and this happens when Galen is fully aware that his father, the high king, likely died in combat. So what is this character's motivation? Is it to rise to his status as leader of liberty and good? To command the armies of light against the hordes of evil? Nope. His motivation is to place himself at great mortal risk to rescue a princess whose social and militaristic role is so inconsequential to render her pretty much useless. And he is surrounded by morons who reinforce and even encourage his behavior. Leave it to the predictability of the plot to ensure that his decision to place every living man, woman, and child at the mercy of evil will play a crucial role in the story's resolution. Some plot coupon or vital piece of information will be found along the path to rescuing Laurelin.
Finally, the book's faux-names and so forth fail to provide texture and depth to its world building effort. Do we the readers really gain anything from having a "wagon" called a "waggon?" I found it more distracting than anything else. Or having a wawgon train called a wain? (I believe that is the term. I'm away from the book at the moment.) I realize that this criticism must be tempered by the type of genre the book belongs to. It is also important to further temper the criticism by reiterating that this is a Tolkien fascimile. Still doesn't mean I found little value to the technique.
So this is the first of three books that make up the Iron Tower trilogy. I own all three (compiled into a single book, as it was originally intended to be) and have committed myself to reading the entire story. I've little reason to believe that my opinion of the story will change from now to the end, but I may find myself surprised. This is particularly true when considering that the characters' development may improve as the story unfolds, since this book is truly only the beginning as far as the three-act format is concerned. I'm not holding my breath though.