Look, guys, I don't know when I'll learn that free books on Amazon Prime are almost always terrible, but here we are. I don't know how this book has such glowing, 4-5 star reviews. Are people simple nowadays? Are we bored? Do we need help? This review might be a little unorganized because I've been busy and couldn't immediately write down my thoughts, so I'll just kind of bullet point things I didn't like and why they made this book a 1 star read for me.
-The repetition. When authors describe something in one paragraph and then say the same shit in the next, it gets really annoying and I can't help but think that the author must believe all his readers are stupid. I wish I had highlighted some examples, but at the time I was annoyed and really couldn't have been bothered. But essentially, something would be described on one page, and then completely reiterated (sometimes with almost the same words) on the next page.
-The first couple chapters reiterating that our MC is "The King's Ranger, after all." Literally. At least once in the chapter and then at the end of every chapter, we got some "Rew's the King's Ranger". He either tells characters WHO KNOW HE IS (like Anne. Buddy, she heckin' knows already), or it's hammered into our stupid little heads in descriptions. Again, it was another one of those 'does this author think we're stupid, or does he not realize he's doing it, or how did his editor (if he had one) think this was a good idea???'
-Rew. I would rather eat cardboard than read about another stale character like him. I could see the character he was trying to be, but it all just kind of flopped. Tying back into how much I hated the constant repetition, I also really hated how many times the reader was told he would not get roped into the Investiture, or how many times Rew would say it aloud. Bruh. We get it. You don't want to get roped into it, but we know you're going to anyway.
Also, how many times did he go up against seemingly overwhelming odds, only to come out victorious and unscathed? (except towards the end. He gets minorly hurt or something. It was all very unrealistic to me.) He'd have little battles against 7 or more creatures and would totally overpower them like the Gary Stu he is.
The dialogue and characters. They all felt kind of the same to me, because they all had the same voice/way of speaking. It was all copy-paste to me. No one really stood out from the others. I feel if the author spent a little more time on making them unique, and took more time with how they interacted and built their relationships, the death of a certain character in the end would have hit a little harder. But again, said character had little page time and didn't really interact with anyone, so it was easy to just shrug it off.
-The world/lore dumping. I get that, as an author creating a fantasy world, that you absolutely have to get your ideas into the story somehow, but there's a better way to do it than just dumping everything into character's dialogue. It's extremely unrealistic for two characters who have long been established in the world, to have to describe to one another things they should definitely know just because the reader wouldn't know. That just takes me out of the story.
-Zaine.... Zaine.... You could have been a good character, but in the end you were SO HECKIN STUPID. She trusted shady people, got multiple people killed, and not a single person batted an eye. I just can't even.
-The whole entire brothel scene. I cringed so hard. It was awful. Truly, terribly, awful. I never want to relive a scene like this again.
-There were some really weird descriptions in this book. An example: "but her eyes looked like short bits of broken glass". What even? I can't even begin to know what that means. It's just odd.