Repetitive to the point that j started to maladaptively dream
I am happy that Alex has shared his story. In fact he repeats it several times throughout the book. The book has good intentions, but literally repeats itself in back to back paragraphs then followed up by a two page chapter. The tests come at the very end, so you front load about Chris, Alex and the dream violinist to the point that by the time you do get to the tests, I personally was annoyed and had started to skip and skim.
Then there is the grammatical elephant in the room. Please get this formally edited. I understand you had "a high power job in NYC" but let a copy editor help you to clean it up.
You have a few noteworthy tips so I thank you for that. But constantly teasing the quiz and survey for 90% of the book is unfair and feels like a cash grab.
You've diluted your words with repetition, poor grammar and abstract storytelling that go beyond examples.
😐At the end, we don't get much analysis of what our results possibly mean. You literally end the entire book by sharing a table and bar chart depicting how others have scored on your course.
I'm disappointed and feel like I've been taken advantage of in a maladaptive nightmare.