Cut and Run • by Ridley Pearson (2005)
US Marshal Roland Larson is assigned to protect Hope Stevens while they await her placement in the witness protection program. He's also in love with her and Hope hasn't told him about their baby. Then she's whisked away into the system and Roland has no idea where she is or what name they've assigned her--she's just gone. Some 6 years later the mob is after her and the kid. The Marshal is also trying to recover a stolen list of 7,000 identities; those currently in the witness protection program, which includes the relatives and Hope.
Author Pearson has a bad habit of jumping into dialogue and scenes without explanation, leaving the reader mostly lost, at least for a time. He also seems to enjoy the use of cryptic words and slang, but OK. His analogies can particularly interesting or humorous; Not just a stick-in-the-mud, but a telephone pole and pile driven at that.
He praises his book review staff, but none of them caught the glaring errors in gun facts and technical details. One example: firing a gun does not produce the smell of cordite. The propellant, cordite was used by the British a lifetime ago and it was never used in the US, nor in handgun ammo. He's not alone in imagining the smell of cordite. Many authors, including Stephen King, have equipped their protagonists with guns that use this erroneous and acrid propellant.
I don't know if they are uninformed or they may not employ fact-checkers; maybe they just like the sound of the word.
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Note to self. This is the story where the protagonist's Glock broke after a short fall--haha. I believe it was the trigger that supposedly broke; ridiculous.